The air was tight. Rainbow Dash found herself battling a series of shallow breaths the further she snuck into the cave. Her movement was sporadic, only affording a quick dash from one cluster of equipment to the next as she endeavored to avoid being seen by the many minotaurs. Rainbow Dash didn't fear having to fight any of them, a contest she would surely lose. She knew that she could easily outfly them in a snap. However, she didn't want to mess up this one opportunity she had to figure out just what the minotaurs were up to.
She figured that Fulltrot and the other Windthrow ponies never bothered to venture into this cavern. Hushtail's villagers were simple, trusting equines. They likely dealt with the minotaurs at face value. It would have been very easy for Thunderhorn and his cohorts to take advantage of the Wintergaters' naivete. To what purpose, Rainbow Dash couldn't guess. She only knew that back in Equestria, minotaurs had proven to be less than trustworthy.
“Are we being followed?” Rockspot's breathy voice murmured from under the cloak.
“Shhh!” Rainbow Dash hissed, trying to concentrate on the path ahead. The sound of her clopping hooves was easily masked by the roar of digging equipment and steam-operated machines throughout the tunnel. She came within five feet of a minotaur at one point, swiftly darting past him as she made her way even deeper into the tunnel. The further she went, and the darker the cavern got, the greater the enormity of the tunnel appeared to her. She figured that the minotaurs had shredded the hole of rock open in the south side of the quarry. However, if she didn't know better, she'd guess that the extraordinary length of this chamber had been forged by something far more powerful than the minotaurs. Even from her current vantage point, she couldn't see where the tunnel ended. It was a massive corridor too, at least forty feet tall and eighty feet across.
“Are they building a mineshaft or a parasprite collider?!”
“A what?” Rockspot whimpered.
Rainbow Dash sighed. “Never mind. This thing is leading way too deep. I don't see any signs of the magic crystals or—” She paused in mid-speech, squinting across the way.
“What is it, Miss Dash?”
“I'm... not sure,” Rainbow Dash stammered. She peered over a box of crates at the opposite wall of the tunnel from her. The corridor so far had been a straight horizontal cut into the earth. The walls were slim and immaculate, save for one spot that featured a doorframe. A caged lid to a shallow partition lingered within the edge of a torch's light. “There's some sort of... cell across the way.”
“Cell?”
Rainbow Dash gulped. “I'm hearing voices from it.” Indeed, her ears were twitching, for a series of breathy conversations were emanating from the chamber on the opposite end of the tunnel. What was more, they sounded higher in pitch than the towering minotaurs laboring and sweating across the lengths of the tunnel. “Hmmm... I wonder.”
“What?”
“Can it, Spotty,” she grunted, glancing left and right. “We're cutting across the way.” She waited patiently as three minotaurs walked by, carrying over their shoulders a series of heavy metal tubes. Once they were gone, she held her breath, crouched low, and darted across the lit lengths of the tunnel like a cloaked weasel. She shimmied over to the wall on the far side and crouched behind a stack of rusted tools. Another minotaur walked by. Rainbow Dash waited and waited. Once the area was clear, she slid over towards the door, held her breath, stood up on her hind limbs, and peered inside.
Several faces gasped as soon as hers appeared from beyond the bars. A group of soot-stained, emaciated earth ponies bounced back from the doorframe and stood—trembling—within the space of a claustrophobic prison cell.
Rainbow Dash blinked. “Well, snap.” She lowered her hood, glanced behind her, and leaned into the bars of the door. “Pssst... Hey there, guys. How's it hoofin'?”
“Who in the blazes are you?!” a stallion exclaimed.
“I'm on the outside looking in, which is the least I can say about you dudes. What gives? These minotaurs have you as prisoners?”
“As slaves,” a mare spoke. Like the majority of the prisoners, she was well over Rainbow Dash's age. “They make us do menial labor as they dig up this blasted passageway to the machine.”
“Machine?!” Rainbow Dash made a face. She glanced behind her once more and replied, “The heck are you talking about? I thought these minotaurs were just digging up rocks!”
“We don't know what they want. All we know is that we're here and there are six more working deeper into the tunnel,” another pony explained. “They barely feed us, and they beat us up when we don't have the energy to work. If we don't get out of here, we'll die!”
“Hey. Dying isn't cool. Lemme see if I can get you out.”
“They'll see you if you continue to stand there!” A stallion hissed. “Don't let yourself get caught too!”
“Hey, chillax! This isn't my first time sneaking around a tunnel full of minotaurs!”
“Really?”
“Well, no. But everything's easier if I choose to believe so.” Rainbow Dash squatted and removed her cloak. Rockspot gasped and clung to her from where he sat in her saddlebag. “Easy there, squirt,” she patted his head, then glanced up at the door. “I'll get the lock broken, get myself inside, and then we can plot something out.”
“I don't get it! Who are they?” Rockspot nervously exclaimed.
“Ponies who need our help.”
“But—”
“No buts about it. Hoof me my hatchet.”
Rockspot reached into the other side of the saddlebag and pulled the metal blade out. Rainbow Dash took the handle of it in her mouth. She paused, glanced for nearby minotaurs, and then leaned forward. With a few expert swings, she hacked and whacked at the lock on the wooden door. Surprisingly, it didn't take very long. The door swung loose. She dove in and shut it behind her just as a pair of minotaurs walked by at about twenty feet's distance.
“Hopefully they won't notice long enough for us to plan an escape,” Rainbow said, her voice echoing across the small chamber. The air was foul with pony sweat and refuse. She ignored it as she faced the group. “Just how many ponies are we talking about here—?”
“You're a pegasus!” One of them gasped.
“Heh. Yeah, well, not everypony's perfect.”
“You could have flown out of here and saved yourself at anytime!”
“Hey! That's not how I roll, okay?” She briefly frowned. “I came here because—”
“Wait, you came here?” Another gawked at her. “Does that mean they know we're still alive?”
“Does who know?” Rainbow Dash made a face. “As far as I know, I'm doing this freelance!”
“We thought that Hushtail had sent for us!” A mare exclaimed, close to tears. “We had hoped they had figured out that the monsters were taking us here—”
“Whoa whoah whoah—Hold the lettuce!” Rainbow Dash waved her forelimbs, squinting across the dark cell. “You mean you guys are all from Windthrow? The monsters took you here?” She plopped breathlessly down on her haunches. “Hushtail and Sladesteed told me that ponies were killed!”
“Some of us were,” an elder pony said, his head hanging gravely along his companions. “But most of us have been brought here over the past decade to perform slave labor. We don't know where the monsters go to once they've dropped us off. It's almost as if they disappear into nothingness.”
Rainbow Dash felt a dizzy sensation as she remembered the silver strip in Thunderhorn's grip when she first spied upon the quarry. “Yeah... Fancy that.”
“You mean you're all from my village?” Rockspot spoke up.
“Who... Who's that?” A mare pointed.
“He's why I'm here.” Rainbow Dash said. “One of the monsters swept him up and carried him north over the mountain range. I chased him all night. We're both lucky he didn't end up with one of you dudes or else I might never have found this place—”
“Rockspot?” A voice said from the shadows.
Rainbow Dash and the young colt glanced up.
An aged stallion with a messy, brown mane wandered out of the shadows. His limbs were malnourished, and his cheeks were hollow. However, upon the sight of the foal, his eyes lit up.
“Is that you?”
The colt blinked curiously at him.
“Oh Rockspot!” The stallion stumbled over and reached his forelimbs out. “It is you! It is you—”
“Whoah there, buddy!” Rainbow Dash held him back with a frown. “Let's not get too friendly. Just who are you?”
He merely blinked at her. Fidgeting, he knelt low and smiled into Rockspot's eyes. “When you were just four, I gave you silver horseshoes for Hearth's Warming. You were so proud to show them off. We walked around the village, and the fog was actually clear for a day. You saw the stars for the first time. You started crying, and you didn't know why. I explained the cosmos to you, and that's when you told me you wanted to become an astronomer.”
Rockspot blinked, and suddenly his eyes went wide. “Daddy?”
The old stallion sniffled, his lips curving. “You look so strong, Rockspot. I was scared I'd never see your cutsie-nera.”
“Daddy!” Rockspot struggled, squirmed, but ultimately plopped out of Rainbow's saddlebag. He scurried across the room and threw himself into the stallion's forelimbs. “You're alive! Mommy said you were dead! Red Turnip wouldn't believe it...”
“I'm here, son. I'm so sorry I couldn't be with you these last two years.”
Rockspot sniffled and nuzzled the stallion's cheek. “I'm so happy you're alive. I'm so glad Miss Dash found you!”
The stallion gulped and held the foal close. “I'm glad too, son.” He smiled and glanced over at Rainbow Dash with teary eyes.
Rainbow blinked. She felt a hoof tapping her shoulder. She turned around... and saw a horn. “Uhhh...”
“You...” A pale unicorn with a limp shuffled exhaustedly towards her. “You're not... from around Wintergate, are you?”
“Can't say that I am, buddy.” Rainbow Dash looked him over. “And something tells me you're not from Windthrow like the rest of these poor saps.”
The unicorn slowly shook his head. Coughing, he winced and said, “My name is Astral. I'm from the College of Southstone. Nearly twelve years ago, I was part of a band of unicorns charged with transporting mystical artifacts across Wintergate. Halfway to our destination, we were raided by these minotaurs.”
Rainbow Dash's eyes darted briefly around the room. “Where are the other unicorns?”
“Two of my cohorts are part of the labor team in the tunnels right now,” Astral said. “The three of us are the last survivors. The rest died over the last decade of imprisonment.”
Rainbow's ears drooped. “Yeesh. I'm really sorry to hear that.”
“Tell me, did you see the chaos strips?”
Rainbow's coat hairs stood on end. “Chaos... strips...?”
“I suspect the minotaurs have perverted them with dark energy,” Astral said. “Undoubtedly they've been using them to send the monsters all over this part of Wintergate.”
“Did...” Rainbow Dash's eyes narrowed. “Did you say the minotaurs are the ones sending the monsters?”
“Yes. Isn't it obvious?”
Rainbow Dash glanced over her shoulder. She stared at all of the haggard, life-sapped ponies huddled around the tearful reunion of Rockspot and his father.
She turned back to look at the unicorn. “Listen, Asteroids—”
“Astral.”
“Whatever.” She swallowed a lump down her throat and said, “Tell me all that you know.”
le derp. And so the mystery begins to unravel.
Those rotten, cow-faced lunatics! Swindling, no-good dirty sons of meat packets! Abusing an entire town for what, a decade or so? Stealing their people and forcing them to dig out some infernal machine? Brandishing fear and deception as tools to construct some dark, foreboding horror?
Wait... that almost sounds like non-fiction, if you consider some of the war-torn parts of our own world. Now THAT'S frightening
I LOVE THIS STORY!
That confirms it, obviously. THOSE MINOTAURS ARE UP TO NO GOOD!
welp. guess confirmed.
I must say, I really like your sass-tastic version of Dash. Its refreshing. Also, I don't know if its intentional or not, but her randomness makes me feel that Discord has an influence on her even with her Harmony necklace on. I dunno if your Dash is just more flippant/off the wall than the show's portrayal, or if you meant for her remarks to resemble Discord's kind of humor intentionally, but whatever you're doing, it works for me Anywho, I think I can manage a few more chapters before I throw in the towel for tonight...
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I never thought of it like that, but that totally makes sense.
BTW that was the final test, welcome to Mensa
IIIIIt's Dashie's evaluation time!
So in this chapter, mine and many other readers' suspicions were confirmed - the minotaurs are the minds behind the bat monsters. Apparently, they've been taking Windthrowians out to these mineshafts for slave labor, as I suspected. There are also three unicorn slaves whose caravan was raided by the minotaurs years ago. One of them mentioned the chaos rift - the aforementioned landmark where Luna said Celestia was meditating. I am sensing a looooong evaluation time for the next chapter, seeing as how this unicorn is going to explain what she knows to Dash. If we're lucky, we might even get some answers as to what this chaos rift is. These are my thoughts so far.
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7 weeks since last comment? Come now!
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Daysweeks since last comment: 3dosint all the the city's names sownd like they came from skyrim, colage of winterhold, College of Southstone
Looks like there's going to be plenty of steak dinner soon.
Finally! Good, clear answers! Anyway, totally called the minotaure thing. I can't wait to hear all about it, so Dashie can save the day and be a hero. Then we can return to the actual plot of 'Rainbow Dash flies east'.
It seems that Dash is either part Time Lord or just normal with how she constantly says names wrong.
Uhh...how, exactly? The show has given us one minotaur. And all Iron Will did was offer an assertiveness training seminar. Fluttershy got way too wrapped up in his advice, but that was her own fault, not his. And when she refused to pay him, he went away without making trouble. So how, precisely, is that untrustworthy? He didn't screw Fluttershy or anyone else out of anything.
Now, the minotaurs in THIS story, yeah, they're criminals. But the one minotaur we've ever seen in Equestria was an honest dude. I just felt the need to point that out.
Cute-ceañera. It's a pun on the Spanish quinceañera. Also...I'm pretty sure only fillies have those. Because quinceañera is the celebration of a girl's fifteenth birthday, and thus her "coming of age" as a young woman.
I've been pretty slow with reading this, thanks to reading all sorts of other things at the same time, but it's nice to have some hints at least, even if even more questions have been thrown up at the same time. I'm still waiting for Rainbow to be cornered in some way and asked straight up, "Where are you going?" I don't expect a straight answer, but it's stretching credulity a bit that she hasn't even been asked by anyone actually persistent.
I'm enjoying reading it more now, though. The writing style has settled down noticeably, without the irritatingly overblown language of the early chapters. The minotaurs feel a bit more like (more intelligent) Diamond Dogs than Iron Will in the way they behave. Spotty is either going to be an adorable long-term companion or unbearably insufferable before long. And sheesh, Dash, why don't you just eat the apple already? A normal apple would have gone bad by now. That, and the green book that's barely been mentioned since the start, intrigue me.
Did NOT see that coming. Great story so far. Rockspot's adorable. I want to spank and cuddle him at the same time.
Some cows need to die.
No, no! Tell me all about this collider device!
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If they do I'll just assume they were the ones that talked less than the others.
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True but Iron Will's assertiveness training was little more than a how to be a bully seminar; assertiveness doesn't mean attacking people or in his case goats. He was giving bad advice that just happened to obtain the same end result. Not criminal but not trustworthy either.
Wait a second! Could this be the same tunnel Sladesteed showed Rainbow back in chapter 43 "Expanse"?
Looks like Rainbow has some asses to kick.
Is this, perhaps, spelled wrong?
So the Minotaur's use the monsters to attack Windthrow, foalnapping its citizens, and then have the Windthrowers pay them for stuff to repel said monsters....For what end, guess we will find out soon.
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Windthrow children were born into this life of suffering. Little Rockspot has likely spent his entire life in fear that some strange, unknowable monster might come and steal him from his family and end his short life, while an even more grim reality of slavery, then death loomed on the horizon.
I don't know what this "machine" is, but it better be fucking good, Thunderhorn.
Late to the party.
Seen a few other places reference this one, so figured I'd give it a look.
BIG question though.
Has NO-ONE else considered why Dash knows of a Parasprite Supercollider? Twilight?!? WHAT THE HAY WERE YOU THINKING, FIRING TWO PARASPRITES AT EACH OTHER AT RELATIVISTIC VELOCITIES?!?
So, conspiracy opens up. Time to make some noise.
Dang it, Discord! Put some clothes on, none of us needed to see that!