It had been nearly a day, but there was still debris left over from the last entanglement with the invading creatures. While all the citizens of Windthrow were busy chatting, haggling, trading, and carrying on with their own little businesses, one pony was left to clean up what remained of the mess.
Gold Petals sighed as she grabbed several chunks of loose wood and tossed them into a wagon behind her. A splintery pile of junk had formed in the back of the cart. She added to this refuse slowly, lethargically, as if begging for time to slow down around her.
She came upon a large, overturned bucket. Reaching for it, she paused. Gold Plate looked up and gazed across the central courtyard of Windthrow. Across the way, an old mare and an old stallion were trotting side by side, carrying saddlebags full of mining wares. They chatted with a local blacksmith, their faces shadowed and serious.
A deep breath came out of Gold Petals. She sat back on her haunched, pulled her hood down, and ran a hoof through her short blonde threads. She briefly looked like a pony three times her years, and equally as dull.
“Are they your parents or something?”
Gold Petals jumped back onto her hooves with a gasp. She winced, rolled her eyes, and growled over her shoulder. “You really gotta stop doing that.”
“Can't help it.” Rainbow Dash hovered down behind her. “I think in three dimensions.”
“Uh huh...”
“Nothing against earth ponies. If the sky was made of turnips, I'm sure they'd think beyond two dimensions as well—”
“Did you find out anything from your trip to the mine?”
“Only that it's a mine and it's deep and there's this weird—” Rainbow Dash paused, gulped, and said, “I met Fulltrot there.”
“Funny.” Gold Plate turned her flank to the wooden bucket. “I thought you went down there to talk to Sladesteed.”
“Well. Y-yeah. I kinda did...”
“And what became of that?”
“He pretty much blew a lot of hot air. I guess it comes in handy way deep in the mines. Heh.” Rainbow Dash smirked tiredly into the shadows of the nearby alleyway. “So, like. Seriously. Are they your parents?”
“Mmmf...” Gold Petals picked a few shredded pieces of rope and tossed them into the cart.
Rainbow Dash raised an eyebrow. “Well?”
“Yeah...” Gold Petals muttered. “For what it's worth.”
Rainbow Dash leaned her head curiously to the side. “That's a weird thing to say. I thought earth ponies were crazy-respectful of their folks and stuff.”
“Aren't all ponies?”
“I never knew my parents,” Rainbow Dash said. “But that's kind of typical for pegasi. It's hard to make a homestead in the clouds. And... heh...” She winked at Gold Petals playfully. “When you can fly, it's a lot easier to get away with one night hovers.”
“Guess that explains a lot about you.”
Rainbow Dash blinked. “What's that supposed to me?”
Gold Petals merely paced around the cart. “I figure that I don't need a family. I can take care of myself. Besides, who needs a bunch of old horses that will just make you feel bad?”
Rainbow Dash looked thoughtfully at her. “Did you guys have a falling out?”
“That assumes I was anywhere high to fall from to begin with,” Gold Petals murmured. She frowned Rainbow Dash's way. “Why do souls in this world have to be all bothersome and judgmental of other souls?”
“Cuz if we bothered and judged ourselves all the time, we'd get bored really quick?”
“Is that all you ever think about? What's boring versus what's exciting?”
“If it helps me to think about it all the time, then sure!” Rainbow Dash said. “What gets you going on your own road so long, even if it's just your own road and nopony else's?”
“I'm not like you.”
“That's kind of why I asked the question, don't you think?”
Gold Petals shifted where she stood. She gazed lonesomely at the two ponies across the courtyard. “It's not like they don't know I'm here, that I still work for Fulltrot. I guess a part of me just hopes that someday they'll come to their senses, that they'll accept me for who I am... for what I am...”
Rainbow Dash opened her mouth, but paused. She bit her lip briefly, feeling the weight of her saddlebag, and a certain golden delicious fruit that she had left inside there days ago. Clearing her throat, she decided to say, “Well, Sladesteed doesn't know anything about where the creatures are coming from, and there certainly aren't any of them inside the caves. Hushtail doesn't seem to want to try and learn more about these monsters. And poor Fulltrot is caught in the center, too weak and too old to properly do anything his wisdom tells him to.”
“Yeah...?” Gold Petals squinted at her. “Care to tell me something I don't know?”
“Is there any reason to?” Rainbow Dash said, her wings flexing. “This town just doesn't know how to pick itself up. I've never been to a place where so many ponies are so split on what to do or where to go that they instead decide to hang out exactly where they are and let the parasprites hit the fan. It's crazy. It's like you ponies are going nowhere. And, no matter what I try or do, I don't think there's any hope in this craziness changing—”
“You're leaving?”
Rainbow Dash blinked at Gold Petals.
She looked at her intently. Her expression was long. “You're leaving, aren't you?”
“Look, I didn't say that—”
“But you're thinking it,” Gold Petals declared. She pointed. “You haven't even taken your saddlebag off since you got here. Don't tell me it's as important as that gold pendant around your neck.”
“I just... I just don't think that...” Rainbow Dash found herself at a loss for words. She avoided Gold Petals' gaze for a while, exhaled deeply, and said in a low voice. “There's nothing for me here. This town, these ponies—you're all spectacular and stuff, but you're not the ponies I'm loyal to.”
“Then why tell me this?” Gold Petals asked sharply. “Why'd you come here to see me?”
“Because...” Rainbow Dash shifted where she stood. She heard Gold Petals' footsteps coming closer, and she made an even greater effort to look away. “Well... uhm... you t-took care of me and stuff, y'know, after those monsters banged me up good.”
Gold Petals was two breaths' distance at this point. “Is that the only reason?” she asked. It was a breathy tone, neither angry nor kind.
Rainbow Dash bit her lip. She tilted her head towards Gold Petals' slightly. If she moved a single inch, their necks would make contact. “Yeah...” She eventually said. “That's the only reason.”
The air was quiet for a moment. The mists parted ways and were filled in once more.
When Gold Petals spoke, it was in a low voice, like the hanging of her head. “You know how you said that there's nothing for you here?”
Rainbow finally looked at her. “Yeah?”
Gold Petals glanced up, and her lip quivered. “Is there anything for you anywhere, Rainbow Dash?”
She hesitated responding. Before the moment could become too stretched, there was a rattling noise to their flanks. Rainbow Dash and Gold Petals turned and squinted into the alleyway.
“What the...”
“Where'd that come from?”
“I... I think something's under that bucket.”
“What bucket—?”
With a shrieking noise, the wooden container exploded. A lone, bruised creature erupted into the air of Windthrow, streaking straight towards Rainbow Dash's skull.
You have been ambushed. Roll for initiative.
Sweet Celestia! Roll a 20! ROLL A 20!
I had this recommended to me by a friend, and I must say that this exceeded my rather high expectations. You do remarkable work. Everything in this story is perfect, from the length to the pacing to the very essence of Dash herself.
I haven't finished reading yet, but so far this is a brilliant piece. Well done.
Is this shipping I sense? Oh come on! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Rainbow_Dash.png
Annoyance at perceived shipping aside, oh snap! Something came from the bucket! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_unsuresweetie_flip.png
IIIIIt's Dashie's evaluation time!
So in this chapter, Dash meets up with Gold Petals and basically says that she will be leaving Windthrow soon. We learn that Gold Petals and her parents have had a bit of a falling out, which could amount to something later in the story. However, Dash cannot leave until all is right in Windthrow, naturally. And so, the latest in a series of convenient plot devices ambushed her from underneath a bucket, presumably to keep her in Windthrow. These are my thoughts so far.
-MASH
Dun-dun-DUUUUUUUUUUNNNNN!!
1048720 Seriously. This is starting to piss me off.
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Dem D&D references.
1359705 It really does pay to be specific sometimes dude.
I am dying for the romance to get more light, every time it's so close something else happens. In this case, a creature ambushes them and attacks Rainbow. I'm going to assume this is a bat spider thing.
Also, I failed in my goal again. I'm not going to set anymore, I can't keep them.
-FierceRainbow
Dat pony love.
Rainbow Dash is a necromancer.
Oh goddammit, ship blocked by interrupting bat creature.
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This has to do something with why she left Ponyville. It just has to.
Lines like this always feel weird with the benefit of hindsight, given we did eventually meet Rainbow's folks in canon - though there was obviously no way to know that back in 2012.
Is this romance. Everyone else thinks so, but my years Anime Experience has taught me that this could easily just be gals being pals. Also I ship lesbian couples way too easily.
Eh... Maybe I'm just jaded.
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On the other hand, given what we know about them, and what we know about what is ahead, is there any way they wouldn't fuck up the situation worse? The words "cringe comedy" come to mind in that situation.
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edit: sorry, quoted wrong comment, fixed
Not anymore I don't think
That might be part of the reason she's on this journey in the first place, in fact. After what sounds like the death of the other Elements, it really sounds like she gave up on any /real/ attachments. That's the feeling I've gotten so far, anyway.
Dang it, bat monster! You cockblocking brothertrucker!