• Member Since 19th Aug, 2014
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Ardent Wing


Sometimes, the characters that we create take on a life of their own in the minds of others. When this happens our characters truly become living things.

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It is the first night after Twilight Sparkle and her friends save the unnamed town from the cutie markless rule of Starlight Glimmer, and Night Glider finds herself reflecting on the events that had lead her to this night.

Sometimes all a pony needs, is a reason.

AUTHOUR'S NOTE: Did you like the story? Leave a comment!

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Technical Review: I did not spot any mistakes in spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Thumbs up for that.


I wonder how many other ponies in Larsontown/Equalitown/whatever you want to call it felt the same as your version of Night Glider.

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Actually, I kinda wanted to explore that.

I wanted to write several one offs discussing the backgrounds and motivations of the ponies of that town. Of course, nothing I present is canon (unless the character does have a discussed back story) but it is fun to speculate about things like that.

Glad you enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

This story is just so powerful! The way you portrayed Night Glider was really sweet, considering she's probably the least characterised pony of the new bunch. And your philosophy between right and wrong also wasn't half bad. Good job!

That was so deep...

All this needs is a cover art, but this really made me :twilightsmile:. Faved!

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Why, thank you very much:twilightsmile:

Wonderful story and I loved how you tried to explain why ponies would move to the town in the first place!

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Thank you for your appreciation. I enjoy trying to almost flesh out aspects of Equestria that we see in the show.

Well you wanted comments and this is what I have got: I wasn't originally certain if the scene with the arguing family was in the present or the past. Thought the terse might be a typo, and later on it might have even been inconsistent. It was the past, right?

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The cottage part was in the present from Night Gliders' point of view, but she was remembering her own past at the time. If you see something in the writing that may be a typo, please point it out, so that I can fix it.

And thanks for the comment! :twilightsmile:

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