After his defeat at the Crystal Kingdom, Sombra has been revived but has different intentions of what he's going to do. What is his plan, if any? How will he react to what's happened?
Ispired by the IDW five-week comic series Fiendship is Magic issue no.1 which gave us some back story on Sombra and the big reveal that he is, indeed, still alive. I hope you enjoy!
Rated teen for language.
More please
Seems really nice...
Now I'm faving this and liking this so don't disappoint scribe
Ever-vigilant
Hawk
(No really this seems like it can turn out great)
SOMBRA STORY? FAV
Great story.
This chapter... I like It.
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5868367 Are you pruposefully trying to kill me?
5868561
Nope, I need more chapters u_u
make more, you are good at this
Seems promissing, and you are even using the new backstory. Great.
5872553 So I take it you read the comics then?
5872607 sooo moarrr
5872607 no, wikied the whole thing. Interesting premise and gives people an interesting angle to work with.
PARDON ME AS I GUSH. OK, so I love what you've done with this and I am rather interested to see how you're going to manipulate the comic canon to make this story your own. I wonder how Sombra's going to act and how open he'll be?
Sounds cool so far
Great chapter.
MOAR um plz
5918371 In due time.
-TheNightShade
5918419 but...but......but.......but.........but......
5918503 Trying to prep for my Finals and then I'll be able to shower everone with stories and chapters!
-TheNightShade
5918844 I hate tests, school, and homework they're evil!
5918844 A tear? A TEAR!!! Sombra doesn't cry......and he gave in way more quickly than he should've
5919188 Or is he finally owning up to his mistakes?
-TheNightShad
5919870 nope he didn't make any mistakes but still if he supposedly has no heart/soul and is a tyrant he gave up AWFULLY FAST but still like the story
5919883 All will be explained.
-TheNightShade
More please
6159909 I'll release more, just (puts glasses on) hold your horses. YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Well that......escalated quickly
6168735 (insert over used Ron Burgundy meme here)
A little... speedy in the pacing and development, but an interesting and oddly sweet story in my opinion.
This was cute, but too short, too quickly paced. It looked like there were a few world building things too, but you didn't really explain things.
Maybe someday you could re-write this? But until then
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ISWYDT.