Moderator of Protect Celestia. Aside from that I'm a prereader/writer who farts about this site to an excessive degree. Currently have three stories going at the moment.
You know that fan-fiction you typed last week? It's a part of the multiverse. So is the main canon of the show, as well as every single variation of the Equestria we know and love.
In the endless worlds of the multiverse, every possible alternate Equestria is explored.
And every single one of those worlds is in mortal peril.
That's where the Order of Destiny comes in.
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The audience demands moar.
Any story that undoes cupcakes in the opening gets a follow.
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliantly done. I'm honestly excited to hear who writes the next chapter. Oh and by the way the story picture is awesome.
pones - ponies
“Well, no use putting t off any longer. - “Well, no use putting it off any longer.
Thats all the grammar mistakes I noticed. Nice job Chaotic Dreams! Scoot and RD are pleased with you!
Looks pretty interesting, I'll be following this
“Well, no use putting t off any longer. Might as well give these ponies a show.”
Gah! Curse my stupid 'i' key!
Anyway, I'm glad to see this up on FiMfiction. Awesome choice of story pic and nice description, Chaotic.
Anyway, one thing I noticed is there are a few places where a horizontal rule needs to be to signify page breaks. I know FiM tends to ignore them when the fic is first uploaded so I think it needs to be done manually.
“For the Princesses! Come at me you foals! I’ll show you how a REAL pony fights!”
More than a few of you thought of this when reading it, but in truth you have NO idea how close Slate Bulwark came to just saying img38.imageshack.us/img38/2706/comeatmeg.jpg
OOOO! The possibilities! Just think about it! The multi-verse is where my imagination draws its energy and gets me so many ideas
! Now I'm wondering how they would react if they saw one of my characters, namely a favorite, The Psychopath. Ohoho. Discord would love to meet him.
Oh Celestia! How do I even start to compare?! Curse you 585809, curse you and your great writing!!
Now I need to practice my prose before I can even hope to write for this...
591272 Thanks for the compliment, but in truth following should be rather easy. It is a collab after all, so we can all help out. Plus it's not like we roped in some of the insanely popular authors like Device Heretic, shortskirtsandexplosions, and determamfidd. They'd overshadow everyone just by being on board.
591481 At least I can ask and share samples when I want to.
Thanks for the confidence.
Hmm...
Doctor Who meets Mission Impossible meets Star Trek
I like what we have so far. We're pulling a team together, like some sort of Avengers squad.
Tracking.
602697 Kinda. Only with more ponies and interdimensional travel.
A savage jab from the earth pony’s knife prevented her from going into that final sleep. No, they weren’t lying to her. In the corner of the darkened room the disturbance swirling in the air continued to get stronger.
I must remember to never make corrections so soon after waking up I can't see straight. That is some pretty awkward wording. Could you change it to "Prevented her from falling asleep." or something similar, Chaotic?
Wow, took me awhile to finally getting around to reading this. So glad I did, this story is awesome so far. Love the idea of alternate universes actually being real and an entire story centered around that is awesome. Really looking forward to seeing more. Very great start to the story!
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Sorry, just got around to working on this comment. Sure, I'll switch it up.
Great second chapter. Expected an interaction like that between Scoots and Rainbow, but thought Twilight would explain something like that to her. Love that there are hundreds of the same ponies, liked seeing what happened to that particular Twilight. Pretty sad. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Attention all readers! At the part where Rainbow Dash is talking to Discord, the conversation is supposed to go like this:
"Got it from a unicorn with a stubby horn who had a penchant for sacrifice and an exiled pegasus. Both of them were arguing about clipboards.
Apologies for the horrifyingly horrible mistake!
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No worries, great chapter btw
Now I'm trying to figure out how LU is going to fit into the meeting. Shard is effectively TU's meat puppet when she needs to speak to the ponies.
Okay, I'll say it.
Red Queen = Anti-Monitor + Cthulhu
What? We were all thinking it!
And Rainbow's a cyborg! Didn't see THAT coming.
nobrony else has noticed this. SITHIS. OMG THE DREAD FATHER HIMSELF IS AMONG OUR RANKS!
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Also: Rainborg -
Think about it
Well, this is certainly an interesting take on the greater ponyverse. Something tells me my stories are somewhere near Tenebrus Ultra's colon, though...
Interesting concept. There are a lot of grammar points I want to jump on, but my biggest complaint by far is that the transition from one POV to another is not broken up very well. I had to go back a few times to see where things went from Rainbow's POV to Scootaloo's to Shard.
Even an asterisk between graphs would be something.
Same as last time--solid idea, but some minor grammar issues.
Also, my suspension of disbelief was stretched when Discord says he ran out of material. The OoD has access to an entire multiverse and consists of a building the size of the solar system--if they have the resources to build that, how could they run out of life-saving upgrade?
For that matter, couldn't Discord just Chaos more into existence?
755076 As for the first point, I don't know why they'd run out of material. To be honest I think that part slipped past me. As to the second because chaos.
Brilliant
hmmmm, now what will Dashie have in store...
cooooool!
Like the direction this is going. Didn't expect them to be fighting so soon, but then again it makes good training. Looking forward to the next chapter.Go Rainbow Dash Go!
The Paladins had won, and Discord was going to spend the next several months in therapy. He would forever remember this day as the first and only time he had and ever would experience what it felt like to be sane.
And it was awful.
I cracked up!
FUCKING MORE
Really good guys. Still wish I didn't have to pull out of it but I see it went well.
Make that implying.
Over all, I'm glad how this chapter turned out. Was pretty fun too.
1177388 Can't help but feel annoyed whenever I see this on any story. Someone goes to the trouble of writing a story and the only reaction some people have is to leave a single emote.
Preemptive jimmies rustled pic.
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1178098 srry what i meant was
Lol this story rocks you get STACHE!!! 
That fight was yesterday?!?!
Feels like two months ago.
Good chapter see you when you update!
Pinkie Pie(s) run intelligence? That strangely makes sense.
Oh, and:
Don't look at me like that. It fits.
1202035 God, that song was so damn trippy. Close but less elephants and more pony. Also why won't anyone freaking comment on Scoot's dream?!
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Because we already knew she has problems and it just reinforced it?
1211227 Oh. Still that's the first time i have written something like that so some feedback about it would be nice. Was it effective, scary? Or did it just come off as corny?
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I'd say it was pretty jarring at least
1211417 In the good or bad way?
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Good.
“Young Scootaloo, you have been called upon to serve.
You're missing an " at the end.
Also, I know I have heard that somewhere before, but I can't remember where exactly.
1835903 Oops. Good catch. As for where you've heard that before, it was in the dream sequence a chapter ago.
I guess this story lost some followers?
1845360 I guess. Wasn't sure if it was because of the move over to me or if people just didn't get notifications of it updating.
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Well that sucks.
Well, I am gonna stick with this story, I like it so far, and can't wait for more!
1845656 Thanks, mate. Glad you're sticking with it!