6445308 Sorry it took so long to get to this (and all the other responses). This is, wow. I had a lot of this in my head while planning and writing, either deliberately or just subconscious character stuff, and seeing that it all came through... that really makes my day. Thank you, for taking the time to write all this out.
Also, in general, it's good to see what the story has been building up to pay off well for so many people. Glad you're all liking it. There's a couple more short-ish chapters, they'll be going up one per day for a little while.
Awkward-Adorable!
I can feel the cringes from here.
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Sorry it took so long to get to this (and all the other responses). This is, wow. I had a lot of this in my head while planning and writing, either deliberately or just subconscious character stuff, and seeing that it all came through... that really makes my day. Thank you, for taking the time to write all this out.
Also, in general, it's good to see what the story has been building up to pay off well for so many people. Glad you're all liking it. There's a couple more short-ish chapters, they'll be going up one per day for a little while.
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I think you have the f-word in the wrong place there
Oh glob the awkward and uncomfortable feelings just poured from the page
I can't take the waiting. I need to know what's going to happen. Can't you see the waiting is tearing me apart!!!
In all seriousness though I am thoroughly enjoying this story