6445308 I think that when Twilight steps out of character to be herself is a sign that she wants something as well. The passion is gone in that scene replaced with confirmation and acknowledgement that they have grown closer in a new way.
Your descriptions have always been incredible, Hoof-ful, but I think this scene was on an entirely new level. I don't believe that I've ever read so sensual, powerful and even genuine a sex scene. The buildup has been fantastic and this climax doubly so.
Rarity had a mind of her own, and she moved where she will
Now this is how you pay off 23,500 words of build up! Lovely images, and the back and forth afterwards work splendidly.
mmm nice
Well that was really fucking well written.
Bravo, its rare to see sex portrayed so meaningfully.
A+
100%
5/5
How delightfully sensual this is.
I guess freaking out is Future Twilight's problem.
Can't wait for dat morning
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These two posts pretty much summed up my love for this chapter and for this story in general.
Hoof-ful, I only have one little criticism on this chapter:
It should be reins.
All in all, splendid chapter, and I eagerly look forward to the next one!
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I think that when Twilight steps out of character to be herself is a sign that she wants something as well. The passion is gone in that scene replaced with confirmation and acknowledgement that they have grown closer in a new way.
Finally getting to read this.
First: damn that payoff. Secondly, your characterization is delightful. Thirdly, that was intense. Holy cow.
Your descriptions have always been incredible, Hoof-ful, but I think this scene was on an entirely new level. I don't believe that I've ever read so sensual, powerful and even genuine a sex scene. The buildup has been fantastic and this climax doubly so.
I believe this should be 'willed'
What the hell can i say that hasn't been said already about this chapter? Well done sir. Well done indeed :)
After reading this chapter, I think I understand how the shepherd felt after meeting the real miller's daughter.
Ahem... This was very HOT. I must now retire to a VERY cold shower.
Magnificent payoff to the slow build up. Amazing story so far.