• Member Since 22nd Feb, 2015
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MidnightBlaze16


Hey, names Midnight, rock star Pegasus, artist and aspiring story writer. Profile pic by me.

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While in Manehatten visiting relatives, Rainbow Dash decides to show her friends one of her favourite places to hang out. Fluttershy however, isn't a fan. After running off, lost and terrified out of her wits, Fluttershy is found and comforted by Rainbow Dash...in a rather unusual way
Description sucks just please read, I don't mind constructive criticism but please be nice...

This is the most related image I could find, if you wanna make cover art let me know in a PM

Contains: Cute FlutterDash

Disclaimer: I don't usually write FlutterDash, I'm more of a TwiDash fan. It just fit.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

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Seems legit.

Agreed
Seems legit to me too.

So... No GG crossovers, but FNaF's one? F/#$!!!

A simple, but not bad, story. Not much to say.

Dangit. I wanted to see an animatronic come to life and eat somepony.

This story was not what I expected honestly (glad it turned out this way though) I was expecting something more....well I dont know what I was expecting :derpytongue2: Great story

I must say that this story is very well put together, though the development of feelings between Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash could've been drawn out more.

I did personally like how it was told from Fluttershy's perspective, I tend not to see that, that often, in fan fiction at the very least.

I didn't like that it was a fnaf cross over, but you using it as a setting to merely drive the plot was executed so well that I am willing to look over the fact it is a cross over of fnaf.

The summary was well put together, and didn't give away too much about the plot, so in future; don't sell yourself sort regarding writing a summary.

So in short, I found it to be a quite pleasant experience, and please keep up the great work. :pinkiehappy:

wow... that was so funny. kind of wanted to see them get trapped inside though

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