While in Manehatten visiting relatives, Rainbow Dash decides to show her friends one of her favourite places to hang out. Fluttershy however, isn't a fan. After running off, lost and terrified out of her wits, Fluttershy is found and comforted by Rainbow Dash...in a rather unusual way
Description sucks just please read, I don't mind constructive criticism but please be nice...
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Contains: Cute FlutterDash
Disclaimer: I don't usually write FlutterDash, I'm more of a TwiDash fan. It just fit.
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Seems legit.
Agreed
Seems legit to me too.
So... No GG crossovers, but FNaF's one? F/#$!!!
A simple, but not bad, story. Not much to say.
5937759 GG?
5938018 Guilty Gear u_u
Dangit. I wanted to see an animatronic come to life and eat somepony.
This story was not what I expected honestly (glad it turned out this way though) I was expecting something more....well I dont know what I was expecting Great story
I must say that this story is very well put together, though the development of feelings between Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash could've been drawn out more.
I did personally like how it was told from Fluttershy's perspective, I tend not to see that, that often, in fan fiction at the very least.
I didn't like that it was a fnaf cross over, but you using it as a setting to merely drive the plot was executed so well that I am willing to look over the fact it is a cross over of fnaf.
The summary was well put together, and didn't give away too much about the plot, so in future; don't sell yourself sort regarding writing a summary.
So in short, I found it to be a quite pleasant experience, and please keep up the great work.
wow... that was so funny. kind of wanted to see them get trapped inside though