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It's been nearly 1000 years since Princess Luna banished her sister to the sun, and her days are filled with loneliness. A chance discovery in the Everfree Forest might change all of that.

Follow the trials and tribulations of Princess Pinkamena as she makes it her mission to find out what happened to her mysterious aunt, and perhaps banish her mother's loneliness forever.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 29 )

You've peaked my interest. :pinkiesmile: To best sum up my thoughts on this: "Huh."

Hm... there are lots of "Good Luna, Bad Celestia" AUs now, but one where Luna adopts Pinkie Pie? This could get interesting.

I'll keep my eye on this, keep it up. :pinkiesmile:

Cannot stop the d'awwwws!

D'awwwwwwww...

In the description you asked for corrections I believe?

she could never find herself to cross the bride and actually enter it.
-bridge

Wooden claws were much worse than they seems,
-"seemed" Alternatively, since this is an ongoing truth, rather than belonging strictly to the past you might go with "Wooden clawsare much worse than they seem,"

that allowed her to glide gracefully alongside her mother, was Equestria's first flying earth pony.
-So Luna invented the spell in about 12 hours? Or no unicorn had ever cast that spell on an earth pony?

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Wow! That's exactly what I thought when I finished this chapter!

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Well if my little brother sees them, I'll probably need more...

Im to scared to say anythin' wrong with your conversation:fluttershysad:

It's a good story, but I'm a little confused on some points.
Earlier on in the previous chapter, Honey Crisp said Luna had a grand-niece named Pikamena, but I get the feeling that remark was aimed towards Pinkie Pie. Are there TWO pink ponies with the same name in this story?
Also, how did Luna manage to give Pinkie the EXACT same name her biological parents gave her? Did she discover it somehow? I know I'm thinking too deep about something like this, but stuff like this confuses me.

Dunno what went down in tbe comment section but I'd love to see this fic continued! :yay:

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