BONUS CHAPTER WITH THE NARRATIVE SIX
An Alicorn of Twilight Sparkle asked a Alicorn version of Trixie, "Suspension of Disbelief, where is Continuity?"
Suspension of Disbelief pointed at an Alicorn of Starlight Glimmer.
"Oh, crying in a corner again, she took a look at the heart world again, Deus Ex Machina."
"How can we have corners when we're in an infinite starscape?" Asked a disturbingly real Alicorn version of Applejack. Veins and moving muscles visible underneath her skin with individual hairs for her coat. The entire starscape shrank down to a starscape walls, ceiling and floors.
An equally realistic, but yet at the same time more beautiful, more appealing, Alicorn Rarity said, "Because we're beings of a higher plane of existence, and the use of the word 'corner' in this instance refers to the nearest moral comprehension, of Continuity pressing herself against the edges of existence as we know it away from the Heart World of our world lines."
The starscape room expanded against to beyond what the mortal eye could see.
"Deconstruction, Reconstruction, not now," said an eastern dragon version of Spike. "We're getting off topic."
"Don't worry Deus, I was able to help her."
"Most cause I showed up," Deus Ex Machina said happily.
Suspension of Disbelief leaned in close to her friend. "Relax Continuity! The Great and Powerful Trix... Suspension of Disbelief assures you that it will work out in the end. It'll be fine!"
Continuity breathed into a cosmic paper bag. "You can't know that! There's too many inconsistencies! Nothing makes sense any more!"
Suspension growled her eyes pin pricks. "IT. WILL. BE. FINE!"
Continuity smirk "Somehow, that's so much less reassuring than Amicitia's catchphrase."
Deus Ex Machina chirpped, "Wait, she has a catch phrase? What is it? Friendship is magic? But isn't that my catch phrase too?"
Continuity perked up. "That sounds like... a trivia question! I can answer that!" She opened a familiar book titled 'Facts' and opened it to a manega page showing Amicitia literally shouting "All will be well!"
A version of Gabby the griffin burst onto the scene, a blue flame on her tail that left an after image, her plumage resembling a starscape and her wings an aurora. "It's time for Inspiration to step in! That's me!" She doodled in another comic book panel where Flummox the Blue Lantern insists that Amicitia must accept a blue ring and join for appropriating their catchphrase.
Spike, the ryujin Focus shouted, "Hey! Did you just draw comics in a book!? She did, didn't she?"
Suspension of Disbelief then waved her hoof about like she was drawing attention away from something else. "Anyway, 99% of all seeming inconsistencies have some kind of explanation that makes it fit into what came before. And the smaller stuff is stuff that doesn't really matter. Plus, remember what this world runs on: Magic."
Continuity asked, "How do you say all that with a straight face?"
Suspension answered, "The hard cider helps."
Deus Ex Machina added, "Plus, there are also changelings and the mirror pool. If something doesn't feel right, blame it on one of those. Easy fix."
"THEY SLOWLY VAPORIZE SOMBRA AND SUDDENLY THEY GO BACK TO BEATING THEIR BAD GUYS THE 'kids friendly' way?! Foul! Foul!" Shouted an Alicorn of Rainbow Dash wearing dark spiked armor with chains with gritty shading.
"But isn't all nice how all these bad guys suddenly and with no foreshadowing all become nice so there no loose ends to their happily ever after?" Asked a brightly colored Alicorn Pinkie Pie with bright shading and looked like she stepped out of G3.
"Oh I agree." Deus Ex Machina nodded.
"You would," Continuity moaned.
"But is 'you can always get out of any punishment as long as you say you're sorry' really the message we want to send to children?" Said an Alicorn of Fluttershy wearing a white toga.
Discord popped in because of course he would. "Well my dear Aesop, it makes perfect sense to me! Just like the meal I threw together in three minutes."
Continuity said, "I don't think that is eatable... it is also slowly crawling away."
Discord clapped, "So now the Smooze has a new friend? I am even better than I thought! Good thing I redeemed you into seeing what an awesome friend I am."
Continuity said matter of fact, "Nice try but that is not what happened."
"At least I got you smiling again." Discord said triuphantly. "But if the Heart World had continued for one or two more seasons, it would have totally happened!"
Suspension of Disbelief herself admitted, "True but it would still be horseapples, just canon horseapples."
"I only hope the NEXT universe actually lets its Those-Who-Make actually WATCH the history of that reality from BEFORE they're brought on board to help with myself," said Continuity.
Darker and Edgier crossed her forelegs, "I just hope the show is allowed to grow up with the audience!"
"I just hope Minty is part of the cast again instead of just a five second background cameo," said Lighter and Softer.
"Oh the bright side, the comics worldline seem to be remembering the older part of everypony's adventures," said Continuity, seeing the latest adventure of Rarity teaching Cerberus how to do its job without going mad with boredom, a nice reminder that Tartarus held BAD THINGS, and that Celestia was the OWNER of this divine beast, back before they began scaling Celestia down. Continuity smiled.
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What episodes do you think contain inconsistencies?
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If I started, I'd just keep ramblings on and on, and I don't want to risk giving myself a heart attack.
Something tells me Alex and Continuity would get along with each other just fine.
And yeah. I can sympathize with your frustration with season 9. I'm not too optimistic with the next gen., though.
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Thanks for the comment!
9/10 for excellently fixing these fics. I just wish there was a comprehensive list of every fic featured in this story somewhere.
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No comment on the narrative six?
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Six? It looked like there were 7 there. After all Fluttershy was the one without a counterpart maybe? And there were a lot of characters introduced.
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Fluttershy is actually Twilight's counterpart.
This Fluttershy always wanting things to have a moral to them, while Twilight always wanting to brute force a happy ending.
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The way it's written and they're introduced it read that Spike was Twilight's counterpart.
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Spike is Gabby's.
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Sorry that chapter did not amuse you.
That was a good story. It was interesting to see a look at Amicitia's adventures across the multiverse before she destroyed herself. My favorite one was the story were Rainbow dash defeating Nightmare Eclipse followed closely by the one were Discord Sacrificed himself to save Fluttercruel from her. I'm going to miss Deus Ex Machina she was very annoying at first but overtime I grow to like her and wonder if her next appearance would mess things up or make things better.
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Happy you were able to read this from beginning to end. :-)
I gave the Pony POV Series setting the last best years of my life.