Twinkleshine has had a crush on Twilight since they were both fillies. With the help of Moondancer, will she finally be able to overcome her lingering doubts and fears and ask Twilight out? And, if she does, what then?
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Co-written with Cuttincows, but submitted on mine because you can't co-own a story.
http://www.fimfiction.net/user/cuttincows
Better cover art incoming, Cuttincows can't draw chins for flank.
Cute, so far.
You wrote a great main character, I love Twinkleshine. Would like to see more.
"I’m. So. Smooth."
Loved it! Keep up the good work!
A great chapter.
Good job.
You guys have no idea how much these comments mean to me. I live to make others happy. It's the greatest feeling in the world, and seeing everyone loving my story also makes me happy. I can finally do something right!
wait a moment 4 is not Lunas number, it is the Number of K-Colt
This should be easy.
Well it would be if you had'nt thought that, now it's gonna easier just to beat Discord again.
This story is slowly becoming one of my favorites. Thank you for writing this story
Now I have a huuuuuge craving for apple pancakes with marple syrup.
Keep it up. Shit's about to hit the fan if I'm not mistaking.
Bronydragon
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Hitting the fan? Not just yet. Read carefully where I left it off, where do you think I'm taking it?
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That's really awesome We've already begun work on Chapter 8, and will more thoroughly edit it beforehand this time. Chapter 8's gonna be long, and fun.
1393234 can't wait for more
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That's it. She's performing soon and is nervous as buck.
This either goes horribly wrong or is a ultra win for her.
I can only think of the joy and laughter I'll get from this.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Bronydragon
Caught the RvB reference....gotta admit, I laughed my ass off
Hey man. Sorry for the late read and comment. Things added up you know.
Anyhow. A nice chapter as always and embersassing Trixie in it. That was just great!
Keep it up. I really like where this is going.
Dragon
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We're hoping to. By my estimation, it's about 30-40% done. A big turn is coming, one you won't see coming, and believe me, it's gonna be big.
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Oh you.... Now I can't await the next chapter.
Dragon
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It'll come...eventually >:D
LAWL CoCK
Even As An Alicorn I Would Love To See Twilight Sparkle Get Along With Twinkleshine And Lemon Hearts More When Season 4 Of MLP:FIM Comes Around!
Aww! Twinkleshine is cute.
Hehehe I've always wanted to say this. I want MOAR!
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Oh. There is moar.
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YAYSIES!
When can I expect Chapter 9 to come?