You Must Muffin

by Liracrowned

Page 12

You’re flying along. Swooping left and right. Flying straight is hard and you wonder how anypony does it. As you fly over Ponyville you hear a sound you have heard plenty of times before. You look down at your belly. You’re hungry again. But as you’re looking down a gust of wind makes you lose control and you begin to spin.

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Comments

[Smaloki]

On page 12, shouldn't "heard of plenty times before" be "heard plenty of times before"?

[Liracrowned]

5848286 I do believe your right. Fixed it.