Frederick is the smoothest lady charmer in Fimfiction. Of all time. Seriously his date with Narrow Gaze was pretty sweet. He charmed the dress out of her, made her develop a schoolgirl crush on him, and inspired her to improve her abilities in order to get the chance of going steady with him (I see her asking Midnight some advice on pleasing stallions in the future). Narrow Gaze was also an interesting gal, particularly her discussions about her past, her knowledge in language, and ability to slightly keep up with Frederick in the sack despite the lack of practice. You and Ausbrony have my respect for creating Frederick and writing such a wonderful date.

6247892 - Many thanks friend. We are far from done with these two, so do keep an eye out for more of their antics. And yeah, Narrow's gonna get some advice, but not from who you might think~

I may not be able to read any more of these cloptional stories... This was by far the hottest thing I've ever read, in addition to being well written. Or maybe because it was well-written. So to read further is to either be disappointed or overwhelmed. You are now victims of your own success.
Naaaah, who'm I kidding. I'm hooked. Keep 'em coming. (Pun intended?)

Dose narrow have voices in her head or a split personality or something or was that just her thinking to her self?

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Little of column A, little of column B.

I thought her name was Peach Blossom? I'd have to go back, but I'm pretty sure you need to fix that.

OK
Being a furry for years will make you used to almost anything possible, still yiff or clop was never really integral for me
Im very romantical person and I do prefer my clop of choice to be not only vital part of the story, but also beautiful combination of relationship, feelings, romance and sex.
Everypony can write a porn, but to write a good erotica requires much more than just plain boring rutting without any context. It requires reader to feel as a part of the scene and not just an observer.
And this? This was a good erotica!
Beautiful description of date --- followed by wooing, sensual foreplay and quite realistic progress afterwards. I mean yes simultaneous orgasm may feel quite romantical but it is not very common thing, considering how often it is apearing in stories Ive seen so far from beginner writers
So yeah Kudos to you

Favourite chapter..of all time...

“True, but the ones that do don’t stop at sticks and apparently decide an entire tree is an acceptable suppository,” Fredrick chuckled. “At least you can tell by the way they walk which ones they are.”

hah! reminded me of a funny line in a different story, where someone imagined a bunch of stuck-up Canterlot unicorns walking single-file...each one with it's horn up the ass of the one in front of it!

“And I thank you for that,” Fredrick said with a smile and a bow, before perking up and looking at the kitchen. “Ah yes, the spinach!” With that, he was bounding off again.

. . . Yes, that is what I took home from this chapter.

Hot damn... Most excellent! Magnificent chapter ♡
Makes one jelles of being any one of them both...

Aw, somepony wants a birdy husband~

Who’s inside your head?

Clop with a lot of class and depth! Purrr-birb-fection

Who of us would not love to have a lover like this?
Bird sure knows if to make the metaphorical purrr in satisfaction ♡
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