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Summer Dancer
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Summer Dancer
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A very insightful look into what goes on in the heads of our heroes when they are stuck in a room together. I especially liked the look into Twilight's head. (I was on that name 4 different times before i spelled it right, my brain is to think to tired)
YIPPEE!!! A new story!
and also 2nd comment!
That was funny, poor Pinkie
I see someone took notice of the fact that there wasn't a bathroom in that room. It does raise a valueable question about why Starlight Glimmer wouldn't put one in.
Absolutely hilarious. What would have been funnier is having Starlight's real cutie mark revealed by Pinkie's golden river.
You know the team of Double Diamond, Sugar Belle, Party Favor, and Night Glider are pretty awesome that they need a team name.
Don't eat the yellow snow! It's piss!
You just had to go with that tune, didn't you? I remember those commercials...
You know you're in trouble when you have to go so bad that you don't even notice it anymore.
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There's actually a little bit of a discussion about that topic in this thread, from the Night Glider group.
I pee freely
Only one who got the Alice reference? Yes? Okay
Otherwise, this was a pretty good story. Pacing and characterization are spot on, awesome plot line, and a description that was perfectly worded to get us hooked. How would you like a fave, sir and/or ma'am?
Hmm, I remember noticing that there wasn't a bathroom, but I also noticed that they really didn't give them any food. They really don't plan ahead, do they?
5836376 Nope! it's a travesty, I tell you!
5836371 Shaken, not stirred
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No food, no bathroom... It's my miniature nightmare!
5836422 It hurts to think about it! Starlight, how could you?
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So thirsty... and hungry..... I GOTTA GO TO THE BATHROOM!
5836455 The girls room in this side is locked, you'll have to go to the other side of the town!
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*runs out door and sees massive crowd* UGH!
5836465 Gets out the party cannon MOVE IT, PEOPLE!!!
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Outta my way! *grabs a foam noodle and waggles it like a spear*
5836477 Starlight appears out of nowhere "WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?"
Me: BACK, BACK, I SAY! Fires magic
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Fear the wrath of my pool noodle! *noodle breaks in half when I point it* Aw man...
5836492 Twilight revives it Go, while you still have the chance!
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*takes it and runs* I'm outta here! *accidentally steps on the noodle and falls on my face* I'm ok!
5836514 I just don't know what went wrong!!!
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Must. Use. THE BATHROOM! *runs as fast as my legs will carry me, which isn't that fast*
5836525 Watch out for that rain pudd-- oh, too late.
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*slowly lifts head out of water. Thinks about cool, refreshing liquid water* NOPE!
5836550 THINK SOLID THOUGHTS! Like...brownies? Oh. Ew. No. Scratch that.
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Yes, solid! Like, um, dirt! *grabs handful of dirt and clutches it as it push past crowd people with tall hats*
I don't like brownies, too chocolaty for me.
5836601 The dirt is actually muffins, you are doomed!
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NUUUUU! *chucks them into the crowd* Must RUN! *finally reaches door. Sees out of order sign* UGH!
5836627 Gets my Dad to repair it Your'e good to go!
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Yes! *a few minutes later* That was the most fulfilling moment of my life.
5836659 Drops to the ground It...is finished.
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Well played
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Our adventure has ended... wait, not yet. There is an angry crowd behind us.
5836677 Drop everything...and run.
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To the hills! *runs halfway up a hill and falls in big hole* That'll work.
5836741 Yeah, we're good.
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*Somebody falls down the same hole* Nope, not good.
5836762 Aw, man....
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LEAVE US BE!
Rainbow: HOLD IT!
Pinkie: OBJECTION!
Fluttershy: TAKE THAT! *throws water at Starlight*
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Exactly what I thought.
Starlight, you little witch... Now that's just petty!
5836887 Starlight: SILENCE!
(Anyone who knows Prosecutor Blackquill knows the reference I made)
Something's missing there. i think it should be "Mentioning my old talent is what got us..."
Also, I thought they were going to pee in the bucket that they threw at Starlight.
Damn, thirty-two hours? That filly's got a bladder of steel.
Or she's just Pinkie. Yeah, let's go with that.
Another great story summer dancer! I love that ending with Dashie saying that "embarrassing" bathroom story!