Hello I am The MLP Hyena and I love wildlife, particularly wolves, hyenas, jackals and wild dogs. I also love mlp. My favorite charicter is Sweetie Belle and I love the spikebelle ship.
Based on a true story. Sweetie Belle has lost her first pet, a millipede and is devastated. It is up to a close friend of hers to lift her spirits. A story wrote in memory of Sweetie, one of my first pet millipedes who died on Easter Monday of 2015 ):
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Sweet and sad at rhe same time.
A sad piece of chocolate
well done.
5836642 Thanks, also funny joke
You made me tear up for a millipede.
I hate millipedes!
5836708 ya got a thumbs up too!
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I'm sorry your pet died. This was a very sweet and touching story.
5838069 Thanks, I'm really suprised it's gotten so much attention.
yay
Hmmm, I really can't believe that I teared up while reading this story. I mean, I don't even like millipedes!
(no offense)
You have a few spelling and grammatical errors that I'm too lazy to point out here and there, but nothing that a quick look-over won't fix. I'm sorry that your pet died, and I'm glad that you let out your emotions in this story, instead of bottling it up.
5838792 I may be the only one, but I'd like to see a continuation of this. The two of them could bond over having lost a loved one and they could start a relationship. :)
5839171 Hmmmm maybe, I was just going to leave it as its own thing, kind of linked to The Gift of a Dragons Heart as a prequel, I mean the two stories could be in the same storyline, actually maybe I could write a line of short stories leading up to The Gift of a Dragons Heart. Hmmm yeah I think I will do that, plus the last chapter (which I apologise still isn't out) leaves more story writing opportunity. I could do a few other stories about Spike and Sweetie Belle before and after The Gift of a Dragons Heart, then I was thinking of doing either a story for either Button X Babs or Button X Twist. I could also do a short story for the mayor and another story for some characters that will be introduced in the final chapter. Yes this is a good plan, I will get to writing a few more stories soon and hopefully the last chapter of The Gift of a Dragons Heart will be out soon, my proof-reader has been a bit busy lately.
It's sad when first pets pass away, especially if you bond with it only a child and their pet know. Mine was a budgie named 'Sir Chirps A lot.' To be honest I cried more than than when my Great Grandmother died. I guess I was more prepared, she was an 86 year old woman with dementia who I overheard a short phone conversation with my mum and nan on the night she passed away. Really made me question my athiesm.
Damn I sound like a monster… and a buzz-kill. Great story by the way, keep up the good work!
~Squiggle-Squiggle~
You made me tear up. And I don't really like millipedes. That is something that only one other fanfic has been able to do. "Why am I crying" by Rated Ponystar made me cry for diamond tiara. So you get second. But still that's extremely good.
5862667 It was probably Sweetie Belle