Dark Shadow is a guard for the night watch, But there is more to him then meets the eye. He is the server of the moon. The God of Darkness. He watched over the moon sense the beginning of its creation. He has secretly guarded every Goddess of the Moon. Now, sense the night watch has been created, he has joined it to protect the Goddess of the Moon. Luna.
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I'm down with this story. XD something more op than the elements themselves.
5846937 Well thanks! to be honest, I never thought that this story would be so liked and well received.
God damn... Dark Shadow is a badass (or would he term be badflank?) either way I like this because he is a tank and I hope another chapter comes out soon
5851227 I am currently working on the next chapter, but it will most likely be out tomorrow afternoon
5851232 Perfect timing. I don't get off of work until mid afternoon tomorrow
5851241 Glad that it is well within your timeframe :)
I have tons of time to wright, because I am only 14, and I have the weekend to write, so expect these chapters frequently.
5851262 Lucky you I'm a semi adult with a 10-7 schedule at a physically demanding job so my free time is mostly spent resting and recovering (which is me mostly reading or playing games)
5851299 Well I hope you have a decent day at work, and maybe my story will help you relax when the chapters complete?
Soooooooo goooooood
5853786 Thanks!
Can't wait for next chapter
Number one
Hesitant to choose, but I'll pick 1
Ill chose two... I think
Either way good job but I think Cadence is overreacting a little since they were in a duel (kinda the main point honestly... To hurt your opponent) all said and done though I can't wait for next chapter and I would offer to be your editor but I tend to be wiped after work and would not be able to edit properly but if you want I could be someone you bounce ideas off of? Just send me a pm when you want
5854005 The reason she reacted so badly was because Shining Armor was put un the brink of death. He was on the brink of death from the shards of metal, and the chock out. ( Not to mention he will not be doing any actions with out feeling massive pain for a while. Also he will have to have surgery to get the shards removed.)
5854206 that's true Dark Shadow could excersise a little restraint... Oh well it's not like he much good at defending the princesses anyway
5854273 He is holding back. If he wasn't then Shining Armor would of died from the first hit. As for how well he protects Luna, you will have to just wait and see...
I love this chapter can not wait for the second half
5861184 Thanks!
A New chapter will soon be out
First of all - you a lot of small grammatical errors that can easily be corrected. for instance: sense should be since.
Also you need to stop doing that thing where you press space after your first quotation mark.
ex: " NEXT!"
correction: "NEXT!" There should be no gap between the first quotation mark and the quot.
I find it helpful to do a slow read-through before publishing to find and fix any little mistakes made. (Try to put yourself in the perspective of the reader, because they don't know what you're trying to say when you mess up so read it slowly otherwise you'll mindlessly read over and miss the mistakes you made)
good story.
5906134 Thanks! That's a relief, and for the quotation thing I actually noticed that today, so I will look out for that next time. Plus I have a trend on the "Editors Needed" group.
I don't care who he is, or what he is capable of. If he hurts Fluttershy one more time I WILL SLAUGHTER HIM!!
That is all.
I believe you were trying to say crescent moon. If not, then I think it's 'moon crest'.
I have a question: What's with the standing on their hind hooves part? Actually more: He was an alicorn? and, where is this? You know, because of that princess in the flashback.
5906661 It takes place in a city 42,000 years before the present time line of MLP, but is still equestria. The cities name. if you did not catch it in the story, is Tridon
5906661 He still is a alicorn, but has a powerful illusion spell active. he walks on his hind legs, for, that is how ponies walked back then, and before then.
5906166
This is a good story. Again, you have some small mistakes with grammar, but not as many as in the first two chapters.
It is very rushed in the fact that I didn't enough of an emotional connection with the two in love to really feel sad for the parents death. (slow down the romance and add more to it!)
5906693
OK, but the alicorn in the bar being harassed by the guards? SHE'S A BUCKING PRINCESS! Why is she in the bar in the first place?
5906795 This was a time before earth ponies, unicorns, ect. It was just alicorns back then.
5906873
OK
Soo good well worth the wait :D
5912988 I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Just finished re reading the story and would like to know if you need a person to edit the story of spelling problems and also to see if you still plan to continue this cool story. Thank you :3
ok m8 what will it be called?