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Will Atkinson



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Six months have passed since Sonic, Shadow, Tails, and Nyx returned the Crystal Heart to the Crystal Empire. Now it is Sonic and Shadow's big day as they get ready to marry Rainbow Dash and Sunset Shimmer. But before they could perform the ceremony, Nightmare Amy crashes the wedding. She takes the main six away, and scatters them in different parts of Equestria. Now it's up to Sonic, Shadow, Tails, Knuckles, Nyx, Sunset, Spike, and an old friend of Sonic's to save them. Will they do it, or will Nightmare Amy finally get her revenge?

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Will you do it again. That was amazing chapter you done so keep it up man.

Different parts of Equestria? Hmm. Might as well wait for the next chapter.

KO awesome start of the story hope the others get their friends. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

From a first impression of the synopsis, I think you need to go back and fix up a few things. Here, let me highlight the things in the synopsis that need fixing:

Six mouths months have past passed since Sonic, Shadow, Tails, and Nyx returned the Crystal Heart to the Crystal Empire. nNow it is Sonic and Shadow's big day as they get ready to merry marry Rainbow Dash and Sunset Shimmer. But before they could say I do perform the ceremony, Nightmare Amy crashes the wedding. She takes the main six away, and scatters them in different parts of Equestria. Now it's up to Sonic, Shadow, Tails, Knuckles, Nyx, Sunset, Spike, and an old friend of Sonic's to save them. Will they do it, or will Nightmare Amy finally get her revenge?

Not perfect, but considerably better than it was before, no?

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