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After the mane six’s bout with the controlling Starlight Glimmer, everypony had to find something to do afterwards. It just so happens Rainbow Dash and Applejack found one of the more interesting things to do...

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I still remember when I use to google my house in Texas, never got old.

Well at least they cant see pony's on the map like some super spy cam.

Its a great story, but the opening where you referred to the Mane 6 as The Mane 6, it kinda broke the immersion right away, since the term isn't an In-world way of referring to the group, but rather one made up by the fan community. Other than that one gripe, really well done.

5829181 Hmm, the more ya know...:rainbowhuh: Thanks for that info, pretty sure I won't make that mistake again, lol.

Good overall, but consider getting an editor. Jester isn't a verb; it's a fool in a king's court. Try "gestured" instead.

5831648 Eh, I honestly never ran any of my stories by and editor or proofreader... I do understand the benefits of having one and all, but I usually just write one shots and stuff in an hour for the fun of it. Lol, this story was just something I conjured up while sitting upside down on my couch.:applejackunsure:

But lol, jester... I don't even remember using that word, probably why it ended up in there in the first place.:rainbowlaugh:

5829181 Why is this downvoted? Immersion is important.

5834727 Meh, maybe editing or something... Idk:applejackunsure: I'm just glad that somebody has even bothered to read it period, lol:trollestia:

Ya can't win them all I say

Fun , but I was expecting them to zoom in on the Fortress of Friendship by mistake as twilight walked in and break it zooming in on itself over and over.

5835929 Lol, that would have been hilarious!:rainbowlaugh: Sounds like something Rd would do though...:rainbowhuh:

Such a simple story, and yet its so incredibly hilarious :rainbowlaugh:

TYPO

Rainbow jestered to the said window

"gestured"

5839716 Ok... It's about time I fixed that:twilightsheepish:

5838990 Yep simple and riddled with errors, but oh well....:moustache:

I just hope this turns out canon somehow, seriously! How cool would that be, lol.:raritystarry:

All except for two mares who were trotting through the halls of Twilights castle, bickering back and forth about their recent exploits.

“What are ya’ll tryin’ to say Rainbow?” A irritated Earth Pony shot back at her multi-colored friend.

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They were doing it wrong. They should have pointed it at someone elses house and tried spying on them. I know I'm not the only person to type in a restraunt, and google view it to watch people go in and out (I would try the vatican if I knew the address just to see if I could screen shot the pope eating. For the lolz). Or in Equestria's case, look at Celestia eating. Take a picture, and sell it to random ponies.

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They were doing it wrong. They should have pointed it at someone elses house and tried spying on them. I know I'm not the only person to type in a restraunt, and google view it to watch people go in and out (I would try the vatican if I knew the address just to see if I could screen shot the pope eating. For the lolz). Or in Equestria's case, look at Celestia eating. Take a picture, and sell it to random ponies.

Idk how to feel about that...:moustache:

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What? I get hungry :trollestia:.

Honestly I was mostly joking :rainbowlaugh:. Would have been funny to see them do that though. After all what's the fun of abusing technology if not to do it for the lolz in the most absurd manners possible. Like street viewing restraunts because your hungry but have no idea what your hungry for.

Heh... I sometimes use Google Maps' satellite view, at maximum zoom, to locate which street gives access to a business' parking lot. It's a legitimate use.

6144731 yo... Google maps has a legitimate use?!:rainbowhuh:

who knew.

6149519 I truly admire the way your Applejack avatar fits that comment.

Loved this story.

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