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Trying to get these wonderful ideas out of my head and down for everyone to read...

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The young mare from Our Town fled as the Alicorn Twilight Sparkle and her friends tore down the Utopia she had built. Now, on the other side of the mountains near the Canterlot Canton, she contemplates the next move to re-establish her legacy of Friendship and Equality. Her way.

Thanks to Mysticalpha for the inspiration for this story...

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Comment posted by Mega NewWays97 deleted Apr 5th, 2015

'and starlight blasted chrysalis and escaped'

powerful as chrysalis can be, she completely lacks training in magical arts. pretty clear that starlight is well trained. chrysalis would not be able to capture her.

5827888
Did she?
Queen Chrysalis captured and confined an ALICORN and took her place...remember?
Put the Benevolent Light of the Sun on the floor of her own CASTLE?
Starlight Glimmer is tough...but not that tough...

Crystalheart

Hum, that story was interesting and it has a good twist at the end.
Thank you for taking the time to write it.

5827915 ......... and again the massive falw in so many of these stories relating to chrysalis.
she got lucky. chrysalis admits she got lucky with celestia. she flat out states, after a brief moment of shock on her face, that unknowingly the raw love she stole from shining was great enough for her to overpower celestia. and that is only because celestia got caught up in a muscle conflict and did not know of her power boost. and more than likely she ambushed cadance and trapped her in that underground cave before she could retaliate, else the fight would have been LOUD.

if we are willing to bring the comics into this too, tiwlight defeats chrysalis by outmagicking her. chrysalis is probably more powerful than even a unicorn like twilight, yet one had legitimate magical training and the other is a powerful yet directionless witch.

5827937
Yet she overcame Cadence as well...
Try again...

Crystalheart

Dude. That got real dark real fast.

5827969 yeah, completely ignore the fact that chrysalis herself stated she was not that powerful, and the more logical prospect of an ambush on cadance, not to mention that a unicorn kicked her ass.

because if you ignored those statements of course it would magically negate the points i brought up because you bring up one point that i had already completely refuted.

5827998
Such speculation does not refute that Bug Queen took both Alicorns out on her path to the overthrow of Canterlot. No matter how she did it, she did it. Deception is as much an art of war as is interlocking fields of fire.
Speculation may suggest that the ONLY reason Twilight managed to undo her is because she was exhausted from her previous battles. But it is speculation only.
I prefer the canon of S2. She won. Rather handily, by the way. The trope is, "Kicked Worf's ass". This makes the antagonist much more dangerous than, "Chrysalis enters throne room, Celestia turns her into roasted bug, wedding occurs because Cadence was never bagged." Boring story, that.
However, if you feel yours is a better story, please, write it.

Crystalheart

i like it and by the way their is a tag for Starlight Glimmer you might to add it

5828047 speculation shows the reality of the situation, stated by the characters themselves. Chrysalis only won because she unknowingly had a power up, and likely a temporary one. by her own mouth did she admit this. this is not speculation, this is fact.

and chrysalis had already recovered from her defeat by the time she crossed paths with twilight and likely to her normal levels of might, having no access to shining armor's manic levels of affection. a level of might she knows is no match for celestia.

none of these speculations are just from the . they are all based on what hcaracters state and display. chrysalis only won by luck, and she knows this. only by luck. so why are you treating this fluke victory as if she had actually defeated celestia through cunning?

5827971
Short stories have to. These are stories you do for those that have a few minutes here and there to spend.
Our dear Starlight...so much taken from her...and yet I decide to kick her while she's down...
I'm a mean bastard...

5828099 are you going to add Starlight Glimmer tag in this story?

5828085
Thank You for the kind words! I did add her picture to it when I posted it.

Crystalheart

5828112 your welcome and i know but you still need to add her tag in this story so people that read this story know what pony's are in this story

5828119
Well, we'll see...I did write her in, but the bot still activated her picture again.

Crystalheart

5828092

Normally being weaker than Celestia does not make her weak. Starlight Glimmer may be a powerful unicorn, but there is no evidence one way or another that she is stronger than an unaugmented Chrysalis.

The comics' canonicity is very arguable (and indeed, there are word of god statements that the comics are specifically written to be separate from the show), so no one is required to treat them as fact when making their own story. If the author wants to write Chrysalis to be significantly stronger than Starlight or Twilight, then he/she can, especially since we don't know how much of a power gap there is between Twilight and Starlight, or between Celestia and Twilight.

5828485 and we have guys from hasbro and the show staff that want both comics and show to be in the same universe. even if the comics can be considered secondary, it sdoes not mean you can't work with them.

other than that even if the comics are not canon, which is leaning trowards secondary canon with the comics striving not to overshoot the series, that does not mean things revealed in the comics cannot be related to the characters.

5827888 ...
... you're an idiot.

You have no idea how powerful Starlight is. You have no idea how powerful Chrysalis is currently. You don't know whether or not she 'lacks training in the magical arts'. And yet you say...

No.

5828577

No, it does not mean that ths comics cannot be related to fanfic material. However, it DOES mean that the comics don't HAVE to be related, unlike show material (at least, without an alternate universe tag or disclaimer).

The starlight glimmer icon is out bro

5844785
Since I was quoting Marx directly, I don't get your point.
Everyone starts out benign and helpful...no one comes out and says, "I am going to oppress you" by definition. Yet you saw the production's contention...why send up minions to ground Dashie? She wasn't part of that group. Why push down Twi's head for being taller than everypony else? Why FORCE the Cutie Marks from them, then lock them away? If this existence is so wonderful, ponies would line up for it.
The final tell was Starlight herself, straight from Orwell...the retention of her own Cutie Mark. Everyone is equal...but some are more equal than others.
Perhaps the production team didn't actually decide to dump on Socialism/Communism directly...I happen to believe that to be the truth. But the essential case of parallels to Marx and Engels are too strong to ignore.
I just took them to a final conclusion.

Crystalheart

5849664
It's a failed system of government. No matter when, no matter where, it fails. Especially when it has to be shored up with capitalism. It doesn't take into account the nature of people. And sooner or later, it oppresses. Because treating everyone the same always leads to oppressing those that always excel. Equivalency always means cutting the top down. The bottom rises only so far. Beyond that, the bottom cannot stay higher. There is no ability there. It falls back.
I would love to make binoculars or bridges from balloons. I can't. But then why should I tell somepony he can't, either, just because I'm not able to?
Not a lot of sense there.
Make whatever you want to, Party Favor...you have a rare and INCREDIBLE gift, pony...and NEVER let anypony tell you that you need to give that up so you are "equal" to them...ever.

Crystalheart

WHOA! Didn't expect THAT! :pinkiegasp:

5887360

I wanted something shocking and terrifying. A complete reversal of roles. So, I tapped into my inner Aliens vibe, and played Chrysalis to that...

Not so much fun when you're the minion...

Of course, S5 might make a complete liar out of me...Starlight may be the Big Boss this season...

Crystalheart

And then at the start of season six, the Crystal Empire froze over. So Chrysalis had nothing to conquer.

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Yet a Changeling was seen in the background...

Things...

5827915 I agree with you. Chryssi is stronger than Starlight. Yes, Glimmer is a powerful Unicorn. But there's now way in hell she can lock horns with a being like Chrysalis. She knocked Sun Butt on her royal FLANK. and we may be getting her RETURN IN sometime during season 6. I read a fan comic where her and a revived Sombra team up and Take out the royal Pony sisters. and in that same comic Sombra POSSESSED Shining Armor and used him to KILLED CELESTIA!. >:) and then Twilight goes nuts and attacks her own Brother, thinking its Chrysalis. Its a good read. i found it on Deviantart.

7119003
I know that comic! Could you provide a link to it? I haven't been able to find it for ages.

7418823
Those are cool. I like your art style.

P.S. Thanks for the follow:twilightsmile:

7418830 Your quite Welcome. You ever hear of a band called the Donnas btw? im making a PMV using one of their songs and clips from Rainbow Rocks, im bored and when im bored music puts me in a good mood XD.

7419205
No, I haven't heard of it. To be honest, I don't know that many bands.

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