This story is a sequel to Nightmare Night Special; Lost Forever
It's Winter Wrap up an a Human In Ponyville is looking to help but all he can do is Babysit the two most difficult foals in Ponyville.
How does he Manage? By telling them an unusual Easter story.
Jut say her name, the're no need to explain her race or colour
That Easter story needs some work in the middle, plus also, proofreading and editing, wasn't there some movie called Hop which had something like this...
9229954 This one was more of a commission for some one else.
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Commotion? Did you mean to say commission? I'm just guessing here, but is English not your first language?
9239955 I do not know what to tell you about messing up commission. I really don't know what to say.