Stella born and raised in Cloudsdale, she belongs to a fairly rich family. She has been waited on her how life. She decides to go to school and work part-time. Dealing with the stress that she put herself into, also making friends who are not her brother. Stella becomes a batpony to forge her own I.D. so she could live life how she wanted to live.
Art by: http://www.furaffinity.net/user/rainypaws/
Edited by:
https://roman-sheep.deviantart.com/
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCHfOaMljokdD5k9PhCf9Pag
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/224464/The+Fan+Without+a+Face
and my good friend Chris Shorten
Chapters (8)
in the works, working on alot of thinks but here is the prolog
I recognize Stella, but who's the other pony in the picture?
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You made the picture, right?
to be scientifically accurate torches only last about an hour so lanterns with oil would be better. aslo lanterns and torches only light up a few feet around them so they are basically useless for trying to see things in a distance. using moonlight and night vision would allow you to see much farther.
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afterwards
Stella had a few drinks before she caught on to what Rize was doing. Stella took the time to slap him with her wing. Rize grabbed his face in shock.
unneeded new line
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“You know the sun blinds use,” She kissed the Unicorn next to her. The two of them smiled. A knock came at Stella’s door, and Stella just rolled her eyes in anioness. us
So Stella is a regular pony that uses the amulet to be a bat pony?
That's going to cause trouble.
Is there going to be a update soon
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Yes, Monday is my goal
How dose on write a convincing romance? Highlight in chapter six, still one of my proudest moments https://www.fimfiction.net/story/291334/buttons-date-with-silver-spoon
*It was a cold night, the moon glimmered clearly over the tips of the Canterlot buildings.
No one likes a, hows the weather intro. It easiest, sure, but it tell you nothing about the story you want readers to get invested in
Also, and sorry, saw this in be fluff dragons discord and said you wanted some writing advice, well, for a first chapter, it’s kind of boring. Most of what we need to know about our main characters is told rather than shown, and there dosnt seem to be any kind of conflict present for miles if I hadn’t read the discription.