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Twinkletail
I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.
Twinkletail
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Goddammit Twinkletail.
Its amazing how fast this fandom can make clop out of a just introduced character.
Starlight tag is now available.
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Thanks! Just added that in.
that was quick.
Damn she snuck her way into the fandom, quick as hell
Don't let the downvotes fool you; that was damn good. Starlight just has this sexy, sinister vibe that makes her irresistible. No wonder her utopia was such a success. Plus, I could imagine her really doing this...
Wow.
You do not deserve those down votes.
Mature sexy time aside, this was written really well. You are so talented. :)
BTW, I don't usually bother with minor errors, but "racked" should be "wracked."
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I could have sworn I typed "wracked." Changed, thanks!
hot.
It has been less than 24 hours. I feel happy to be part of such a large and productive fandom, don't you?
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Actually, there's a group of Starlight Glimmer weeks before the first episode just based on the trailers and sneak peeks. Maybe this fandom is too productive.
Oh look, there's the first one...
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don't like it, don't click on it. Clicking on something just to complain about it both demeans you and insults the author.
5825728 It showed up in my feed. The feed doesn't show tags. And I don't really care about what you think, just like I don't care about stories like this.
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It showed up on my feed too, and look, spoiler tags that show what this story is about. If only you had moved your cursor over those so you didn't have to click on it.
And despite what you think about 'my' opinion, clicking on a story and then just leaving a message about how you don't agree with what it's about, is incredibly petty. No doubt you probably downvoted too without reading
That was certainly a fast write for the new episodes!
Now lets see how this goes :3
Oh I fucking called it
Wow, that didn't take you long, did it? XD
Great, I would have wish that you continue this story to see all the mane six converted to equalitie
5825584 You know, Karra, you can just not read it.
It's a magical thing, free will.
You people work fast!
Clop aside, this was a fairly dark story (Which I greatly enjoyed.).
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I knew this was coming...
BRING IT ON!
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And steal my thunder? :O
That said, do you mind if I borrow certain...themes?
Damn, the moment season 5 came out... shit hits the fan.
Good thing I took cover though.
Hello:
I gave a thumbs up, I admit this was QUITE a bit tame, but kudoes for taking a story fragment and making a very LOGICAL direction. I wish more writers were like you, even though I woudl have wanted to see more you did a great job.
A few plot holes could be filled, It seems tome like Starlight had ideas to do something MORE with Twlilights cutie mark.... but well done in comingup with a reason why the Dominant pony would take a more submissive position
.... mistake
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It...was there for emphasis?
I have nooooo idea how that happened, haha. Fixing now, thanks!
Edit: NOW I remember! I meant to delete the first instance of it. I originally wanted it there, but then decided to move it. I guess I copied instead of cut.
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Its ok, I don't mind. just trying to help!
I don´t know why, but i liked this more, than the thing with Tirek at first. After a second thought, i thought the episode with Tirek was good too, but i didn´t liked the sudden change of the Dragon Ball fighting style out of nowhere i guess, and my main reason was, that Tirek wasn´t created for mlp, but it seems he existed in several other Cartoons as well.
However, while i didn´t really understood her name, it was quite nice to have an normal Villain again, which still managed to take out the main six, and that they needed help as well. Yeah i think i said it like i wanted it to be said.
I will probably read it tomorrow, but i just watched the episode and wanted to say a little bit about it, somehow i was a bit wary at first.
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I did consider that! Honestly, I have no real reason for why it didn't make it into the final product. Somewhere in there, I guess I just decided to go in a slightly different direction.
My writing process is weird, especially when I'm trying to get a story out on a specific day (my goal was to get this published before the end of the day that the episodes aired on).
Great story. After this I could see Starlight cancel the cottage building for Fluttershy and just keep her in with her. After all, every dictator needs a wife, right?
pretty good, always fun to see a good mind control f/f story!
I have to be honest, I much MUCH PREFERRED the 'becoming the mask' and psychological warfare that Glimmer was using on Fluttershy at the beginning and slowly grinding down Fluttershy's resolve as the Equal Mark keep nudging her into the mold.
Hopefully she wouldn't do this greeting with those who don't have cutie marks yet.
The psychology was more interesting than the porn.
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Surprised you even read Pony porn.
Ohoho, this was fantastic!
I swear this must be one of the ways cult's brainwash people in real life BTW this was a really good fic LOVED IT!
Should be 'our'.
Either you meant to say 'as she had done earlier', or you meant to write 'was forced to' instead of 'couldn't help but'.
Nice story. It could have been more polished in some parts, and looking at the comments I assume that's because it was pushed out as quickly as possible when Starlight was introduced, but it's nothing too major.
Well this is delicious. I love how it’s written so that, even 8 years later with the full context of Starlight’s past and future character, this still works beautifully.
Also, uniform brainwashing and loss of individuality is always fantastically hot <3