Hey, names Midnight, rock star Pegasus, artist and aspiring story writer. Profile pic by me.
When Rainbow Dash's cousin Lightning Storm and his friends, Midnight Blaze and Burning Sun, coming over from Las Pegasus for a visit, they wake up the next morning to see themselves transformed into dragons! Now they have to find a way to transform themselves back, without drawing attention to themselves...and of course, it doesn't work.
Ships include: TwiDash, FluttershyxOC, minor Sparity.
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If it's incomplete, why did you click the "publish" button?
Such badass, manly character names. I'm not going to like this, am I?
Edit: And one of the OC names matches your user name. That's definitely not a good sign.
5939433 lol I meant to change that XD
My OC's name matches my username because he is meant to represent me. Don't worry, he is just like me irl only better at video games, which probably won't have anything to do with this story. SO don't worry about him being a 'Gary Sue' or 'Flash Sentry'.
i do have on piece of advice for you, since this actually isn't bad. don't put up a chapter until it's freaking done! seriously, not even the most well known authors can really get away with that. when they do stuff like that, they put them in blogs and call them 'teasers.' but putting up an incomplete chapter will only make people not like this story.
5942187 Actually it is complete, I forgot to change it before I uploaded. I changed it now tough so it should be edited.
I think the issue is the short second chapter, you have a ok setup but there is no story, at least not yet. I hope to see what you have , but what you posted so far is incomplete.