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"How can I die easily knowing I never got my Cutie Mark?"

Cover Image by 13light on DeviantArt and preread by MagnumOpai and Neogreenyew

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 53 )

Poor Scootaloo, shame she only came to a realization when it was all too late...

Holy celestia! Non-Manly tears were shed. :raritycry: This was truly a beauty! I'm watching you now sir!

*cough*alreadydonebyanotherauthor*cough*

Comment posted by BR deleted May 21st, 2013

603926 You're just saying that cuz you edited it and don't wanna look bad...:trollestia:

603974 don't you hate when that happens?:moustache:

Maybe her Cutie Mark was just being alive, because she outlived everyone else?:derpyderp2:

603975 YOU!
*Let the pimp war begin*

603975 I didn't edit it. I just did a pre-read. I love the scootaloo based stories.

603974

The story is called Final Dreams of a Filly, but strangely, It doesn't appear to be on FIMFiction anymore :rainbowhuh:

BR

604045 I took care of it:pinkiecrazy:

Jk

604068

It's old enough that this will be fresh.

It happens, goodness knows I've thrown ideas away after seeing them done by others...

BR

604068 so the comments turned from "hey man this story is awesome" to "it sucks cuz its already been done"? Its only been out for like twenty minutes. :fluttercry:Besides. This is different. :twilightangry2:

604085 It's not tanking just yet...it's still a good read...people won't start bombing it.

Judging by the good comments this one is a tear jerker, ima have to read this so I can cry like a little girl.

It's good, but you should've said what her cutie mark was. I bet it was emotions or something.

604085
Great story, man. :rainbowkiss: Don't care if someone already did it. No one can say that because every single story in this world have been done long ago. Every single plot has been done by the Greeks, and these were the first people to write it down. It was probably done long before. Anyways, don't care about these people who say that it's corny because it's already been done. Have a thumb for writing about my favorite pony. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Good story. A bit too short for my taste, but I think it's good for the message it's trying to convey. Anyways, I really can't see how it could get much longer.

How many words does it take to bring me to manly tears?
The answer: 1,088. :raritydespair:

I'm glad you didn't say what the cutie mark was, leaving it to the readers imagination.



:scootangel:

*clapping ensues*:fluttercry::pinkiesad2:

:fluttercry:
... good story man.
BTW, what is wrong with being forever alone?
I honestly believe Education and knowledge is more important than friends and social life.

very nice. I love scootastories, even if this was incredibly depressing. But it was good.

This looks awesome, going to read it later after school. I love me a good short sadfic, not really those 10000 word epics. Don't care that a "Scootaloo's death" fanfic has been done before because well, everything has.

Just finished it and wow, it was amazing. SPOILERS: I thought the way you didn't just make another "Scootaloo dies as a filly" fic but instead did Scootaloo dying when she's old and never getting her cutie mark. I would of liked to know what the cutie mark was, but I guess not knowing was fine. Overall well written, it made me feel but not cry. Well done though, have a thumb up!

Oh wow. this.. was kinda sad:fluttercry: I wish she saw it, so what is it!:flutterrage:

Awww, poor scoot. I guess her calling was under her nose the whole time.

This story is SO original, I don't care what everypony says! I read that other story and it was great, but so was this one. And they were both original. To say that this one is not because Scootaloo DIES is like saying two Flutterdash stories aren't respectively original because they're FLUTTERDASH stories. It's utterly ridiculous. :trixieshiftleft:

Oh, and may Scootaloo rest in peace :scootangel:

We need more emotes over here. . .

Loved the story, even if it was really sad and about the best filly dyin. Very nicely done

God damm manly tears. Why do you always show up in stories like this?:fluttershbad::raritycry:

Comment posted by macoman1 deleted Mar 17th, 2013

Nice vid. I wonder how long you put off adding this though XD

BR

2277228 It kept crossing my mind, but I never got around to actually doing it. Slashawar's a great guy, and he deserves more attention.

A thumbs-up and a favorite from me. That was brilliantly done.

This was okay. It didn't really move me. If that sounds evil, than I must be evil because I didn't get much from it, but it was OK.

BR

2385891 That's quite alright.

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