• Published 4th Apr 2015
  • 5,078 Views, 52 Comments

Just Listen - Spider8ite



Octavia's day isn't going well. She just needed to lie down and have some snuggles while somepony to hear her. Good thing Vinyl was there.

  • ...
6
 52
 5,078

Listen

Things were not going well that day. The judges had found her performance — something she practised for months, and executed perfectly — ‘weak’. Her mother had already called her ten times to find out if she was visiting on New Years’ Eve. She had to walk home in the freezing cold, and she was sure she was going to catch something. It wasn’t exactly the best day to be Octavia Melody.

She finally arrived home at her warm and inviting apartment, and deposited her bag and cello case in the hall with a sigh — a huge sigh that was testament to her tiredness. To make matters worse, her head was now throbbing with the queen of all headaches.

Octavia sat on the couch and kicked off her boots, letting out another sigh while she rubbed her weary hooves. “How could they do this? I trained for days, weeks — a whole month! I missed Bon Bon’s birthday for what? For nothing!” Her ears drooped.

While Octavia continued to speak to herself a pony trotted into the room. She looked at Octavia, smiled sympathetically, and shook her head.

Vinyl sat on the couch beside her. She could be very loud when she wanted to be, but she knew when to remain silent and listen to Octavia. Of course she wasn’t like that with everypony, just Octavia. Only for Octavia would Vinyl voluntarily turn down her volume.

“I played every note perfectly. Each melody was perfect and just how I’d planned! But no, I am Octavia, so something always has to go wrong for me, right?” Octavia stared at her hooves. Vinyl shook her head once again and pulled Octavia nearer. Without any protest, Octavia leaned her head against Vinyl’s warm and inviting chest.

“My mother already called asking if we’d be visiting. I said yes, of course. But she had to make it into a whole interrogation, didn’t she?” Octavia sighed. “Is Vinyl coming too? Don’t even think of bringing your dog, okay? And don’t bring Vinyl’s father, he is just as annoying as his daughter, don’t you think?” Octavia mimicked her mother’s voice.

Vinyl raised an eyebrow at that last one. Sweet Note had never liked her and she knew that.

Vinyl rubbed her head against Octavia and closed her eyes, feeling warm and comfortable. Octavia did the same.
“She doesn’t understand that she has to accept you! She’s your mother-in-law, she has to tolerate you. Maybe it would be too much to ask her to love you, but is tolerance really too much to expect? We’ve been together for four years now and she hasn’t got over it…” Octavia stopped for a moment just to relax while Vinyl stroked her mane. “My father accepted it so quickly. He loves to spending time with you! Why can’t she stop doing this every year?!”

That was true — Sweet Note always came up with the same questions, the same demands, the same complaints — every single year they’d been together. Vinyl had learnt not to worry too much about it. That was her attitude to almost everything, actually.

“Why the hell didn’t we buy a car? And why aren’t the taxis working today? It’s cold but I managed to drag my flank to work today, and they should too! Even the laziest pony in Equestria worked today…” Octavia compained. Vinyl knew that this particular lazy pony was her — she was okay with this.

She pulled Octavia closer and squeezed her hips. Normally Octavia would shout a loud ‘Vinyl!’ and blush, but today she was too busy talking. But even if she hadn’t been, today was a day she was in the mood for a bit of physical comfort.

“Can you believe that my mother said I was being ‘overly dramatic’ about the cold when we were on the phone?!” Octavia asked in disbelief. “She used those exact words — ‘overly dramatic.’ I’m not Rarity, I don’t make absolutely everything into a drama. I never overreact! It must be easy for her to say that when I’m the one walking through a blizzard, while she’s in her mansion, sitting in front of a warm fireplace.” Octavia sighed in exasperation. “Sometimes my mom can be such a pain.”

Vinyl wasn’t so sure that the last statement needed to be qualified with ‘sometimes’ — it was more like all the time. She really didn’t know how Sweet Note’s husband could put up with her. Love is a many-splendored thing.

She didn’t say anything, but just kissed the top of Octavia’s head.

“Ugh… what’ll I do now?” She stopped to cough. “I just wanted to pass that test and go to Canterlot… I’d be able to see my friends whenever I wanted and we would have a splendid home. With all the bits that I could earn there in Canterlot, Wub Wub could have collars made of silver.” Octavia looked at Vinyl for a moment. “I’m sorry. But this was a golden opportunity — and I blew it…”

Vinyl lowered her own ears. She approached Octavia and kissed her. It wasn’t a hot kiss, a passionate kiss, or a little friendly kiss. It was a caring kiss, and Octavia could feel it. With that kiss, Vinyl was telling that what she had was already good. With that kiss, Vinyl was showing her that she could always count on her — that Vinyl would always take care of her Tavi, whenever somepony or something let her down.

Maybe Vinyl could be infuriating at times, but she was the only mare who knew just when to listen to her complain without saying anything, just staying by her side and comforting her. Vinyl might have been a complete idiot, but Octavia knew Vinyl was her idiot. Octavia smiled through Vinyl’s caring kiss.

Vinyl separated from Octavia and looked into her eyes. She raised an eyebrow to see if Octavia would say anything more, but Octavia had finished. Vinyl was satisfied with how she’d performed at her part time ‘job’ — her second career, and perhaps her true calling in life — to make her Octy happy.

Octavia sighed, this time happily. “You’re right, we don’t need silver collars, piles of bits, or a mansion in Canterlot. I can visit my friends there any time I want, but Manehattan is still our home.” She leaned back on the couch. “Anyway, I don’t think I’d be happy in a giant mansion… it wouldn’t feel like home, even with you there.” She stopped to look at the red eyes. “And I’m happy here, with you.”

She rested her head on the curve of Vinyl’s neck and closed her eyes. “I love you, idiot.”

Vinyl smiled, satisfied. “I love ya’ too, Tavi.”

Author's Note:

I was tired and I done that. Be happy for it (or not, that's up to you). Thanks to VitalSpark for the amazing editing as always! :3

Comments ( 49 )

Just one question. Car?

Nice final touch :heart:

My cuddles meter is off the charts!:rainbowkiss:

And all that comforting done without any words from Vinyl until the end. Adorable... :twilightsmile:

Octy and Vinyl were my first favorite ponies when I got into this fandom!
They still are two of my favorites and always will be!
This little story is just to... cute for words!!

This was a wonderfully cuddly story.:twilightsheepish:

Also, Vinyl and Tavi have a dog named Wub Wub...
That made my day.:rainbowlaugh:

Well done. Cute, sweet, and to the point.

This story was cute. And I know the feeling of not being accepted by my girlfriend's parent. Sheesh...

5829789
UUuuggghhh!! Navi!!!

*pouts* I'm not an idiot.

Great story, as always.
That part with the couch, reminds me at my own life sometimes :rainbowlaugh:

5828770 Hehe, this was inspired by a story where Vinyl finds a changeling and pets him. Wub Wub is also on Inner Demons (my other fanfic)

5830044 Mine too. And I'm glad you like it!

5830024 God, me too. This was actually inspired by this one part of my life, my girlfriend's mom just don't like me.

5823194 I'm glad you like it!

5831124

For me, it was my girlfriend's dad. Sheesh! He told me to relax, so I relaxed, and so he called me disrespectful. I'm like, "Make up your mind, dude! >:I" Ugh...

5830024

UUuuggghhh!! Navi!!!

:>

5832917
*Shoves you playfully with a giggle.*

Octascratch cuteness 'cause I wanted and because it's simply cute (duh). And ya' know you love it!

Well, he's got me there.

5830044

*pouts* I'm not an idiot.

Octavia calling Vinyl an idiot is a recurring theme in Miss Spectrum's stories. But although Vinyl gets called an idiot, she isn't really portrayed as one. It's more of a pet name.

5838424

I know that. Hearing that word minimum every second day from Tavi

I hope you don't mind, I took the liberty of reading the story as my first attempt at a fanfic reading. I didn't monitize it or anything. Just read it aloud. https://youtu.be/FrRvp6khAf8 I hope I did it justice.

Really nice to read, it felt easy to just enjoy he interactions

5838827 Thank you, that's pretty awesome coming from you! :twilightsmile:
5839110 I'm happy you like it

5839483

I'm glad you liked it, so I did alright then? I did my best to make it sound clean.

You fixed the capitalization of the title. Yay! That's been bugging me for ages.

5970009 Haha, I would do it before, but I always forgot. Then yesterday I done it :twilightblush:

Despite the fact that it was playful, I don't really think the use of the word idiot, at the end, was necessary. I get that it was a joke, but she'd already called her lazy and almost ignored her, so the word idiot bothers me. I don't think this had the intended effect with me because I just kinda felt bad for Vinyl. It was cute, but it seemed like Vinyl was putting more into the relationship, but receiving little.

5970863 Yes, but Tavi is really dirty in bed, so Vinyl's prepared to put up with it.

5970863 It's just a nickname, don't need to feel like that. Octavia loves Vinyl as much as Vinyl loves her, that's just what we call a hate/love relationship. And she's just joking around. Besides, there's some fanfics that Octavia calls her so. But I'm happy you like it! :twilightsmile:

Reminds us just how important our life mates are, thank you.

5987926 One more time, thank you back, I'm happy you're enjoying my fics!

Woooo!!!! I love this! It's cool! It's awesome. So cute!!!!

6112464 I'm happy to see you like it that much! Cuteness is my work, then it's done here :3

Grabssfahddjtdzjffgyfrgd awesome

Cuuuuuuuttteeeee!!!!!!! :heart:

I read a REALLY sad fic before this, this help get that taste out of my mouth

6689393 Sometimes reading sad stuff is needed, but nothing can beat fluffness :twilightsmile:

7040433 Very good to see you here, I love your writing :twilightsmile: Mute!Vinyl is a cool concept, even if I love Vinyl being loud and saying shit. :rainbowlaugh: I also learned to enjoy Mute Vinyl :3 I'm glad you found this story that good :heart:

DAAAAWWW'S!

This story is super snuggly. Like, super. The gaiety, oh, the gaiety!

Forgive my puncraft.

7335090 I'm happy you like it, snuggly is the best kind :heart:

Sorry for not answering earlier.

I love VinylXOctavia, and I know what it feels like to have a bad day like that. Sometimes you just need to vent, even saying things you don't realize you may have been holding back.

I will also echo a comment made about the idiot remark but in a different light. It would have felt better if only said once and after an appropriately silly action by Vy. But, it's still a great story, and I loved it immensely.

This made us smile. Yes, very good.

I love how Vinyl was silent for the whole thing but said the last thing in the story. xD

Login or register to comment