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A somewhat deranged author who likes science and writing stories with way too much dialogue. Recently got it through her thick skull that she was a girl.

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Each of the Mane 6 wakes up in the bodies of stallions, but with their original minds unchanged. Everyone around them seems to think they were always this way. Rapidly dysphoria overtakes them, and they try to become their old selves once again, to the confusion and even horror of many of their loved ones.

The mane 6 must fight to reclaim their bodies while piecing together the mystery of what happened to them and why.

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Luna is best princess. I guess being the overseer of dreams she understands how important the mind/body connect is.

Still funny. I will guess they switched minds with their counterparts in another dimension. So in their home dimension there are 7 stallions in the bodies of mares.

my shipping ideas
Celestia x Dusk
more later have to think

One thing I think you could play with a bit here is that they all recognize each others mare names.

This is fabulous!! I love how they all unknowingly finish each other's thoughts.

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Well, she's certainly seen a lot of ponies inner thoughts. Celestia cares about them just as much though, make no mistake.

As for your prediction, you'll just have to wait and see :).

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Oh that's not all I plan to play with.

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They might be a good pair if Dusk was actually there.

This is a great story! I can't wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

So... fuck Fluttershy then?
Twilight - The Magician
Rarity - The Artist
Rainbow Dash - The Racer
Applejack - The Guardian
Pinkie Pie - Bacchus
Fluttershy - ... Who Cares?

6004671 Pervert. Taking advantage of the Elements' confusion and uncertainty to play with the poor things like they're nothing but some sick sex toys. For shame.:ajsleepy:

Six stallions I didn't know and... Princess Celestia and Luna? appeared around my bed.

Six? Who is the random wierdo that tagged along?

1) Dusk
2) Elusive
3) Bubble
4) Blitz
5) Applejack
6) Random Mystery Wierdo
Celestia
Luna

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:pinkiegasp: IS IT GENDER SWITCHED MAUD?!!!!!:pinkiegasp::twilightoops::twistnerd:

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Sorry about that, typo. It has been fixed.

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That's not what I meant... I more meant using how what's happened to them seems sudden rather than ingrained in their psyche and their altered memories to explore the concept more in depth.

So far, my opinion regarding this story is a resounding 'meh'. But, you have earned my curiosity nonetheless. Hopefully this ends up going somewhere good, if the buildup is any indication.

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Don't worry, it's building up to quite a bit.

I will admit though, this story is a bit of therapy for me at the moment, sorry if it gets a bit esoteric.

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*reads user bio*

Ah. Got it.

Comment posted by Pyro Psycho deleted Dec 11th, 2015

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Stay strong girl! I know you'll be able to get yourself to a better place. I recomend /r/asktransgender for some solid advice.

I blinked in surprise at Discord's rant. "Wait, you mean you've never heard of omni-versal theory? Or even the more limited multiverse theory? You, the Lord of Chaos, haven't considered the possibility of their minds just having been switched with their opposite gender selves from another 'verse? The possibility that Butterscotch is going through his own nightmarish experience in Fluttershy's body and you're about to ensure that when it is reversed he finds that you have mutilated his body and doomed him by making the nightmare his new reality?" I asked the hodgepodge being skeptically. "Because I find that hard to believe."

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One of a few semi-plausible theories. Celestia's theory, mass mind control, or some sort of transmogrification spell all fit as well, or magic they've never heard of before.

Besides, they've only encountered three alternate universes, that of the Breezies, that of the Humans and that of Discord. They have no idea if there are an infinite number of universes or just a discrete few.

Also this doesn't change the fact that whatever the mechanism of what happened to them, they have no other idea of how to stop the Mane 6 from further degrading without giving their condition some treatment... and if you're right Butterscotch definitely wouldn't want to come back to a dead body.

6068196 Well if that is their primary concern maybe they should be investigating what has been done to poor Fluttershy's mind that has made her so weak. Because Shy has never been weak. She has proven many times that her core is steel, not iron, but steel. We have seen her transformed more than once and she has never just fallen apart because of it. She isn't being bullied or ostracized, like she has been before as a foal and still survived. Her friends and family haven't turned on her. She hasn't suffered any of the outside stress or pressure that drives people to such extremes here in the real world... gotta be really redundant here before someone flips their shit and starts calling me prejudiced.

and if you're right Butterscotch definitely wouldn't want to come back to a dead body.

You're right, he wouldn't. But golly do you really think Fluttershy would ever slit somepony else's wrists? Why, I reckon that pointing out that possibility to her and mentioning how she is just taking care of poor sweet Butterscotch's body for him until they can fix things would be a perfect way to bring out the old 'any-thing-for-others' steel resolve we all know and love.

They have no idea if there are an infinite number of universes or just a discrete few.

So? We have no confirmation of any other realities and we still have these theories. The concrete knowledge of three gives my theory far more credibility than it would have here and makes it more obvious, not less. Especially since one of the three is a related world containing other versions of themselves. Though I wasn't actually factoring in EG until you brought it up.


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Oh hey! You're the author! For some reason it's showing me the green name background of a reader not the purple of the author... didn't notice that until after I posted. I guess I can take the EG reference as confirmation that it is canon here and this is post breezy.

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I will say that Fluttershy is an extremely strong character. There is no question about that, but most of her moments of strength have come from standing up for others, not standing up for herself. She's also arguably been given the largest curve-ball as she was used to a quite "feminine" body before.

Also... Just, generally I can say from experience that dysphoria hits different people in different ways. Some times the depression is mild and sometimes it's really bad. Flutters got the short end of the stick as this is something that can throw her into a spiral. She's depressed so she's too scared to get out of bed for a bit, which makes her feel powerless which makes her feel more scared...

There are all different kinds of fear.

However, she's not the one with the worst dysphoria, she just wears it on her sleeve. Someone else is in serious trouble.

Just popping in to express my continued interest. I can see Dash and Twilight as being bi fairly easily. The other four seem hetero to me, IMO, with the possible exception of Fluttershy. Still, the reveal seemed rushed.

At any rate, I see some grammar problems and missing/repeated words here and there. Proofreading is good.

"I have seen mares murder themselves because people said that to them." She said.

How did those people talk to them?

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Dang, I thought I'd given it a once over. I'll see what I can do to patch it up.

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Ugh... Being trans is complicated. When you tell people you don't like your body a certain way, they start telling you you're crazy or have mental issues or what not. Hear that enough times and you'll start to believe it. And since the standard treatments for mental illness have proven rather ineffective in dealing with gender dysphoria... You can see how things can go South pretty quickly.

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May I ask what gender you prefer? Or else I'll be calling you buddy.

Honestly the neurobiological details my head spin."

make my

Comment posted by Pyro Psycho deleted Dec 11th, 2015

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Fluttershy - The Nice Guy

yep

This is ludicrously cruel, because I think you don't intend for them to be able to convince anypony something fishy is going on. :trollestia:

ok, so... not ludicrously cruel.

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It's a sort of catch-22 situation to be transsexual, as far as dealing with other people. They'll say you're crazy, and you very well might be, for taking expensive, heavily restricted, and dangerous chemicals, that probably will shorten your lifespan, just to feel more like a woman (not quite as life shortening the other way around, IIRC). But then, if you force yourself to ignore your weird body, and say no to the unsatisfying chemical solution, they'll say you're just a poser and it's all just pride and denial. And who are you to correct them?

Personally I think anyone should be able to say "yeah I want to be a <what I'm not>" and nobody has any right to say it's not real or genuine, or demand that you "prove" it somehow. Still a sucky situation, but at least people aren't treating you like a mental patient.

Ugh, and don't even get me started on the femynysm SJW thing, where people are all "you only want to be a girl because it's popular now," or "because you think girls are better than boys," or "because the evil feminists infected you with man guilt," or something like that. It's sad, because most trans-women are gay or at least bi/gay, so you could say they have a pretty healthy respect for men, outside of their own personal situation!

At least it's not flipped around like in the Victorian era where they were all "You just want to be a man because men are superior and you are just a simple animal wishfully imitating your betters, like a parrot." (No, really.) (Though they literally murdered non-straight men back then, so it wasn't so great for men either.)

Emotional AND Plot development? This is getting better.

as a trans-brony myself, my only regret is that I can't like this twice

and of course you were too lazy to come up with your own names for them

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At this point it's more a matter of tradition.

A certain trans stallion tipped his bowler and smirked. "I keep looking at it and thinking 'what are we patting?' puppies, kittens, ducklings..."

I groaned, trying in vain to use a compact to check my makeup (my skills at cosmetology were about on par with my art skills). "Driver, I asked you like fifty times whether you had a better acronym. PATA is nice, simple and to the point."

Driver shrugged and leaned up against the couch with a comic-book in hand. "Yeah, yeah. You know I still think you'd have more luck hosting this at the Crow Hop right?"

*double checks for that anthro or human tag*
Nope, still normal ponies... and that one griffon. But she isn't the one with the comic.


She offered me one of the frosting coated pastries and I took a bite, being careful not to take too much. I did still need to work after all.

Cupcakes are harmful to your ability to work?

I felt a knot forming in my chest. "I..." Oh shit... What if someone saw us? What if someone saw me? What if they figured out I was trans and told work? What if-

What? You famous or something? Ya get hounded by paparazzi? If you're worried about that then you aren't Sapphire Shores famous.

Cross referenceing data...
Computing....
Fleur de Lis? Model is really the only thing that fits and Fleur is the only named model in the show.

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Typo fixed! As for the rest... You'll have to just wait and see :)

6258728 Quite true, the accepted fanon R63 names are the ones used here, admittedly borrowed from On a Cross and Arrow, true, but like countless other things (pinkie having a homicidal personality, "Ogres and Oubliettes" and Shining's obsession with it, the very name "Derpy" andher obsession with muffins), are part of collective fanon at this point.

6258609 the author did need to. Common fan cannon names helps the reader quickly get oriented.

Just read through everything, and I've gotta say, you're improving. Keep up the good work.

Applejack, not wanting to go to the meetings is fine but don't lie to you're friends. They can help through this and keep it from effecting your duties, didn't you learn anything from 'applebuck season' neglecting your needs is counterproductive.

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AJ tends to turn inward when she's stressed...

To be honest, this seems like a really realistic way for applejack to deal with this. Stress can be a real killer.

I don't think I entirely understand why dysphoria is affecting the mane six so violently. Ill admit that I'm no expert in this world,but wouldnt their knowledge that the cause of their gender change is magical make it much easier to mentally process so they would find it weird and confusing, but not be affected by the main theme that makes it so difficult to normally handle, uncertainty.

Also I can't help but feel that they've fallen into a parralel universe and when they do switch back the stallions will be royally screwed, but I know that isn't where you are taking this as you've put too many time skips in to follow that plot line. So I understand what the story is about, but a part of me is concerned that they are all ignoring what makes their case different in favour of showing solidarity with the trains group. Or something,I don't know. I keep getting thrown by how they propose ideas rather the whole gender part.

Then again its probably just that I have little experience with the topic so I have no frame of reference to understand their plight. So interesting story,and something that I'm going to reading, but I'm becoming aware that I'm not your target audience.

She nodded. "It's a support group full of ponies like us! It's a chance to talk to people who'd actually understand our problems! We should totally go!"
I grimaced. I'd need to tread lightly here. "Pinkie... We aren't like those people. What happened to us was magical, not biological.

ponies, not people.:twilightsmile:

There was granny's old dresser, a pile of lawn chairs, a mirror.

Granny's

A.J........ You need heeeelppppp..... :fluttercry:

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Something you should note about dysphoria is that it is, on a certain level, chemical. Brains are not designed to function on opposite gender sex hormones so they cause all sorts of misery when a person is off them.

And, I really hope that this story can have a little something for everyone. It does involve trans issues, but I hope to expand it into something more.

This story has me annoyed. The main 6 seem to be cavalierly planing to do irreparable damage to bodes they are only guests in. not to mention the reputations associated with those bodies. twilight has been to an alternate universe where her friends are a different species so why would she not think about being in a brain of the multi verse that has them as stallions. Meanwhile if luna and discord have their way when they switch back they will have made the people they love have massive body issues. If you do have them transition in this story and then have them switched back to their universe please don't have them transition back to being their normal selves but to a mares body that has been pumped full of male hormones. otherwise the implication is that only the men were the ones that were responsible and realized the situation and then were royally fucked over by their female counterparts.

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