Another adventure in the forest, and meeting somepony like you
Jack Sparrow wore himself out. He ran and ran, and now he is in the forest getting mad. Over not having rum.
"Rum is important to my life though. I need it! Without it, I can't do any of my things I use to do!" Jack said to himself.
Jack blinked.
"Now I am turning insane without Rum. See? I need it! Like I need to fix my stupid ship that's still in this bottle!" Jack said.
He looked at his ship in vain.
"I will find a way, even if it kills me without rum," Jack said, feeling ready to die.
"Hopefully when I finish my adventure my reward is getting rum, and not just one. I mean a lifetime of it," Jack said, smiling.
"If I get a lifetime of it, my legacy can end and I can finally rest in peace......right now though, I NEED TO FIND A WAY OUTTA THIS FOREST!" Jack said, looking around for an exit.
He ventured around, looking for an exit out of this abomination of a forest. Then, he found some old ruins. He thought for the heck of it to go and see what's in there. He used his sword and started swinging the annoying branches and leaves out of the way.
He noticed that throughout his time here, his moustache actually growed into a beard.
"Huh. I wonder if this universe has shavers?" Jack asked himself.
He continued on, and saw a pony already venturing in there.
He saw someone fly out and he yelled out to who it was.
"OY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Jack yelled.
The pony stopped and turned around to see Jack. When it saw Jack, the eyebrows rose and it looked interested.
The pony flew over to Jack and landed gracefully in front of him.
"Now who the hay are you?" She asked.
Jack knew it was a girl from how the pony looked.
"I'm a pirate, My name's Captain Jack Sparrow!" Jack said, doing a pose.
He sticked the pose for a while, even though there was only silence.
The pony had a bored look on her face.
Jack looked at the pony and rose his eyebrows.
The pony was wearing a green jacket and a weird hat on top of her head. She had orange eyes and black hair with a darkened fur of orange.
"So who are you?" Jack asked.
The pony smiled.
"Who am I? I! AM DARING DO!" Daring said, doing a pose as well.
But she got thunder for her pose.
Jack glared.
'Why did she get thunder for her pose but not me!??!?!?!?!' Jack thought, annoyingly.
"So why are you in this forest Jack?" Daring asked.
"I got lost, and was looking for rum," Jack replied.
Daring smiled.
"Rum huh? Why don't you come with me?" She asked, smiling.
"Uhm...all right," Jack relented.
They started walking and They walked out of the forest.
Daring brought Jack to her home that looked really old and dumpish.
"It may looked bad, but it's still a home," Daring said, shrugging.
"That's true," Jack replied.
They went inside and Daring put down what she got from the ruins and said, "I'll be back in a minute!"
"Take your time!" Jack replied.
He may be a pirate, but.......ah screw it.
He looked at the artifact on the table, he wondered if it was worth it.
"Nah. It's probably not," Jack told himself.
Daring came back and in her hoof was.........BY DAVY JONE'S BEARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Is this the rum your talking about?" Daring asked.
Jack looked at the bottle, it looked exactly like his!
"Yes!" Jack replied.
"You want some?" Daring asked, waving the bottle left and right.
Jack shook his head obediently.
"All right," Daring said, smiling.
She grabbed the artifact and poured some rum in there.
"Drink some of it," Darin said, giving Jack the bottle.
Jack started tearing up.
"Thank you. So much!" Jack said, smiling.
"No prob," Daring said, drinking from her artifact cup.
Jack drank it and felt his drunkenness coming back in full strength.
"Ahhhh yes!" Jack said.
"Why don't you stay around for a while Jack? I don't mind," Daring said.
"Well......all right. If you say so!" Jack said.
He drank some more.
"Everything gets better when Rum is involved!" Jack said.
He sat on his butt and felt tired.
"All right. I think it's nappy time," Jack said.
He fell asleep and saw Daring smile.
That's the last thing he saw.
The next thing he finds himself in is an ocean.
He widened hie eyes surprisingly.
"AN OCEAN!?!!?!??!" Jack yelled out.
He was in the middle of nowhere in an ocean of some lake.
He looked at his empty hands and noticed his hat was missing. As well as his bottle!
"GOD DAMMIT! WHERE IS MY BOTTLE OF RUM!!?!?!?!" Jack yelled, annoyed.
He may have been worried about losing that black pearl ship bottle too, but he really wants his rum back.
He sighed.
"I guess I'm going to have to find Daring know to get my stuff back," Jack said, rolling his eyes.
"Cause that's what everyone is expecting," Jack said.
He swam back to shore, got his sword ready which thankfully Daring didn't take, and got ready for another adventure.
"I always wonder, Why does this always have to happen to me?" Jack asked himself.
He shrugged his shoulders.
"Meh, it happens. Anyways! ONWARD TO THE FOREST! AGAIN!" Jack said.
He started marching back into the forest, for another annoyance of searching for rum......and his ship of course.
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5814689 Nice ;)
5814732 Congratz on making it to the popular stories list
And 4 chapters already?! Holy crap! That's more work then I'll ever do in one day!
5814738 I know.
It's cause I have time on my hands XD.
Also, if you need any help. Seriously, just ask.
:)
5814740 I'm good at the moment, just chilling in the school's auditorium, working on stuff while my friend keeps annoying me and telling me to pay attention to the speaker -_-
5814760 Don't pay attention.
Be like "What'd he say?" at that end and tease your friend about it or something XD
5814783 Got out of it, now I'm stuck in another location learning how to sell stuff.....today is so boring at school XD
5814814 I get to sit on my ass at home.
Trust me, It's far more worse -_-.
5814816 True, true....
5814819
Ugh >_<
For you all...
5814893 You are awesome my friend :)
nice fanfic tho
5814893 These are so cool :3
I couldn't care less if this story is badly written! I'm giving it a like on the idea alone!
5814975 Well......Thanks XD
5814937 Yes it is >_<
5814931 Yesh :P
i cant wait for more story
...this needs an editor. I absolutely love the concept and have long looked for a Jack in Equestria but, structurally, this story needs work. Lot of improper sentences and the sort. Not bad just...need some real editing.
5815749 Eeyup XD.
Will be fixed, at some point >_<
5815624 Sorry!
Norrington was on all four movies and I thought it was him.
I'll change it asap :)
5815222 K
5816397 Yep. That's jack right there XD
Tracking this.
Jeez, that's the 2nd time he ended up in the ocean like that.
5817619 It's gonna be a gag for a while because the rum being gone is really funny XD
5817530 It won't be the alst either.
In movies, he really loved being in an ocean too :)
5817476 THank you :)
5821609 it's sall right :)
5827903 Yeah. She wasn't as intrigued as she would be.
Sorry, it's being re-written and everything as we speak though :)
5827928 I can´t say that it would be a real problem right now, but the Daring Doo Chapter is the next thing that was somehow bit strange for me, maybe it would be nice, if you could explain it to me in a mail/PN, it maybe makes more sense.
I don´t know if you meant that she liked him, or if she just wanted to trick him, then again i don´t know why she noticed that he was a Pirate, i think he just said that he was a Captain.
The last thing i have to ask about is, did she really made him fall asleep, to take his hat, or am i missing something?
I think the one chapter, where Jack told the princesses, and the main six what he thought about them, was your best chapter.
I am no pro, but maybe you are a bit to jumpy with the chapters, i mean you should maybe take your time and explain more, or just make the chapter a little bit larger. My reason why i think this way is, that i think you probably want to make a serious (more or less), romance with Jack Sparrow later right? I suppose, that if everything change that quickly it could feel a bit off, and maybe the romance seems to be weird.
Then again i think nothing big had happened till now, and it didn´t hurt the story to much, but would he not need to walk a while longer to get to any ruins? While the Everfree is mysterious and everything, i don´t suppose there is something near ponyville, where Daring Doo would really go to hunt treasures.
Sorry i don´t want to sound mean, but i am a bit tired, and maybe there are one or two things i would think differently about, if i would have slept a bit.
Now i just want to say something that is probably not that important.
I think i had preferred it, if Twilight would have not been the reason, why he was in her world, i mean if she want a Human, why did she had written that letter, or who put that sign on? If this would happen to be an Human, which would probably be already in Equestria if he would find out about the Crown, then who?
Sorry if i ask to much, i am probably only tonight like this, but i suppose it can only help to think about it at least, i really mean no offense, however this should maybe sound like.
welp jack thats what you get for being with daring do even adventurers are biches to piarates
Jack actually broke the fourth wall... Huh.