Vinyl Scratch has spent her entire childhood being alienated and bullied because of her eyes. She felt alone; like there was nopony who cared. That all changed when she meets somepony just as alienated as her. And with a few kind words, she learns that what make you different, only makes you special.
Sorry, but isn't it: wear. Other wise a good story, earned my like .
5810050 Haha! Can't believe I missed that, actually. I'll fix that as soon as I get time, and thanks for the like!!!
~ Neon Lights
Just some corrections, but otherwise a good read.
Um it's 'fazed'...just thought you should know.
add: and/or between
maybe add a 'y' to the end?
been
Capitalize the V
5812704 This story was written, edited, and published in my one-hour lunch-block... How are those the only mistakes I made?!
On a serious note: thanks for pointing those out. I went back and fixed them.
~ Neon Lights
5836439 np
Wow, I really enjoyed this! Let's just say this fic has no dislikes for a reason.
6614584 Thanks! ^_^ I'm really glad you liked it. It was a cute little idea that popped into my head that I'm really happy I was able to get down correctly.
~ Neon Lights
Still a few errors interspersed here and there, but otherwise a cute story. Take my like.