It should have been a quiet day of reading, research, reading, shelving books, reading, spending time with friends and a little bit of reading on the side. It should have been an easy day with no major events planned. But Twilight is going to find that today she'll be visited by the Alicorn's curse. A plague that acts up at random variables, but which is supposed to be breakable. Can she figure out the problem so this never happens again?
(if anyone is wondering what that picture is... That my friends, is a slapstick. This will be slapstick.)
Chapters (4)
Formatting needs a bit of work, there are a number of run-on sentences that need to be redone a bit to make it better. But this is turning out to be an interesting idea and true to character for both.
Sentences like these need to be reformatted.
What??
Aside from the forgivable mistakes in formatting, this is an enjoyable story, filled with good slapstick humor and showing excellent promise. I will look forward to the next chapters.
5811503 haha and thats why i shouldn't edit a piece while stupid tired.
This is an alternate universe setting of my own creation. I'll be fleshing it out as i release things but, a thurmaturgic well (as far as these stories go) is what a magic user draws from. The fuller it is, the quicker it fills. Going empty like Twi just did is a burn out and she'll have no magic for a couple of days.
So Starswirl the Bearded is the Doctor.
I'm intrigued.
And I was also hoping for an update, and am thoroughly enjoying this story so far.
The ending might need a redo, but I enjoyed this very much. Have a like and a fave!
6043488 i agree with it needing a redo. Probably try it again soon.
Thanks for reading!
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I reworked the ending some. I personally am more pleased with this than the first attempt.