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ErraticOverlord


But, if ErraticOverlord is dead, why the empty grave?

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It's funny what failure does to ponies. I could complain about my former success in show business, how my act swept my fame through Equestria high and low; but when I think about it, I can't bring myself to care.

A tear slides down my cheeks and hits the ground where the illusion was moments ago.

I don't care.

Right?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

I'm kinda confused. where is this going?

5800208 Into the game of C.T. and mouse.

The next chapter should introduce the job C.T. has for them, is that what you're wondering?

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Okay, I'll bite. Have a track.

5800949 Glad to have you on board. :twilightsmile:

Interesting. I was about 90% sure that Carrot Top would be C.T., but I suppose that would be fairly obvious offhand. Though it also seems like Trixie hasn't made that connection yet, so it might still turn out that way as Carrot puts on this little game. Either way, I'm anticipating the next chapter.

Have a good day. :twilightsmile:

5804191 Whomever C.T. may be, I doubt they'd want to give up the game even if Trixie caught on. I guess we'll have to wait and see. :trixieshiftright:

Thank you for reading!

(Also, I assume the name is referring to the Beeblebrox, correct?)

When is this story set? Before or after 'Magic Duel'?

Right now, I can see it tagged with Alternative Universe depending on when this is set. Maybe Adventure, but I'm not sure. Any other tags I would have to wait to see how this story goes.

5875224 I always thought after, but I left it a bit ambiguous in case I changed my mind and decided it would be better for the situation to be before.

5875264 Good call about that Adventure tag. The first chapter didn't seem much like it, but the second chapter definitely elevates it to that.

5877924 Well, if this is set before 'Magic Duel', it will most definitely need an AU tag. Also, how Trixie is received in Ponyville will definitely depends on whether it's before or after. Especially, if she has to run into Rainbow Dash.

5878628 That's why I decided it would be after, initially.

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