And with this, I am on my way to Pony hell.
If any of you would like me to reserve you a spot, now would be the time to ask

As said above, this is a side-story I decided to write for Trixie's Magic Bit, with the blessing of it's original author, the talented Applejinx. Seriously, if you haven't read it yet, you should. It's an awesome clop-fic!

And yes, there isn't any dirty bits to the first part, but don't worry, it's sure to happen! I've just realized that I'm a frustratingly long-winded writer, and this is, yet again, going to take multiple parts to tell. But hopefully you all will still enjoy it, and I wont mangle Applejinx's head-canon too much

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lol. already there friend, if you want i can get you into the vip room with me!

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Dont worry. This isnt the only reason Im going to hell.
It's just likely the only one I can talk about in polite company

lol. indeed. i can never speak of the reasons ill be going to tarturus..... lets just say i make cup cakes look like a g rated movie........

this guy on kongregate said cupckaces made him cry and its sad, is this true? is it sad like, mld or sad like ... well you get the idea

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Umm lets just say read it. I thought it was um pretty gruesome but I've been through situations in life that make cup cakes look like nothing.

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Please, if you can, avoid bringing up fics like 'Cupcakes' here. Others might get the wrong idea about the story these comments are actualy for.

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yeah no problem, *zips lips and throws away key*

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the mention of zipper made me play the chicken song on my coat zipper

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-iYBIsLFbKo

Some corrections:
"...em merged from under the sheets." — Should be "emerged".

"Her eyes widened as she realizes then just how late she had let herself sleep in." — wrong tense, should be past.

"Back up stares in the bedroom..." — upstairs

((Read through the comments after posting this, so use 'em if you want. Not critiquing, just helping out. :) ))

oo I got front seats to hell ...

Um... I've not read the original yet, but... what the hell happened to Trixie?!

...Whatever it is, I like it

Edit:W-wait... is she brainwashed or something? (Now I need to read the original...)