Twilight took the crystal that Rainbow had fetched for her and, in a fit of pique, hurriedly enchanted it with the spell, doing it with a flourish that Rainbow couldn't see. "There, better than anypony else could do."
Rainbow took the crystal and peered at it as if she could see the spell contained within. "Huh, nice job. I remember when you were shy about showing off your skill."
Twilight seemed to just realize how boastful she was and went dark. "Oh! I'm sorry! I didn't mean to be a show-off..."
Rainbow threw a leg over Twilight's neck, hugging her. "Don't sweat it. You're cool in my book, egghead." She stuck out her tongue and flew off, crystal secured and a grin on her face.
Twilight relaxed until it was about twenty minutes before they had to show up for the day's signings. She gently shook Silver awake. "Feeling better?"
Silver sat up and gave Twilight a gentle kiss. "Much. Is it time?"
"About twenty minutes. Need any help getting ready?"
Silver hopped from the bed and stretched out languidly. "Only to answer a few questions. Come with me?" They went together into the bathroom and Silver hopped into the tub, starting the water and getting to washing herself. Having another pony in the room while bathing wasn't nearly as interesting as it would be as a human. Nothing new was revealed with water involved, and she got to scrubbing her fur diligently. "Do you really want this?"
"Want what?" Twilight tilted her head. "You to get washed? Yes."
Silver snorted as she raised her wings, washing over them carefully. Wings requires special care and attention. "I meant the male thing."
Twilight pointed a hoof at Silver. "No way buster. This is your decision. I won't have you going with it, or not going with it, because of what I say. I mean, it's flattering and all that you probably would go with what I say, but that's exactly why I'm not saying."
Silver frowned at the lack of answer, but smiled a little. "That's a very honest answer, and a good one." She shook herself free of soap and water, rinsing off once more before she emerged and grabbed a towel in her silver magic, drying off. "I suppose it is my choice. I'm not even used to that anymore, the idea that I can do either and everyone's alright with it."
Twilight nipped Silver's cheek. "Well that's the way it is, so get over that and decide. Either way, you're my herd-mate, and co-princess, and I'm going to hug you a lot whether you're a mare or a stallion."
Silver laughed softly. "Did you eat something, Twilight? You're especially bold today, and I'm liking it." Silver pushed Twilight back a little, looking amorous, but Twilight quickly denied her, pushing Silver back.
"Not now, we have places to be, remember? Those hugs can start after we're home."
Silver pouted, but retrieved her saddlebags and crown. "All set."
They walked out together and met up with their guards before proceeding down to the autograph room and situating themselves. The doors were thrown wide and the line began to move. Like a well-oiled machine, they smiled, waved, and signed. The human from the day before, Ted, was in line and approached Silver. "Hey, uh, so you were human before?"
Silver nodded. "Was. Feels like ages ago. Are you doing alright?"
Ted waved a hand. "I have a job and a few friends, could be worse. Most ponies seem to be pretty nice."
"They are," agreed Silver with a smile. "Did you want an autograph?"
Ted shook his head. "Nah, just wanted to talk to a fellow human, even if former. Say, I'm looking for a guy, kinda heavy, this tall." He held up his hand, but one of the con staffers approached, nudging him along. "Ooops, uh, maybe next time?" And he was gone, making room for the next person in line. Silver made a quiet note to try and find the poor guy after signing was over.
As another lunar pegasus came up, Silver greeted them warmly and signed their book before asking, "Say, if I were to keep right on doing the impossible and tried to be the first alicorn prince, how would you feel?"
The pegasus looked like she was caught in headlights, caught entirely by surprise by the question. "I, uh..."
Twilight reached out with a swift wing, swatting Silver on the side of the head. "You don't have to answer that."
The pegasus shook her head. "No, I mean... It was just surprising is all. Is that even possible? Well, uh, you've done a lot of new things, right?" She smiled with uncertainty. "What's one more? You'd still be one of us, right?" She spread her leathery wings wide. "You should do what you want to do, and what you think is best. We're behind you."
Though the exacts of what Silver had asked were not heard, the lunar pegasus' firm statement of loyalty got a few murmurs of agreement from the others in line, and she soon left with a proud expression. Twilight snorted softly. "Stop trying to avoid making a decision. Even your people want you to just make up your mind."
No other surprises came up, and their duty to the convention was complete. Twilight trotted off to find Spike and hang out with him. Silver went out for some fresh air, Sky Ranger walking alongside protectively. Sky tilted her head a little. "Tough decision?"
"You could say that." Silver shook herself out. "I was just getting used to things. I don't want another change, even if it's back to where I was. On the other hoof, it is back to where I was, where I was supposed to be. I'm not sure which way is running away from a problem." Silver hopped up onto a wide fence and walked along it. "Everyone says I'm pretty as a female, will that translate to being handsome as a stallion?" She frowned. "And will my foal be safe?"
"Foal?" Sky raised a brow and looked Silver over. "Are you pregnant?"
"Sort of?" Silver sank down onto the fence, perching on it. "She's all around inside of me, still growing. It takes an incredible amount of energy to give her a body, and she's not old enough to hold onto it yet."
Sky waved a hoof. "Well, you might want to check that out first, then consider in or out after that?"
Silver nodded and rose to her hooves. "Sound advice. If it's going to hurt the foal, forget it. There's nothing to consider." She hopped down to the ground and returned to the hotel. She found Ted in the videogame room, playing on the latest in pony gaming technology, which wasn't all that amazing. "Hey."
Ted glanced at her and lost the game. He left it be and turned to Silver. "Hey. I didn't think I'd see you again so fast."
Silver waved a hoof. "Fate was conspiring to keep us apart, but you obviously had a question. What was it?"
Ted held up his hand again. "This high, goes by Jake?"
Silver bobbed her head. "Jake! He's not so heavy these days, well, at least not with fat. Keeping busy has been good to him, and even Sugarcube Corner hasn't been able to combat the calories he burns working with Rainbow Dash and Applejack."
Ted look elated. "He's in Ponyville? Shit man, I should have guessed that."
Silver waved a hoof. "Don't feel bad. I avoided Ponyville for quite a while after coming here."
Ted crouched down so they were face to face and did what humans seemed to like to do to ponies, pet them. Silver rolled her eyes but tolerated the contact. "You'll annoy more ponies than not reaching for them. Was I the only one that asked first?" Silver put a hoof on Ted's nose. "See, not as fun, right?"
Ted burst into a short laugh before rising back up to his full height. "Point taken, besides, your bodyguard's glaring daggers at me. So, since you're here, what's the deal with humans around here? I mean, you know, legally and stuff?"
Silver gestured in the vague direction of Canterlot. "If you want to be proper, you go to the capitol and say hello to Sunbutt, don't call her that, and introduce yourself. At the least, you fill out an immigration form like anypony, minotaur, or anything else that wanted to move in."
Ted pointed at Silver. "You're a princess, right?"
"Yes?"
"So I could just introduce myself to you?"
Silver tilted her head. "Huh, you have a point. Consider yourself introduced. I'll write a letter to the others about you. Are you playing nice with the ponies?"
Ted pointed across the room where the stallion from the day before was playing a game with intense concentration. "That's my best bud, Screaming Rocket. The ponies I've ran into have either been uninterested, or friendly. Got a job, an apartment that I'm sharing, and a few bits in my pocket. I've been in worse spots."
"Miss the Internet?"
"God yes." Ted frowned a little. "It's amazing how much more human you seem after mentioning that. Ponies around here think I'm talking crazy powerful magic when I get to describing the old WWW to them."
Silver sat up on her hind-legs. "Looking it or not, I was human. I remember Youtube and Gmail, and I know what a meme is. Can haz cheeseburger?"
Ted chuckled softly at Silver's antics. "It's like a taste of home. Thanks for finding me, and, uh, enjoy the whole royalty thing."
Silver wobbled a wing. "It has its ups and down. If you need help, send me a letter. I live in Ponyville, with Twilight. Oh! Did you run into Text?"
"Text?"
"Some kinda interdimensional thing that only talks in words. It has no body?"
"I got a funny email before I was sent here. Is that what you mean?"
Silver raised a brow. "Huh, email. That's new. Probably the same guy. He may jerk with you later. If you end up back on Earth, don't panic, he's just teasing you. Enjoy the time back while you have it, you'll come back here afterwards." Silver tapped a chin. "He'll offer 'paths' to open, but he'll open them whether you agree or not, so watch out for that. If you don't want something, you'll have to actively avoid it." Her expression went flat. "Would you believe I said I didn't want to be a princess? I was a guy once, you know."
Ted gave a soft 'huh'. "I'll keep that in mind, if I see it again? I don't know how I'd get email without a computer though. He is a bit of a jerk though. I asked for money and he sent me with worthless American dollars."
They shared a chuckle over shared misery with Text, then they parted ways amiably, but not before Silver slipped a few bits into Ted's hand.
ok I forgot to put in my post yesterday about Silver and Twilights foal in my book the foals life is #1 before any changes are made.
I do have a idea but I will let that up to the master of the story David Silver.
I think the story is really turning to slice of life and I am really liking it good action with not a over baring amount of clop.
good work D S
Harts Fire
But Twilight quickly denied "her."
Capitalize "silver."
Go to the "capitol" and say hello.
Ay. Ted is made of teddy ears and I'm the king of the gumdrops. Who are at war with dragons made of shit. hahahahahahahahahahahahaha
I'm not random
5977762 All fixed!
5977624 Considering the extreme lack of details at any point, is this story clop? 'And then they had sex' is a poor pornography.
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I don't feel that way some times what is not told is better then details.
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It's kind of in the realm of romance novels, which are occasionally accused of being 'porn for women'. You set up a lot of the context for sex, and even confirm that canonically it happens, but leave the actual details to the reader's imagination.. putting it quite squarely in the middle between clop and clop-free.
Pretty sure at this point anyone still reading expects it though, and if it wasn't their cup of tea they probably wouldn't make it all the way to Silver Stars.
5978497 Silver's sex-change put off more folks than any clop/not-clop scene so far.
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I figure the teen/sex rating probably deterred most people who don't want to run into anything like that from reading page 1.
By contrast, people who didn't want to deal with a protagonist changing sex (or wanted it dealt with more thoroughly) had no particular forewarning, especially before reading.
Edit to add: your one 'm' fic is the only reason I even turned on the View Mature setting on this site, even though I'm not above enjoying a bit of clop in general. And that's lead to several fics on my radar that would have otherwise been completely off of it. But I wouldn't have even known about your m fic if I wasn't already following you as an author. It's impossible to know how many people don't read your work from the get go solely because of tags/ratings they aren't into.
5977840 This chapter felt like a bit of a tease. Silver has a major decision to make, with myriad factors to take into account, all of which deserve careful consideration...things which are definitely not her strong suit. But while this chapter did touch upon them, it spent the bulk of its time avoiding them.
To be fair, that's entirely in keeping with how Silver would approach the situation. Notwithstanding some recent aggression towards her foes, she's still fairly conflict-averse; worse than that, she's insecure, and so tends to shy away from major changes purely on instinct. While not wanting to deal with a major change is something I can completely understand, it's frustrating to read about. At this point, Silver's indecisiveness comes across as yet another monkey that she needs to shake off of her back. It's understandable that such a decision couldn't be reached quickly or easily - the problem is that she's making only halfhearted efforts to do so.
I suspect what irked me most, however, was the manner in which Silver wasted so much time here: on talking to Ted. As a character, I have nothing against Ted personally - his worst character flaw is that, as a less-offensive Jake, he's completely and utterly bland. Hence why I found Silver's talking to him to be so soporific. There's simply nothing to be gained in any regard when Ted is on-screen, be it in terms of characterization, plot advancement, or what have you. He's virtually the incarnation of things coming to a complete standstill. Yes, it makes sense that Silver would want to shoot the breeze with another human male, but what does that do for us, the readers? How does this push the story forward, either by advancing a sequence of events or giving us further insight into Silver? It doesn't, and so the entire scene felt wasted.
This isn't to say that there weren't things that I liked in this chapter. The bit about how watching somepony else bathe was utterly lacking in erotica was one of those small details that seem disproportionally interesting (much like that time in the show when Applejack reminded Rarity that they don't normally wear clothes, and so there was no big deal with Spike watching them change into and out of their dresses). That's because it hints at small changes to the nature of pony society that have unexpectedly large implications - we've never been very clear how it is that the casual nudity affects the perception of physical attractiveness (and the attendant issues where that's a factor). Not only was this a good reminder of that, but it was done very casually, which let it emphasize itself. This was some good exposition, in other words.
Hopefully, Silver will at least try to make up her own mind in the near future, rather than just soliciting opinions...after she solves the question of what this will do to her unborn foal, of course.
5979061 It would be extremely cheap feeling if Silver just sat up and said 'I know what I'm doing!' the very next day. This is a Big Deal (tm) and Silver is, for once, NOT leaping at a change for the sake of change, which I'll remind Silver has done, or had done to them, many times. She is mulling it over and gathering information. Does she want other people's opinion? Yes, she thinks that's kind of important. The lunar pegasus telling her that she should do what is best for her was very reassuring that she won't immediately alienate all the lunar ponies if she should go ahead with it, which she doesn't want to do at all. She's realized she's a bit of a hero to them, and she's trying to take that seriously. As a role model, 'what you want' is not always what you want, if that makes any sense.
I think it is a sign of growth, not regression, that Silver is not rushing to a conclusion. This is a decision better made at home, not at the convention.
Ted didn't bring up much, though he gave Silver some information(Text can use computers? Who knew?!) and she got to give him a few warnings that may prevent future drama in his life. The characters enjoyed the chat, and it was, if nothing else, a reminder that Silver hasn't forgotten humanity or her place in it.
5978519 I think the clop category is borderline on the detail . If there is going to be 'intermingling' then some detail is needed to give us situational awareness of what's happened so i reckon you have it about right. A couple times I had to reread some bits as I wasn't sure who was the one wearing the pants (so to speak) a small note of clarification at the start of 'the' act, nothing big & bold just a definitive hint would be good.
On Silver, not going to give spoilers as I actually started your story-line at Damaged's Penny Farthing & found myself distracted enough to start reading yours from the beginning, but I would hope she has the foal before making her decision. Well time to keep reading, gotta find out.
Now that's a name!
high? what?
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As high as his hand.
It was a boy!!
That's the wrong tense for realize
Pretty sure that's supposed to be 'they'
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Oops! This is definitely a third person story. It shouldn't be written in the first person at all. It does not involve me as the writer, now does it? It involves a pony, which is not me. Hahaha, what a silly mistake.