• Published 12th May 2012
  • 988 Views, 17 Comments

Erase This - Wand3r3r3



A story that questions whether or not should anyone choose to end their life...

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Author's Notes (Emphasis)

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This isn't the end of this. All of my older stories like this will ALL intertwine with my newer ones, such as the ending to this story. And, keeping that in mind, this will NOT be the whole story for my OC (ElusiveElement, not Zor. Zor's just dumb and he's just here to prove the point I want to make with this story; that friends and ponies have changed--and saved--my life, on so many occasions.) I LOVE this story; not so much about Zor's past (THAT is the part I'm most ashamed of this story), but because of the other reason I mentioned. ElusiveElement's ACTUAL story will be soon, in the future.


Friends and Ponies...and love. I've never had ANY of those things before. And now I have it all...



Whoever reads this, I love you. Thank you all for giving me a chance, and thank you SO much for giving me the privilege to be any sized part of your lives <3

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Comments ( 7 )

5955035 XD I know how you feel. I also know this story is pretty bad, but I keep it here anyway, because people respect me for not being afraid. ^-^

Do not be ashamed of Zor's past. It may have led him to do what he did but he was saved. They both were. You know Zor reminded me of another fan created OC. Her name was Snowdrop. They are so similar but differ in one major way: Zor took a stand. he fought against the world around him, but was unfortunately beaten down. I empathized with Zor's trouble and really felt his struggles. He was declined the most basic of emotions: love. We human beings are creatures of emotions. We feed, not unlike the changelings, on love and we also give it to others. But if none love is given we fall into ourselves growing colder each day. Without the stars toi burn bright the darkness consumes it all. But in these darkest of times some are lucky enough to find people who will extend their hands and help them out of the darkest corners of their minds. We all need our stars whether they burn as bright as the Sun or just flicker in the sky. You have reached the core of what mlp stands for and what it is trying to teach us. and for that I congratulate you. Keep spreading love and kidness dear soldier of light :heart:

5984877 But it's still pretty angst-y and such a thing that anyone could think of, really. That's what I don't like about it.

I had all that in mind when I first wrote this [it's super old]. Granted, Snowdrop wasn't around yet, nor much else, but I still had this in mind. I made last-minute changes, though, when I put this up again a few weeks ago, like changing another character to ElusiveElement, to dignify the point I made with the events that transpired.

Thank you for the kind words...:heart:

5985099 It is justified in its darker subject. The backstory fits because such destruction is quite the only possible way such harsh measures can be justified. As someone who uses darker storytelling elements I understand that sometimes you need to use it in order to cement the message. For what it is worth I liked this story and if this is you at 'not your best' then you are quite talented :raritywink:

P.s. The reason i used Snowdrop is because Zor is Snowdrop done right (she is a cool character and all but we barely saw anything she did until the end)

5985196 I'm so glad you like this story, and I'm also happy that I touched on that comparison between the two (I forget what happens at the end, though. XD)

Great story, I like it.

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Thank you! This could be a whole lot better if I would go over it once more, but I don't really care all that much about it to do so. But apparently, a few others like you enjoyed it! :D

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