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Spike/Mane Six Anthro Harem Story #4,872 is a go!!!
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That is all. Equestria is ours.
I have a small question. I can infer that through context Spike is a dragon (wings, scales, claws, anthro form meaning that he can stand on two legs and has clothes). Are the girls anthro as well, or is this a point where the girls are human or at the very least humanized but because Spike's a dragon, we have a point where the drake body is more like he's a mutant or otherwise strange compared to the others? I have seen stallions used a few times, and I also know that Rainbow and Twilight have wings (though it would mean that the girls are a Valkyrie and an Archmage in human equivalent to Pegasus and Alicorn), so there could be a little bit of possible confusion.
And before you mention it, I do see the Anthro tag, but Antro can also mean humanized, not to the point that the are all humans though.
Simply put, I just need some clarification.
It would be really appreciated. 
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My apologies, Bengal. I was sloppy with my editing. You see, I original wrote normal pones, then I humanized it a bit, then I revised to anthro, but I forgot to go through it thoroughly. I've gone back through and fixed it. Thanks for the heads up. I hope that fixes the rather lackluster uv/dv ratio it's earned so far.
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5765258 OMG STAHP LOL
5765171 We just need to write as many of these as there are OctaScratch stories. Then we'll stop.
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I just gave you two an idea, didn't I?
so, is this going to be one of those "spike screws the six" kind of fics?
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I truly appreciate the prompt response. I can see the revisions throughout the chapter, it makes it clear that all characters are anthro as described. Thanks a lot for that!
As for the uv/dv it will take time, so far there are at least 30 voters, and it's a 2:1 (roughly 67/33 at the moment) to the upvotes. There are gonna be some dv primarily because of the Anthro tag, or that the ship is Spike X Mane 6, as well as there will be those that say "Here we go again" with the premise. So there will be some that won't like it. But a good number of people do. All that matters that you do it your way, with your spin on it, and that it's presentable to your audience, so that it can be judged on the story and not other things that could possibly take attention from the story itself like an excessive amount of errors or structure.
first I was like
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then I was like
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That Sherclop Pones reference
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No, they're all going to go get pork and cream.
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Note to self, think things through before I post them. I more or less wrote this because my last several stories have been less successful than usual and I'm trying to get some sense of direction back in my writing. I also just thought that this could be fun to write. For now, I'm just hoping to make something that doesn't get ignored with hardly any comments and a disappointing vote ratio. I'm trying to see if a success can get the wind back beneath my wings.
I'm starting this one out with just pure porn and faffing about. I'll probably end up with some kind of incidental subplot later in the story.
In the meantime, I think I'll just stick with keeping a cute edge if I can. Of course, with Rarity so far looking like the last one in line, there's plenty of room to figure something out.
5765387 so no sex in the story?
Oh, shit. An anthro Spike harem fic? Well, this'll be downvoted on premise alone, and I bet half of the downvoters didn't even read it.
Greta chapter.
This was really awkward and cring worthy(his naivety about sex and the awkward explanations) but its a SpikexMain 6 harem so instant favorite
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I think you need to give it another look on certain parts, especially the start of the sex scene. For one thing, I don't recall seeing a description of Twilight getting undressed, but there was a description of Rainbow's clothes, implying that clothing is the norm.
Explanation?
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he just doesn't give a fuck
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Nice work, the dialogue could use some work/trimming down though once the sex gets going. Found myself skimming past a good deal of it to not ruin the mood of the scene.
You know, there are a lot of Spike harem fics, but what about Twist? Come on, I'm sure Twist would love a harem once she came of age.
Very enjoyable. The only problem I seem to find though is the lack of clothing. It sounds like they're not wearing anything at all during these chapters.
Right now the main problem is that I feel like some text is missing. For example, when RD talked to Spike the first time she never mentioned Twilight
A few typos here and there, but still a good story.
Don't most reptiles have more than one cock?
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I noticed most of the typos originated in the beginning, hope to see them fixed!
kalash why
just why
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Because I feel like I've lost my way in writing. I can't find any ideas. I don't feel any inspiration. My stories seem to just fade away into obscurity with little if any reception. Yes, this is me just saying fuck it all and writing junk for fun. Maybe, if I can pull off my first success since autumn, I'll have inspiration to write worthwhile stories anew.
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That's why.
5769328 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KxGRhd_iWuE
5768058 That specific case seemed to me to be an intentional omission due to the semi-first person writing of that section being from Spike's PoV and Spike being a mite distracted.
I would just abolish this as a disgusting and surreal sex release for the writer, but I knew what I was in for when I clicked on the link.
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Abolish: verb- to formally put an end to
This is not the word that you want, sir. I think the word you want is admonish, meaning to sternly reprimand or warn somebody.
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I think there's some sort of problem there.
cool story, definitely adding to tracking stories.
I do enjoy GOOD SpikexHarem fics (My Little Pleasure Island being my personal fav) but there are so few of them that are actually good. This one tackles a point I've not read before. Do go on, you have my attention. As it stands I'd give it a 7.5/10.
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Always write stuff for fun, even if it's clop/erotica
Because you'll always have...well, have more fun that way
5765171 also known as Operation Bigfoot
the phoenixes and the manticores !?
discussing Zebricy ? what is that ?
THIS IS AWESOME!
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Okay, I'm interested in what you have to say. What am I doing so well which others have not explored before? Please, tell me.
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You'll have to read some of my other stories to find out.
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Exactly. I write fics like this to get a release from the otherwise rather heavy stories I write. For the record, my other writing project right now is a first person story about the gradual breakdown of a group of mercenaries as they lose their minds and lives one by one in an environment which is at best unforgiving and at worst, actively malevolent.
5777710 That the girls want to teach Spike how to be a fantastic lover. And for what I've read, a lover that can please them specifically. (that line Rarity said about having an eye on him for some time it's what makes me believe that) Also I like you treat the girls and Spike with care. not delving into the usual problems other harem fics do (that FORCE them to be together by some methode, a dagger of love or a potion or something like that, ugggg) I like it because the instigator, or the problem, is not Spike but the girls. This going to be their doing more than Spike's, as it stands now Spike is a mass of play-doh ready to be shaped by the six beautiful girls whoever they desire. And I love that.
My problems with this is that it shows a bit you were conflicted by doing this with normal ponies at some points but anthro at others, nothing grave but it kinda throws me off balance in some parts. Also, there are some parts I don't quite understand; if the rest of the girls are there watching Spike and Twilight why do they never react only after they're done? Spike should at least acknowledge them at some point other than the end. I don't remember reading Twilight taking her clothes off (hence the first point) and a few grammer mistakes but aside from that. It's very good and I want to see where this leads to!
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Why the phoenixes and the manticores !?
p.s. Can you give a link to a story that would give me an answer ?
5770503 Thanks, Grammar Nazi, really. I will remember to distinguish the two terms in my next comment (sarc mark)
5782251 I would expect no less from one who has obtained the title of Commander Snark.
whens the next chapter?
...This is like a direct retelling of my high-school days.
First off you need to capitalize "It's" second, I would have had someone look at her in shock for that remark...
Also I would work on your story flow, the story idea is great, but the flow of the story itself seems stop and go.