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Moosetasm


A partially insane Knoxville Brony who likes to write. I also edit. And Vector too. Who knew? Not I. If only I could focus on just one...

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The Most Holy Alicorn Inquisition of the Royal Pony Sisters is all that stands against threats to Ponykind that come from within. Inquisitor Sophic Fortune and her band of Inquisition agents have discovered a hatred cult on the distant Equestrian world of Simultas Mundi. The Story picks up after Sophic and crew have cornered the cult inside of a large shipping yard.

The Inquisitors are outnumbered but have experience, training, and raw talent on their side. Will they prevail? Or will the cultists escape to sow their seeds of corruption elsewhere in Equestria?

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Author's Note:

This is a short story. Its main purpose, aside from attempting some universe and character building is to try to attempt to improve my atrocious writing style. Comments and suggestions for improvement are greatly appreciated. This includes suggestions for tags I should remove or add.

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That was really enjoyable, really enjoyed your take on a 40k/Mlp mix, probably look at some of those other stories.

Is this the same universe as team recaf?

Free Fall had been strafing from behind the enemy position and several of the cultists were now taking cover with their flanks to her.

Tracks, I need you to circle around to my position. I'm behind the large red cargo container. Be careful, I'm pinned down. Oh, bring Devoid. She felt Tracks give a magical affirmative and she hunkered down.

The bolded names are the ones to look for, and yes, same universe, same characters. This is before Tracks even became an Inquisitor. It’s long enough ago that he even still has all of his originl parts.

-And they prefer to be called Team Caffeine :trollestia:

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