When our Heroes who have dealt with WorldWar3 and a Griffin war have to choose sides between which princess they decide to choose as Rebels who are tired of Celestia's reign and dictator ship it's been two years of dealing with her she has killed innocents who have done nothing the time to Rebel is now! And princess Cadence has a big role but because we are now limited to 5 I kinda can't put her on the list...
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This looks like an epic story. Let's read and see.
Two things. The grammar and sentence structure is poor. That's more than likely what gave you the two thumbs down. This is a great story idea, and i do really like it.
Also, you have too much going on in the dialog. Add more text, use less dialog. This isn't a play, the audience will read every word you write down.
One more thing... Who is speaking?
ARE YOU READY... TO PROOF REEAAAADDDD
This fanfic is going to get very interesting very soon
578856 meh I found some errors sry about shit sentence structure i was trying to finish this before I left so the next one will be better written ty about the nice comment as well
579008 Tyvm I like to keep people on the edge of their toes it's sorda a good trait
579883
I need some people to add me on Twitter look for the same image and name and if u follow me i'll let you be in my stories and you can tell me if you want to be a bad guy or a good guy and stay updated on my chapters faster and get sneak peeks of chapters and when I plan to release them oh yea if you follow me and tell me if u want to be a good guy or a bad guy let me know i will let you be anything besides an alicorn,human or dragon anything else i'm open to and if you pick a certain on that i have to actually add a chapter to introduce you
More comments would be better and lmao I have twitter followers and if you if you really do like the story you should like it plz getting more favorites on this story then likes haha
648257 lol yea i messed up on that
and yay the likes and dislikes are even again haha
That is some awsome shit right there.
porrly written
but awsemoe shito
685547 yea i have some mistakes and thx again
685547 you ever gonna update your nam story any time soon?
*Reads first sentence*
...No...No...No.........
OMG I LOVE PUNS LIKE THIS!!! BEST STORY YET
