On there first night as a married couple, Keiichi Morisato and his new wife the Goddess Belldandy receive a gift from Hild. Unfortunately none of them knew that the old protection protocols of Yggdrasil were back online and it reacted ... badly ... to the gift. It resulted in a breach between reality and the newlywed couple falls in it. What await's them on the other side is a brand new adventure.
(The story takes place at the end of the Ah My Goddess Anime but it's combined whit the trailes from the Manga where the wedding happens and is before Twilight Sparkle becomes an alicorn)
Ah! My Goddess was made by Kōsuke Fujishima and MLP is made by Hasbro.
Chapters (1)
From reading this, it seems as though English is not your first language, but the storyline is good! I think this is the first Oh! My Goddess and My Little Pony crossover I have come across. Well done! It is off to a great start!
Not a bad start I will be following this.
I wish you good luck.
A AMG crossover? Sweet!
For your first shot at a story, its not bad. I actually like it.
I give my opinion on fics after 2 or 3 chapters. But so far so good.
You might want to get a proof reader though. I did see a few mistakes. (Though I'm not sure if it was intensional or not)
That said, keep going!
This is probably the only Ah My Goddess crossover I've seen on this site
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Hopefully the story will continue to be interesting for everyone. As for the language part … you have guessed correctly (My native language is Romania ).
Thank you for being the first reader to leave a comment and I appreciate the positive feedback.
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Thanks for the positive comment; I will try to improve myself by making more interesting chapters for this story.
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Thanks for the positive feedback. I am glad I was able to make something acceptable for my first try. Regarding the mistakes you found and will probably find in the future chapters (for the time being). I can assure you, they are not intentional. (Though I will attempt to correct them over time).
As for the proof reader. Well … I plan to make at least 3 chapters to have as a template for my way of writing/thinking. When I will find someone willing to help me I want them to have a general idea of what they’re getting into.
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That is one of the reasons why I choose to make this crossover; the other two reasons are: for fun and to be able to make others smile. Hope you enjoyed the first chapter!
5772259 Your welcome you did a great job with Belldandy and Kenchie
An Oh! My Goddness crossover that is not with Ranma 1/2?
Sweet.
With MlP:FiM?
Even better.
Pre-Princess Twilight?
I can feel a great deal of pity for Tirek, oh yess.....
Vote: 10+++
Wow! I suggested this in the crossover forums not too long ago. Very nice to see this!
I'll give you a cookie if you keep working on this story
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First: Thanks for the high score. (even though I KNOW that I am not that good at writing, it really helps)
Second: Pity for Tirek ... "blinks several times" ... You do know that at the end of each season in the Ah My Goddess anime, there is a big boss fight! ... right ?
As for him making an appearance in this story ...
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To be honest, I had been debating whether or not to try this crossover for some time. You're suggestion + the attempt at fanfiction really helped me decide to try my luck. Hope that it will be to your liking.
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You can give that cookie to other children that need it more than me. Regarding the story ... I intend to finish what I start! (small secret ... Chapter 2 is being created)
I approve.
5777811 I like it so far but I will make some evaluation later on. I do would like to see how you would go with this. And poor Hild going to take the blame. (or rather sorry for the one who would attempt to scold her.) Plus considering what Hild gave for the pair, I would like to point out that the Goddesses have an even ridiculous swimsuit as shown in one of the new OVAs.
Oh My Goddess was one of the series that really got me into Anime and Manga... very nice to see it here. I do think Keiichi would make a better Pegasus since he was always racing and going fast, but Earth Pony works for him. I can't wait to see Twilight's reaction to Belldandy. I can also totally see Belldandy giving Diamond Tiara the "I'm so disappointed in you" look her sisters fear so much when she sees Diamond Tiara being a bully. Oh, and looking at the character tags I see Blueblood... if he tries to hit on Belldandy I hope she does that same teleport him into the ocean trick she did to Aoshima in the early manga chapters.
great story, concept and crossover idea. Do keep it up, but get somepony as your editor and it'll be even better. =3
I really like this idea for this Story! I know you've probably heard this a lot, but I think your english could use some work, but other than that, nice going! wonder what'll happen next? will twilight be able to help them somehow? will they meet with the Rulers of Equestria? wonder if Tirek might try to take Belldandy's powers if he finds out about her? I hope to see more soon!
MORE!!!!
You seem to be doing good to me. Keep going. Don't stop.
Just try to be realistic with the story.
More Plz
very nice. I myself am playing with this crossover. very adorable. love to see how
Urd handles this. keep it up.
When is the next update?