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Spike has been feeling as if a part of himself is missing, he has also been having strange dreams of seven figures and a strange voice that haunts him during the day, has Spike lost his mind or is he part of something that will decide the faight of the world
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ooo I'm so excited!
5863474 give me a few moments to check it over
Could it be that Spike is part of the reclamation of the Mantle?
5863481 halo reference?
Alright see what we got.
5863481 Well the cover photo you have for the fic is the Forerunner symbol for the Mantle of Responsiblity
5863494 lol ya its just a temporary pic until i find a pic that will fit
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Of to a good start dude. Seems pretty awesome so far, cant wait to see more.
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5863516 thank you
5863500 Alright then. Good luck with it
5863519
He's getting clocked. (I assume you meant 'cloaked'.)
5863527 thank you
5863528 ya i keep forgetting how to spell that one word, thank you for showing me the mistake, i will fix it right now
5863529 No prob
Some of the ones I've picked out. You need to give your proofreader a friendly joybuzzer to remind them to take your work seriously.
That needs either a period or an exclamation mark.
The comma should be a period. Begin new sentence with 'He'. And it's 'lay', not 'lied' in this particular instance.
Should be "I", "Princess", "Crystal Empire", "a while", and "Tirek".
"making apples fall out and roll onto the ground."
"I'll help you with these," Spike said quickly
5863556 thanks i will fix these in the morning
5863578
If you got this is something like GDocs I can help with proof reading
5863615 i dont use gdocs i either use my ipad,, phone or word on my laptop
5863619 well there is your problem you know how hard is it to spin a top on a lap? Next time do it on a desk its much easier....
Too many mistakes to count. I don't know who your proofreader is, but I would suggest finding a new one.
5864583 the next chapter will be better,, just started getting back into writing again,, but the next chap will be better
Good start so far, but I see a plot hole. How did the cloaked figure get into the castle? Because if I'm reading this right Spike passed out in the castle not in the street.
But still a good start.
5867246 ya i missed that on purpose, but i will say that the figure that spike saw is a different figure then then one that was on the hill with the silent drake
5867246 just wait till the next chapter, im already half finished it
5867278
Ten four good buddy.
Were you inspired by https://www.fimfiction.net/story/94034/the-rise-of-spike-the-dragon
5919169 kind of, but i was more inspired on a song called radioactive, and i already talked to him, and said that im not trying to steal his story, since it has similiar elements
5919175 by imagine dragons? And I wasn't accusing you of stealing ideas this just had elements that reminded me of that story
5919197 oh lol okay, and ya that song is still a good song to listen to, it just has the right mix of music and tells a meaning without putting alot of thinking into it
5919197 thank you for your loyalty to the story, readers like you is what keeps me wroting stories like these
5919284 oh no problem mate I love stories like these
This is oddly similar to my own story Elements of Terra. Pretty funny coincidence.
5952476 people also say its similair to rise of spike the dragon, but im doing something way different then what that is about, yes i may be using elements of nature, but thats the only elements i could use so it would work for what im trying to write
5952586
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That's fine. My story is actually a spinoff of The Rise Of Spike the Dragon. I was just noting the funny coincidence. Good luck with the story man
5952707 thanks, and same goes for your story. Long live spike the dragon
5952802 Um, man, found a typo...
In the description....
I think it's fate of the world...
is this gonna be continued? because i want MOAR!!!!