What happens when two brothers, one a crazy jackflank and the other a mischievous smart-ass team up with the Mane 6 and go on a crazy adventure to save Equestria, stay tuned to find out. Epic Cover art credit goes to Aurora Heartnote.
usen the power of ponies to change the world woooooooo
What happens when two brothers, one a crazy jackflank and the other a mischievous smart-ass team up with the Mane 6 and go on a crazy adventure to save Equestria, stay tuned to find out. Epic Cover art credit goes to Aurora Heartnote.
I PROCLAIM THE MIGHTY SWORD OF ULTIMATE FIRST!
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A true inspiration for douchebags everywhere!
594061 *shrug* its an inside joke
Idiots Rule - Jane's Addiction
Why would you say 'jack flank' and not 'smart flank'?
Why was the painful insertion of 'flank' even necessary in that sentence?
Why?
WHY?!
oooo very interesting keep it up
594388 I'll have to remember that...noted....anyways.
594360 I liked that song.
594074 Meh I got the joke if it makes you feel any better.
594388 Oh I just now got your question, there's a difference between a smartass and a jackass and I was attempting to keep the language somewhat clean but since ppl don't seem to go for that I'll just quit with that.
definitely sounds like us I even lol'd when i would laugh in the story just cause i could picture it :P
Here we go, Round 2!
you get 5 out of 5 staches ah the hell with it fifth teen staches
UNEXPECTED EPICNESS!
597764 need moar
This is getting interesting
Damn
602927 I'm hoping thats a good 'damn'
602941It is
ooooo this shit is getting really interesting.
loving the story so far
606695 Thanks!
red cross BEST MEDIC EVER
DAMN!!!!!!!
Red Cross.......LIKE A MOTHERFUCKING BOSS!!!
Me: LIKE A MOTHERFUCKING LAST LEVEL BOSS!!!!!!!!
Spot on so far for me. Keep it up!
628263 628547 Thats 2 of you I didn't piss off, wonder if I can manage anymore.
Good going Gears, be awesome and crazy at the same time.
Dang that fucking sucks, but was wondering how their parents died.
646221 That will actually be explained later on.
646320Ah okay
oh you hit me dead on but the blade should have frozen the floor to drive the point home lol
627825 thank you and if you wish to see that blade he is using you can look here
I finally got up off my lazy flank and started reading! Yay!
Ouch. I feel ya man. And I love not being mentioned at all since that first little bit last chapter.....nah, I kid. I just want to see a little more of Atom.
All the OC's will get their moments, I just wanted to get them introduced.
first
Marvelous as always!
lol i sense alot of abuse towards me and you in the future :P
red cross is SOOOO badass
672590 first time ive gotten a comment like that
Wait, do I sense something with Red and Applejack? NO!! MOTHERF*****ING SON OF A B**** S*** D*** ASS!!!
674863 O.O
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I just wanted to make explicitly clear that I love Applejack, total waifu.
675448 tell you what care to argue with the armor of harmony
Cmon guys no need to argue nothing major will happen between any of the ponies in the story.
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Care to piss off the Element of Determination?
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Sorry. Just making a point.
I'm being serious by the way, no need for a pissing contest over a stupid crush that won't go anywhere.
Now then, I guess I shoulda mentioned this sooner but there isn't going to be any hardcore shipping in the story, its a adventure comedy not a romance story :P