After an accident involving a Lightning Chariot joyride, Viridi, Goddess Of Nature, ends up in Equestria. She soon finds herself in a conflict with a newly revived Hades, Lord Of The Underworld who has his own plans for Equestria.
I don't own Kid Icarus, any of the characters from the series or out of the series.
Kid Icarus belongs to Nintendo and so do other Nintendo characters mentioned in the story.
My two favorite ponies and my favorite goddess! This looks great so far! I did notice one thing though. That is not how you spell Phosphora. Other than that, I can't find anything else! Good job so far!
5759031 Ok that helps a ton! Thank you!
acknowledged and followed. Seems interesting.
Hmm, interesting...
Please, by all means, continue with your work...
.... Yay! My ... er... fifth favorite unicorn and my ... Third favorite goddess meet!
FiMfiction needs more Kid Icarus stories.
1008 words and the 4th wall is already whimpering in agony. I approve
I wonder who she'll be offend by more, the fact ponies put a leash on nature or the fact the ponies think it unnatural for nature to do its own thing
And seeing as how Tartarus exists in Equestria...
Oh, this is gonna be good
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"Aren't you suppose to be dead!?"
"I got better"
Kid Icurus x MLP?
My life is complete.
5761575 At the end of KIU if you wait long enough. Hades reveals he is nothing but a voice now after he attempts to delete your save file and says he will return one day.
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Viridi doesn't need to know that
Viridi is my favorite Goddess! I'm interested in seeing more. Please impress me.
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Favorited and followed.
you have talent
5763200 Why thank you! I'm flattered!
Given the gods predate humanity, maybe it can be justified as "why do humans look like THEM?" Then again, Sakurai's logic is flawed, like deciding to go against the fans wanting to have Ridley playable under a pitiful excuse that never stopped the inclusion of Bowser a long time ago but that's way beside the point.
Poor, poor tempestuous nature goddess, though, she'd probably compare Celestia to Palutena.
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Welp, I guess I can't make a Kid Icarus story for a little bit now...
So do me a favor. Make this story as good as you think you can make it. You definitely have the potential if you give it enough time.
Until then, I'll just be silently watching.
next time you could ditch the whole Lyra crazy for humans thing. It is ok'ish for a one time joke, but if you base the rest of her character in your fic on that joke it will get boring really quickly. Or at least never use the "several words forced in a single word" thing, it is annoying to read and most people simply ignore it rather than trying to read it
And Viridi, "you" look like a human because the gods made humans after the image of the gods. The Humans look like gods, not the other way around, silly goddess
5764193 Yes I am planning on that. Bon Bon will be Viridi's guide around Equestria and tell her...oh but that would be spoiling it. Lyra will make a few appearances but I won't let her get in the way of the story.
5764075 Will do.
Ahh Kid icaruss and their 4th wall breaking skills
Though i still dont get 1 thing........
why does it say 1005 words while the chapter has 1007?
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Watch the linked video to see why you're wrong.
Linked video.
A few errors here and there, and a little fleshing out would be nice, but on the whole this is very interesting. I shall add it to Tracking and, if I'm impressed enough later on, I will move it to my Favorites.
I await more, good sir/madam.
5765976 Thank you for the consideration.
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Heh. Glad to see you kept the immense fourth wall breaking.
5767852 J-Josh Burner!? Wow! I am such a huge fan of yours! I am honored to have you read my story!
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Huh, so you are reading Kid Icarus stories. In case you didn't know, there's also a Kid Icarus group on Fimfic. Activity-wise, it's kind of dead (having no upcoming games, only one notable one, and two Smash appearances will kind of do that), but to the extent of my knowledge, it has every Kid Icarus story on the site.
I like how this will end.
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... What? I'm just getting it ready!
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5838021 You want more?
You'll get it! NEXT CHAPTER APRIL 2015 WOOO!
5838023 THAT'S THIS MONTH! Wait, you're using VALVE TIME, aren't you? So, what? July 10th? (89 days after the planned date, like the gold rush update.)
5838049 I dunno. It's halway done already. All I need to do is get a good reason to add Hades.
5838060 Viridi starts killing, and Hades wants to "Join in on the fun". In fact, i would slaughter with Viridi if i had the option!
Take your pick.
Arceus, Tulu, Clulu, Clooloo, Cthulu, Cthullu, C'thulhu, Cighulu, Cathulu, C'thlu, Kathulu, Kutulu, Kthulhu, Q’thulu, K'tulu, Kthulhut, Kutu, Kulhu, Kutunluu, Ktulu, Cathulu, Cuitiliú, Thu Thu, Celestia, AVGN, Super Mecha Death Christ 2000 B.C. Version 4.0 Beta, Giant Robotic Donkey Kong Jesus, Buddah, Pyrrohn, Jesus; The Father, Son and Holy Spirit; The Giant Flying Spaghetti Monster, The Non-Flying Linguini Monster, Dan Avidan, Flumpty Bumpty, Sheogorath, Me, Palutena, Hades, Crossfire, Santa Christ, and/or Fiery Balls Of Gummi Dicks.
I'M NOT A HUMAN! I'M A FOX WEARING CLOTHES AND A PERSON'S SKIN!
Just wait until Pit and Palutena find out...
Oh, by the way, have you played Super Smash Bros for Wii U? If so, you need to try Palutena's Guidance out in the Palutena's Temple stage.
Let me tell ya, Pit, Palutena, and Viridi have some amazing things to say about the other fighters. Especially with Robin (Fire Emblem Awakening) and Dark Pit.
this is brillant im intreged
5877247 Yes. I have done the Palutena's Guidance taunts.
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However, they don't know a thing about Mewtwo.
5877939 Poor Palutena doesn't know how to use Google.
5876824 You've clearly forgotten
5882970 I fixed it. I thought I put him in there.
For someone who was reduced to a powerless, disembodied voice at the end of Uprising, Hades seems to have made a miraculous recovery. He didn't even have the power to delete my save file, and now he can impersonate Arlon.
5897139 In chapter 1, it is said its been 25 years since the events of Uprising.
5897292 So, Pit's 38 now?
5933879 I'm thinking he has kind of a Bart Simpson thing going on.