My true alias is Dreagonight, the Dreaded Dragon Knight, but my friends just calls me dreago, the reckless Mystic Dragon-Knight
This story is a sequel to A New Chance
After nearly two weeks of being Princess Luna's student, Princess Luna sent a message to Sunset Shimmer telling her that she wanted to help her forgive herself. Luna knew that this would be the only way for Sunset to truly forgive herself and face her darkness head on, but will this be enough to truly help Sunset or will she tremble to the darkness within her.
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It's a solid start.
5858540 Glad to hear that.
You've got my attention. :)
5859128 Well, lets hope I can keep it.
When is the next chapter?
5869949 Seems like you like it.
5871853 Well it should be done soon, but I have to wait for my editor, soo... a week at best.
That was really good, I liked it a lot.
6182884 Thanks, don't get much comment on this story for some reason.
6183025 You're welcome, I'm sorry to hear that though.
6183229 Mhm, guess as a newbie writer like me, this would happen.
Nightmare Moon? This looks interestingly promising.
6183290 Hope so.
6183304 Dude, just because you don't get a lot of comments doesn't mean your story is bad. This story is on my favorites list.
6183311 Yeah, thanks
6183326 You're welcome. By the way, have you seen any of my stories by any chance?
6183344 Don't think so, I'll give it a look tonight.
Nice. I really like where the story seems to be heading.
You might want to see about looking for an editor though. I don't remember it in the other chapters but a ton of grammatical errors seem to have slipped through in this chapter. I'm still enjoying the story but some of the tense errors especially can make it harder to read.
6183628 Sorry about that. I do have a editor, but I release the chapter early before he got the Chance to look over it.
I'll have it fix once he's not busy anymore.
6183645 nice!! I thought it seemed like an odd quality drop. Really looking forward to more of the story
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Just hated waiting so long to release it.
6183391 Thanks.
6183243 That does make a lot of sense.
Great chapter, wonder what luna plans to do that needs nightmare. Show her worst fears?
6188297 Maybe, who knows. Maybe it might end up like the Ghost of Christmas Future.
Not Likely though, since me writing skill is not that far up to par.
6183326 on my favorites as well.
6200058 Thanks
6200592 twas mine pleasure
Like the take on Nightmare Moon
6298150 Thanks.
She don't get much credit like Luna.
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I second Admiral's sentiment. I really really like the what you have here for Nightmare Moon, an very unique take, or at least one I haven't come across before. Tons of possibilities there.
6309162 Thanks.
Some have used Searing to differ Sunset and her.
i like it over all but wonder why she can't forgive herself?
She can be strong and yet not be the person she was before.
A few grammer errors but overall enjoyable. I'm sorry you didn't enjoy wrighting it.
you could call her Lilith, that's a nice demon name.
6412033 Close to the answer, but not quite there.
Hmm, Searing 
6412093 Lilith, kind of sounds like a flower, haha *sigh*. Of course the demon name begins with a 'L' though. (Lilith, Lucy, Lucius, Lucifer. Hell there's even Light Yagami and 'L', though I just find them enjoyable.)
I felt like there were more grammatical errors than usual for some reason, but I thought the plot line was very enjoyable. You may want to re-read this one and see how many grammar things you can fix. The story kept switching tense, and it was very distracting from the strong emotions that were being conveyed.
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There was bond to be some regret when I post this. Tenses, I'll just have to wait for my editor to fix all of my mistake.
6412247 Original, hmm. Not sure how much more original I can get with this? Wait, yes I do, there is one part I was going to add to this chapter but decided to wait till the next chapter.
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Ah. So you do have an editor. I thought I wan't crazy when I only really noticed grammar errors this chapter. Good to know that i'm actually somewhat observant. Still, great chapter. I'll have to read it again when the edited version comes out.
Have a Pinkie
6412354 I'll be sure to let you and any others know when it do comes out.
Stay put Sunset. She obvious needs more help then she is letting on.
Sunseeeetttt! Don't listen to the weird demon lady!!! She didn't bribe you with ice cream yet!!
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Yeah she do, but here the question, which one of them needs the help the most.
That 2 vote for stay Sunset.
Sunset, listen to Luna. She knows about this sort of thing than you do.
Don't listen to your evil half Sunset. It hasn't developed the way Luna and Nightmare has yet. You can't trust her yet.
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Oh yes, poor Sunset. Sadly, I notice something about her, something that oh so will take a toll to her actions
Poor Sunset! I can't wait to see where this goes next!
Very interesting, Dreag. Very interesting indeed. Can't wait to see more!
- Headwind