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Twilight and the gang have just received a letter from Princess Celestia. She's sending another student to join them in studying the magic of friendship! When the new pony arrives though, he isn't what anyone expected and things aren't quite what they seem...

It's a story of dark secrets, hidden wounds, and the magical healing power of friendship. Also, it's the backstory for my OC.

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At least nopony got hurt.

YOU FOOL TWILIGHT WHAT HAVE YOU DONE

~T.CC

Hm. This has certainly gotten my attention. There were a few grammatical errors here and there, but other than that, it's certainly very interesting.

I'll be keeping track of this story.

I think it's a good start. Are you gonna create your own story or are you planning to add Lionheart in the series? :eeyup:

6419965 I was planning on adding Lionheart to the ENTIRE series. Show, comics, books, movies, everything I can get my hands on (hence the AU tag). Yeah... This is going to be absolutely massive. :derpytongue2:

I can see how that could easily go south, so I'm going to do my best to completely rewrite a lot of the elements and not just do a copy-and-paste type story.

6419768 Please feel free to point them out! I'm not above some constructive criticism. :twilightsmile:

6419405 Oh, I hope it'll be considered an epic story. No, I don't mean epic in the domestic sense of "Wow, that was an awesome story!", more the literary sense. Fallout Equestria for example.

I'm intentionally keeping my cards so close to my chest, they might as well be under my jacket. What I'm going for is dropping a whole lot of hints that may or may not make sense at first, then have them snap into focus like clues in a good mystery novel.

If you really want to know about Lionheart, well... Spoiler: He's an ex-changeling for a profound and unexpected reason.

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