Waiter!

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As a waiter in a fancy restaurant, I often have to put up with unforeseeable events and irritated complaints coming from our picky customers.
This one, however, is new - even for me.

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Sanguine Eyes

Sanguine Eyes #1 · Mar 15th, 2015 · 2 · ·

LOL +1 like for that picture alone

Soundy The Robot

Soundy The Robot #2 · Mar 15th, 2015 · 1 · ·

This is God in horse word form

Grankuwaga

Grankuwaga #3 · Mar 15th, 2015 · · ·

Cute story... here an error:

„Okay, now I just need to…“

Used ,, when it should be "

Maxxarcade

Maxxarcade #4 · Mar 15th, 2015 · · ·

Neat little story! It would be cool to have a sequel :-)

P-Berry

P-Berry #5 · Mar 16th, 2015 · · ·

5742127 Thanks, it means a lot! There probably won't be a sequel since I'm all out of ideas for this story, but I'm glad you like it nonetheless!

5741877 Fixed. Thanks for pointing that out.

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Uh, yeah, thanks for your feedback!

Sanguine Eyes

Sanguine Eyes #6 · Mar 16th, 2015 · · ·

5745303 lol no problem XD

Cocaine

Cocaine #7 · Mar 17th, 2015 · · ·

man you write stories of just....weird and obscure things people would never think of. lol....I like it though. This one and Those Moments. Those two are just like....

wut. i don even know what is happening..

what is lyfe.

P-Berry

P-Berry #8 · Mar 18th, 2015 · · ·

5748590 Yup, it seems weird and obscure stuff is just my style - and pretty much the only kind of stuff that I can write without abandoning it somewhere in the middle, since -believe it or not- I'm actually pretty happy with myself when I finish a story, then take a moment to lean back and ask myself "What the f'k did I just write?"
Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!

WorldWalker128

WorldWalker128 #9 · Sep 28th, 2015 · · ·

6006407
it is if he wants to drink it and he's not into vore.

Vates Despero

Vates Despero #10 · Oct 28th, 2015 · 1 · 1 ·

6006407 6470479 No no no you fools... he ordered a little griffin with his tea! Obviously. Anybody would be upset if they ordered tea with a griffin and got tea with a pony. Can you honestly say, Plaid, that you wouldn't be upset if your tea came with a griffin instead of the pony you ordered?

OrcaBrony

OrcaBrony #11 · Feb 10th, 2016 · 2 · ·

if i got tea with a little rainbow in it i would not say any thing and take the cup and run...... come on if you got the chance to get a actual little rainbow dash for the price of tea would you take it?..........don't judge me