Clarinet cloud attempts to join the Canterlot Royal symphony and is accepted to be in the same league as Octavia and many others who play instruments. this has been his long time dream however will that dream last?
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Storm Rival
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A good start but I have some concerns.
-Learn to use Commas. It breaks up the dialog and prevents sentences from rambling on.
-How does he know Pinkie? You didn't really cover that.
Work also on proper capitalization:
Names and Proper nouns are Capitalized. So are beginnings of sentences.
I am curious to see where this goes. Withholding my thumb till something happens.
Even though this is on a hiatus, I have gone over it once more and tried to fix any mistakes that were there previously as best I could.
Thank you.