Friends
Starting a new school was a big moment for anyone. And for Fluttershy, it was the worst moment of her entire life. Or so it seemed to her. Her old school was nice, and she liked it because it was familiar to her.
Fluttershy, as it was made obvious in her name, was a shy child. While the others would play tag and other games, she would be off by herself doing her own thing. Reading a book or possibly playing with some toys in a corner.
Her teacher, her mother, even a few other kids tried to get her to come out of her shell and play with others. She wouldn't budge. And today, things were no different.
"So Shy, are you ready for your first day of your new school?" Her mother asked, momentarily looking at her in the rear view mirror as she drove.
Fluttershy shook her head. "No, Mommy. I'm not." It came out barely above a whisper. But it was stern. Unwavering. She made it clear she would rather be at home, watching tv, or out in the backyard watching nature.
"I know this is hard for you, Fluttershy," Her mother told her in a soft tone. "But trust me, it'll get better after today. Who knows. Maybe you'll make a friend."
A friend. The concept of making friends wasn't lost on Fluttershy, but it was severely hard for her to do. Her mother always said it was because she was "special" and "different" from other kids. She didn't exactly know what that meant.
Fluttershy bit her lip as the school came into view. Her stomach started to churn when her mother pulled into the parking lot, and she felt dizzy when her mother opened the door.
Canterlot Elementary School was not exactly a big school. It was a modern brick building that had two main floors, with a giant horse statue in front of the building. The windows on the first floor, Fluttershy assumed, were most likely in the first grade, second grade, and kindergarten classrooms because of all the crayon drawings hanging up in them.
She squeezed her mother's hand.
Fluttershy's mother lead her inside and she was immediately greeted with the smell of paper and bleach. Her nose wrinkled, but she said nothing.
They walked down a long hallway and Fluttershy saw all kinds of things displayed on the walls. There were green and brown construction paper leaves with students' names on them, stating how old they were and what grade they were in, drawings on a poster board that said "My First Day of School", and a couple of arts and crafts done by the bigger kids.
They passed all sorts of classrooms. The faint sound of teachers talking to students wafted out into the quiet hallway. Fluttershy's sneakers squeaked against the floor as they turned a corner, the buzz of the overhead flurecent lights making her feel uneasy.
Finally, they had stopped in front of a room that said "Ms. Cheerilee" on it in big, bright purple letters. Fluttershy jumped when her mother knocked lightly on the door.
It opened, and Fluttershy found herself staring at the legs of a woman she assumed was her teacher. She craned her neck up, and furrowed her eyebrows at the smile the woman gave her.
"Oh! This must be our new student!" Ms. Cheerilee gushed.
"Indeed," Fluttershy's mother said proudly. "Why don't you introduce yourself?"
"My....self?" Fluttershy asked quietly. She looked from her mother to Ms. Cheerilee, fright written all over her features.
"I'm sorry, she's really nervous," Fluttershy's mother apologized.
Ms. Cheerilee gave her a warm smile. "It's alright. Definitely understandable. She'll be out of her shell by the end of the day."
Fluttershy seriously doubted that.
Her mother kissed the top of her head. "Have fun, Sweetie." She told her. "I'll be back to pick you up after school, okay?"
"Okay," Fluttershy repeated.
And then her mother was gone. Back down the long hallway, out the school front entrance and into her car on her way to work. Which meant Fluttershy was stuck here, in this unfamiliar place.
Alone.
"C'mon. I've got a seat waiting for you," Cheerilee told her softly, ushering her into the classroom. She then instructed Fluttershy to stand in front of the class so that she could introduce her.
"Good morning! We have a student who just moved. Her name is Fluttershy," Ms. Cheerilee told the class. "She's a very special student and I hope you all can get a long very well with her."
A monotone chant of "Hi, Fluttershy" pierced the air and then died down.
"Why don't you go sit next to Gilda?" Ms. Cheerilee said, pointing to an empty seat.
Fluttershy looked over at the empty seat next to the girl and she was pretty sure that Gilda shouldn't be in second grade. Sighing, she went over to it, and sat down.
"Why'd she call you special? Are you retarded or somethin'?" Gilda asked, poking her with her pencil.
Fluttershy didn't respond.
She flinched when she felt a piece of paper bounce off her head.
"Hey. What kind of name is Fluttershy anyway?" Gilda asked. "That's a dumb name."
"No it's not," Fluttershy responded. "My mommy gave it to me."
"Doesn't make it less dumb. Just means you got a dumb mom." Gilda said, throwing another piece of paper at her.
"My mom is not dumb!" Fluttershy shouted, standing up. Her face turned red when she realized just how loud she was.
Ms. Cheerilee turned and walked over to her. "Is there a problem, Fluttershy?" She asked softly.
Fluttershy looked over at Gilda, who glared at her warningly. She knew that if she said anything about what just happened, it would be a problem later. "No, Ms. Cheerilee. I'm fine," She slumped back in her seat as Cheerilee returned to the front of the room.
"Good move, Buttershy," Gilda snickered.
Fluttershy wanted nothing more than to go back home.
The rest of the day went by without much conflict, Fluttershy ignoring Gilda whenever she could. That of course didn't stop the bigger girl from picking on her, but it did make her bored of it after a while and leave her alone briefly.
Fluttershy, for the most part, was relieved when Ms. Cheerilee released the class outside for recess after lunch. It meant she'd be yards away from Gilda, and she could finally be by herself in peace.
But that of course, was not likely.
Fluttershy was maybe four or five pages into her book when a shadow blocked out the sun. She didn't have to look up to see who it was. She sighed.
"I didn't know you could read," Gilda sneered. "I wonder how long it must have taken them to teach you." She snatched the book out of Fluttershy's hands and turned it around. Flipping through it, she smiled. "Just what I thought. A stupid baby book for a stupid baby."
"You're a stupid baby!" Fluttershy shouted in defiance, the adrenaline pumping through her veins as she stood up for herself. She shrieked in fear when Gilda angrily picked her up by her collar.
"Hey!"
Both girls turned around to look for the source of the voice.
Gilda's eyes settled on a rainbow haired girl standing a few feet away from them and snarled, "Stay out of this, Rainbow Dash."
"You should leave her alone!" Rainbow shouted, working her jaw.
"Oh yeah? And why's that?" Gilda asked, throwing Fluttershy on the ground before stomping over to Rainbow Dash.
They stood about the same height, though Gilda was slightly taller. She pushed Rainbow, making her stumble to the ground.
By now, the other kids on the playground had stopped what they were doing and were watching the scene unfold before them.
Gilda pushed Rainbow again. "Is it because you're retarded too?" She sneered.
Rainbow Dash angrily reared her fist back and slammed it against Gilda's face, effectively punching her in the nose.
The other kids ran over chanting, "Fight! Fight! Fight!" as Fluttershy stared in awe of the girl in front of her.
Luckily, Ms. Cheerilee broke it up before anything else could happen, and both girls were dragged off to the principal's office, leaving Fluttershy to wonder what the heck just happened.
Recess ended early, and everyone returned inside. Fluttershy looked over at the desk beside her to see that Gilda was still gone. She also noticed that the seat diagonal from her was also empty. She assumed that was Rainbow Dash's.
They both didn't return for the rest of the class.
Fluttershy packed up her things and followed the other kids outside to wait for her mother in the school yard.
While all the other kids laughed and talked with each other, Fluttershy walked down to the corner of the street and stood, waiting in silence.
She jumped when she felt a hand snake around hers, but relaxed when she saw who it was.
"Sorry," Rainbow apologized. "I didn't mean to scare you." She laughed nervously.
Fluttershy just stared at her.
"Uh..." Dash started, trying to make conversation. "You don't talk much, do you?"
Fluttershy continued to stare at her. She sighed. "Why did you help me?" She asked after a moment.
"Huh?" Dash asked, confused.
"Why did you get yourself in trouble for me? You don't even know me," Fluttershy told her, but didn't remove her hand from Rainbow's.
"Because you seem like a really awesome girl." Rainbow answered. "And you're not retarded. You're like me."
"Like you?" Fluttershy asked, eyebrows furrowing.
Rainbow nodded. "You're "special" as Ms. Cheerilee called it. But in real terms you have ADHD. Like me. She says special to be nice about it. I don't see how having that is a bad thing. I think it's pretty cool to be able to not be so one track minded as everyone else,"
"How did you-"
"That book you were reading. It wasn't a baby book, was it?" She turned to Fluttershy with a knowing smile.
Blushing, Fluttershy shook her head.
"Me and you, we gotta stick together. People don't see the world like we do. It's hard, ya know? Making friends, being on task. It's kinda why I got this soccer ball." Dash kicked up the soccer ball by her foot and started bouncing it. "It helps me think. It keeps me focused on one thing, but doesn't make it boring." She let the ball hit the sidewalk.
Fluttershy tilted her head. "That doesn't exactly answer my question."
"Gilda picks on everyone. If it's not you, it's some other kid the next day. I just...I couldn't let her go around picking on anyone. Not anymore." Rainbow looked down at the ground.
Fluttershy squeezed her hand, making Rainbow look up at her. "Thank you," She said. "No one's ever done something that nice for me."
"No prob," Rainbow responded, puffing out her chest proudly. "Just think of me as your personal protector."
"Or..." Fluttershy started. "How about a friend?"
"You wanna be friends?!" Rainbow shouted excitedly, her voice squeaking. "I-I mean, ahem, yeah bro, we can be buds." She corrected herself, deepening her voice.
Fluttershy let out a small laugh as her mother pulled up. "Oh, my mommy's here," She said, blinking when her mother blew the horn. "I better go." She gave Rainbow a giant hug. "Thanks again! Bye!"
"Yeah, bye..." Rainbow said, waving at her.
Fluttershy got in the backseat in higher spirits than when she got out that morning.
Her mother noticed. She smiled at her through the rear view mirror. "So, who was that?" She asked as she drove away.
Fluttershy turned to watch Rainbow bounce the soccer ball on her head and smiled to herself.
"A friend."
I wanted to enter the EFNW Writing Contest and this is my entry. The theme this year is friendship and I hadn't written a Flutterdash story so I said, "Eh, why not." Hope this is good enough to win! 
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I know how you feel, Flutters.
Very well written story: cute, in character, the whole bunch.
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Wittle Fluttershy is soooo cuuuuuuuute
5750331 ditto!
lol I was drawn in by that adorable picture >w<
lol +1 like for the picture alone
Id give it another dozen if I could
Because title means it all
Dude, this story should get first prize! By far one of the best stories I have read on this website. You, sir, get
and a watch!
5750401 Darn. Beat me to it!
5750549 Sorry
5750518 thank you!
Really cute!
Aaaw... that was so adorable. Great job.
I wonder where Gilda even learned the R-word at an Elementary School age
. Doesn't matter though, a very cute and relatable story
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Very sweet but this caught my eye
Doesn't that mean "oh my mommy is is here,"?
5751400 oops
Dem feels
I'll be right there with ya shy! ADHD PEEPS UNITE!
5752363 YEAH!
what was that not baby book?
cause i don't know what kind of book it was..
Exceptionally D'awwwww worthy
Aaaw, short, simple and adorable as always.
I've always wanted to see a flutterdash story made by you. Even if it's just friendshipping.
(I think the pairing works better that way anyway)
Hope you'll win the contest with this (and if not, that you'll finish close to first).
5752403 Whats ADHD?
5754241 it's a mental disorder. I have it.
5754283 Uhmmm can you describe it a bit? Imma google it but in case I don't find the correct thing.
I thought ADHD meant "Hyperactive." Seems like Shy is pretty tranquil. And how did RD know?
5754325 well having ADHD doesn't always mean you're hyper. It can also mean you can't focus as much as everyone else and you can't learn the same way as everyone else. And kids who have ADHD can usually tell when other kids have it.
5754289 it could be a hyperactive disorder, but really it just means yiu can't focus or stay on task. A lot of people with ADHD can't handle change very well, and must be given a routine or else they just do whatever they want.
5754361 Right... interesting.
Such good, much sweet.
This was amazing! Hope it wins! XD
~ Wywint
a nice humanized flutterdash story that doesn't make rainbow look bad in the slightest. And author,(don't know your username,sorry)taking inspiration from home? that is good. keep going! you are good at pull-at-your-heartstrings and you can make an established character better.good job! kudos to you
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ADHD (Attention Deficit/Hyperactivity Disorder) short form answer: A chronic condition including attention difficulty, hyperactivity, and impulsiveness
Symptoms may or may not include:
Behavioral: excitability, aggression, persistent repetition of words or actions, irritability, lack of restraint, fidgeting, hyperactivity, or impulsivity
Cognitive: short attention span, problem paying attention, difficulty focusing, forgetfulness, or absent-mindedness
Mood: anger, excitement, mood swings, or boredom
Psychological: anxiety or depression
Also common: learning disability
I should know, I had it growing up. And no, just because you can't pay attention in class all the time does not mean you have ADD/ADHD. You try putting a kid in the same room for eight hours a day, doing what is basically clerical work, and don't expect them to get fidgety or a bit hyperactive.
5756337 eh i have it and that's how it was explained to me.
"Why don't you go sit next to Gilda?"
OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow. Love it!! You are so gonna win that contest!
well do you mind if I put your article translated into Chinese
IT IS AWESOME
Never insult someone else's mom. Ever.
How old are these kids? I was under the impression they were five but clearly I was wrong. Not even a five year old Gilda would call others retards.
I hate you Gilda...
5766649 they're supposed to be in second grade
5766734 Oh, okay.
Thanks!
This story was nice. I really enjoyed it.
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There are a few things to keep in mind about ADHD. First, it tends to express differently in boys and girls with girls being more withdrawn and boys being more typically hyperactive in behavior. In that sense Dash's expression would be more typical of a boy and Fluttershy's would be more typical of a girl. They use to distinguish between ADHD and ADD but they decided they were the same thing with some of the symptoms differing.
The way it made more sense to me, who both has ADHD and a degree in psychology, is that your brain has too many active receptors, thus your mind wanders because few things can fill up your attention. This means that things don't always filter at the same speed and some things will draw the attention when the person would normally be filling up their attention with what they are focusing on. But when something does fill up the attention of someone with ADHD it means they hyper focus. It's almost like a high where they are finally having their brain activity pushed, which is something the brain likes very much. I believe this is why they use hyper in the name, they don't use the most common application of the word because they are using the scientific application in relation to whats' going on in your brain. The reason hyper focusing occurs more easily in ADHD brains is because they aren't use to keeping some attention in reserve.
A lot of the things that happen in an ADHD brain are a result in socialization. This is where depression, anxiety, sometimes even anger and mood issues can come into play. A kid who has ADHD often operators slightly differently than others, thus they often don't quite mesh with others and are excluded and picked on.
When it comes to treatment almost all drugs are stimulants. This is because it helps the brain receive more information/fill up the receptors. In fact, in really extreme cases it's been known that people with ADHD can't sleep because everything draws their attention. In instances like these some people will even turn to really messed up drugs, like meth which can keep people up for days, in order to fall asleep. Fortunately, cases that severe are extremely rare. Most people who have trouble sleeping will take something like coffee if they are having a really bad day because the caffeine helps them calm down and fall asleep.
Don't do drugs kids.
Still, it was a cute story. Very true to many normal experiences with ADHD as a kid.
5784441 everything in my entire life makes so much sense now. I just thought i was shy and that my depression came out of nowhere but this literally made everything so clear!
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Well, if you live in New York I could understand both things
JK, glad I could help. Stay happy and healthy.
Did this story win the contest? If not, then what story did? (If this comment makes you feel uncomfortable, just say so. Don't just ignore me. ...No offense.) (please answer this comment tomorrow)
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
5786308 they just started judging so i have no idea if it won or not. But if it does id sure be happy.
so cute!
What a sweet little story
I think you might be the best writer on thins site. no other that i have see can write stories that make me laugh, cry, that make so in to the story and this is no different definitely a new favorite.
Out of curiosity, what makes books for kids with ADHD different from other books? I've never seen one before.
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Best explanation of it all.
Great story with a perfect amount of cute. Gilda is still an ass and she can rot in hell for all I care.
5859854 nothing's really different. It's just that some kids with ADHD are faster readers and can read better than most children their age. So the book Fluttershy waa reading was a book way above average reading level. There aren't actually books for kids with adhd. (At least i don't think so but i could be wrong)
5868853 Oh, okay then.
BEFORE READING: The cover image alone makes me wanna read it, it's so adorable!
AFTER READING: OH MY GODS, THE FEELS ARE OVERWHELMING!!!