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Master Titta


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Button Mash is considered "Other" rather than "OC" in the character tags, thanks to his one appearance in canon (Hearts and Hooves Day episode).

:pinkiehappy: That is an awesome description. Haven't read it yet though but it has me curious.

5722845 Two, actually. He appeared in Ponyville Confidential as well lined up to see the funny news in the paper with the other fillies and colts.

Button is a serious dumb ass. That's all I can say.

I thumbed it down because of all the... well I could tell you but I'll just let Weird Al sing about it. :pinkiehappy:

My favorite song for a while... :pinkiecrazy:

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Eh, whatever. Nobody would have taken it anyways.


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Ok.

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So improve, that is what I am doing to my stories. My second chapter is taking a bit longer due to the fact that I am putting in a a lot more effort into editing it. Also, don't be so negative about your creation. I thought it was funny, honestly. Only problem was the broken sentences. Fix those and I can see that people who down vote it have no reason to. If you need someone to edit your stuff just ask. :derpytongue2: I am not perfect at it but I do have an okay grasp on the subject where it is understandable.

Also I am a very tolerable person when it comes to reading creepy pasta like fics. As well as fics that depict disturbing images. ((Just have a hard time in writing some. Although, I have recently had some encouragement from an individual I didn't expect it from.)) Please, just do not write me in a gelding session. :fluttercry:

Otherwise keep on writing! :pinkiehappy:

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That video is amusing and all, but come on man, that's not how you tell someone that they need to work on their writing mechanics.

Plus... that video seems to be, at least in part, comedy about the frustrations of hyper-sensitive grammar nazis. You may have unintentionally mocked yourself there.

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So is English your first language? I'm just curious because when I read this:

“Yes, it can be! Now quick, go to the hospital to remove me from this place full of life's seeds, before I decide to open my way inside you and cause more misery to you, oh worthless clod!” She shouted.

I thought either you aren't fluent in English, or you are fluent, and you've created a really interesting 'voice' for your characters. That manner of speaking is really something. It's some pretty golden crackfic material. In fact, this whole story seems to come from a really creative place that I'd like to see more of.

I also have a question. It seems at first blush that the premise here was supposed to be 'Let's show how absurdly unrealistic the whole cock vore thing is and have a good laugh!" but then it got replaced by something even more unrealistic and absurd. Like for example, the testicles are not where semen comes from. Most of it is from the seminal vesicle and the prostate. Plus most obviously--there's no air in there. Etc, etc. So my question is: was that intentional? Like, set up the story like that for irony purposes?

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So is English your first language?

No, it's Roman.

I also have a question. It seems at first blush that the premise here was supposed to be 'Let's show how absurdly unrealistic the whole cock vore thing is and have a good laugh!" but then it got replaced by something even more unrealistic and absurd. Like for example, the testicles are not where semen comes from. Most of it is from the seminal vesicle and the prostate. Plus most obviously--there's no air in there. Etc, etc. So my question is: was that intentional? Like, set up the story like that for irony purposes?

Well, the intention was to use all the irrealistic tropes of Cockvore (like semen coming from testicles, or air begin in there), then swap out the "semen can dissolve anything" part nad putting am ore active victim in. So, yeah, ironic purposes.

Haha, this is fucking great.

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Hahahaa!! Yeah, it does mock me a little bit because I am guilty of being a grammar Nazi. Part of why I posted it, other than comedic value and a fun song. True, it may of been in poor taste or misunderstood. Apologies to you Master Titta if you took the video too seriously. :pinkiesad2:

I could have posted what I felt were all the correct sentence structures. If I am going to do that then I'd rather just edit the story on their behalf. Hence why I did offer assistance with editing. Current or future stories.

Again, I do apologies <-- Wrong:Correct --> apologize for any insult the video may of sent off towards anyone. It is and was in a bad taste of humor. Although, I still find it funny... :pinkiesad2:

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Neat, I only know English... which makes it sad when I screw up sentence structures.... :pinkiecrazy:

Still, if you would want help with editing in any future or current stories, just let me know! I write a lot but end up deleting the sections I write. I wouldn't call it writer's block, not exactly, more of a yearning of perfection. One in which I am hoping to achieve on my next chapter. At least as close as possible. :twilightsmile:

Again, I do apologize for any insult you took to heart.

Sincerely,

HeavensRaptor

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HAHAHAHA! >.< AWESOME! Such horribleness!! LOL

Ohhh... so, can we be friends? :pinkiehappy:

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"Semen isn't acid, stupid! Get real! God! Now if you'll excuse me, I'm just going to go spelunking inside your crotch and bite off your balls while breathing comfortably and having conversations with you!"

Now that I know it was intentional, that's some funny shit :pinkiecrazy:

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Of course we can be friends.

You know, I don't see any of the regulars here. Where are y'all?

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It's not worth their time. that, or they liked it somehow.

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Well one of them added it to the Badfic groups so...

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Also—author: you're trolling with this piece of shit...

Right? :rainbowderp:

Don't care if it's bad i'm reading just to see how she gets torture there is. I'll let you know 1ce I finish this but for now, i've got to get some sleep...

Don't care if it's bad i'm reading just to see how she gets torture there is. I'll let you know 1ce I finish this but for now, i've got to get some sleep...
5724793 Well looks like there's hope left

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Yes, but it doesn't melt flesh. That's what I think he meant to say.

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Sperm isn’t acid

Yeah, it's actually basic. At least the male ejaculate is. Female ejaculate is acidic.

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(I couldn't resist. So sorry.)

Ouch!
Well that was a decent story...at least memorable...
If only he was reading a VORE magazine instead.

Julia #29 · May 7th, 2015 · · 1 ·

I actually laughed.

I have not read this yet but it seems right up my ally.

Comment posted by The Lunar Toaster deleted Jun 22nd, 2015

:rainbowlaugh: that ending, lol.

this was great, i loved it

"How about no?" He said, as he turned Diamond up-side down, before lodging her inside her sperm hole with a very loud moan of pleasure and a likewise loud groan from the pink filly.

"How about no?" He said, as he turned Diamond up-side down, before lodging her inside his sperm hole with a very loud moan of pleasure and a likewise loud groan from the pink filly.

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