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There better be clop soon.
In the words of Marshmallow Horse, I know where you live.
Well. This certainly will be interesting.
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You keep demanding clop, and you'll get THE clop.
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I should hope so.
Cool, an update!
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Inorite? Took me long enough.
6328626 As long as it doesn't get abandoned, It's fine with me! Like how the fic "Foal Necromancer" was really interesting, but then one day the author quit fimfiction altogether. Didn't even leave a blog post.
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I'm going to try to keep readers updated on progress (or lack thereof) more regularly. Following me is a good way to do that, if you haven't already. Also, if you're tracking the story, you should receive a notification for any blog posts I make with the story tagged. And if all else fails, I have a section on my user page that I update with the latest progress on all my projects (editing and writing) on a somewhat random basis.
6328667 That's nice of you! I think the abandoned account was named 'kytranis' or something. It's got over a hundred weeks since the last activity.
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Yeah, I hate when that happens. I also hate when I come across an interesting story that I don't know has pretty much been necro'd until after I've read it.
6328728 I know that feel.
ok this is a vary good chapter it is really setting things for a possible relationship with Faran.
now I saw one thing in this chapter that hade my full attention George Carlin. as I am 51 I have hade the plusher of seeing him live twice before he passed away and to say he was a master is a understatement. I found this little vid George Carlin - Airplane Safety now it is pore quality but this is the stand up that During and the author was doing and you JimboTex worked this is to the chapter perfectly. job well dune.
Harts Fire
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That was the basic idea. Well, there was also a bit of this in there:
JUST FUCK ALREADY!
Get enough booze and give them two weeks. After that time they'll never leave the bedroom.
Looks like he'll be enjoying seeing Raindrops a lot more later on.
I will do no such-
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I'll do it tomorrow.
Now the fun begins.
I saw what you did there. You know what you did there. I approve of this.
I didn't even have to finish the sentence to see where this was going.
I happened to notice a lack of a certain mint green unicorn during Derren's arrival. May Twilight have mercy on his soul.
I can see where these relationships are going, and it's going to be a fun ride.
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That's what Dash said!
Drunk Derren: Goddammit, you fucking bitch! Why does it feel so good to fuck you?
Drunk Faran: Because I'm more of a mare than you'll ever be! Now shut up and fuck me harder!
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Pretty much.
Maybe, but not with Cadance. She's a happily-married mare, for Luna's sake!
Scary was deemed a security risk and not allowed inside.
And you were right:
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Let's just say that Lyra had an excuse for not being there. Fear not, Harpflank will be putting in an appearance soon enough.
6329842 Those were good responses.
I hope Derren is ready to meet
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Hope you won't be too disappointed: this version of Lyra won't be human-obsessed. However, she will come to appreciate the Magic of Fingers.
6329957 Then I have much to look forward to. I also surprised myself since I saw how close I am to getting out the first clop chapter as well.
The guy has been in Equestria for roughly a week and already he's having sexual issues with the natives, he's moving Quick eh?....or rather, he's libido is.
Absolutely loved all the comedy in this chapter. Seemed a bit heavier than previous chapters, and I loved every moment of it!
Love it!
need more
6329957 I get the feeling that is going to be a recurring theme. After all, he already has his first convert.
Also, out of curiosity, what's Twilight's issue with quesadillas?
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You remember that throwaway line from Party Pooped?
I decided to run with it like a prat.
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Thanks, guys. Love all the support I'm getting for this thing! Seriously.
6330783 Ah, thanks.
Anyways, I am very much looking forwards to the next chapter and am especially hoping for more banter with Rainbow. The way they play off each other is just great and I can only imagine it will get better with Faran in the mix for even more sniping.
6329842 what's wrong with quesadillas?
Oh snap, nvm, saw that comment with video. I'm still at the middle of last season :'D
This seems familiar...
Hmm...I wonder if a certain arachnid's gonna show up...
I notice people are reacting to the Flower in Bon Bon's hair. I wonder what that is about. Can someone tell me what that's about?
Loving Derren and Faran. Completely and utterly. Their dynamic is the same as when me and my lady got together. Reminds me of old times. (I'm 23). I WANT MORE SNIPPING AND FLIRTING. They don't see it, but that's flirting.
Can't wait for more. Keep up the awesome work hey.
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It's a reference to Bon Bon's Acceptance, a totally awesome clopfic by Pusspuss. (You might want to read the prequel, Lyra's Confession, first if you haven't already. )
Also, glad you're liking the Faran x Derren interactions. Funny thing is, she was originally going to only have a few scenes in this (all in the first chapter), but I got such a positive response to her (especially from my good friend BikerPon3) that I decided to give her a larger role in the story.
Pretty good so far. I like how you're not rushing it TOO much. I mean, it still feels like I'm reading through a harem VN.
Regardless, Faran is by far my favorite right now. In fact, I think she really makes the story 'pop' so to speak. I find that when she's included in the scene, it tends to be more enjoyable over-all.
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I hope you mean the comparison to a harem visual novel in a good way.
You know, it always amuses me how Faran has kind of become the Ensemble Darkhorse (pardon the pun) of this fic. I never would've expected it when I first conceived of her character.
Hmm. May be a little too fast on some fronts he has only been their 11 days.
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I just tweaked the relevant scene so that he's not rushing into sexytimes with the natives.
So is the MC an idiot or not? His intelligence seems to drop every time you try to make a joke, and it's getting really fucking annoying.
I thought I recognized that flower... and then the Author's note confirmed it. Kudos, by the way. Over twenty years ago, Papa Eddings unapologetically forced me to find my dictionary to figure out what he was saying to me. Now you made me do it for 'palliative' a chapter or two back. Getting me to Google translate the Gaelic half counts also, I suppose, since my Gaelic is mostly inferential... and bad. Lastly, I have that Carlin bit on my hard-drive, so yeah you hit a lot of high points for me. Faran is odd... but I spent two decades knowing her namesake; the fact that their personalities have a fair bit of sync just increases the oddness. I don't say that negatively though.
This is off to a good start; Derren makes me cringe fairly often but that's entirely believable. I'd do no better in his shoes. Upvoted and looking forward to wherever this is headed.
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Glad someone else thinks I'm doing something right with this fic.
Also, glad to see another Eddings fan. And yeah, he had me running for the dictionary several times myself. Probably the main reason why I can use words like palliative with some degree of correctness.
Okay, now that I've said, "I love you," for ten hours straight, on to the next chapter!
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I'm guessing I've found another Bon Bon's Acceptance fan.
6401382 I remember reading the Belgeriad and The Mallorean searies. I didn't know Eddings had written more. Now I have to do some reading. Also, great job on this story, just about died when Deven told Twilight about what he told the Institute scientists.
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Yeah, Eddings wrote a fair bit more than just the Beglariad and the Malloreon.
The Elenium and the Tamuli are my personal favorites, but I enjoyed the Beglariad and the Malloreon.
*grin* Gotta love that classic Blazing Saddles gambit.
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Fun fact: this is my all-time favorite scene from Blazing Saddles:
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Fun fact: The executives told Mel Brooks to cut that scene. He said he did, but left it in.
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Best moment of that movie
Is that a reference to "Blazing Saddles"?
I don’t think it was fair of Twilight to blame him for the faux pas with the institute. His comment wasn’t malicious; it was neutral. They interpreted it negatively which was not his fault. Also, he has professed not to be an expert in pony culture. You can’t expect him to be, Twilight. If you’re concerned about him making a mistake, then you should have been there to help him communicate, Twilight.