"Sister, why don't you try being more assertive?"
Words like arrows, pierced Celestia's thought, making her think more about everything that has happened, and the result from it being of anger.
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Too short.
Not bad...
Outburst? That's what she should have been doing the whole time.
That was fun....SEND IN TWILIGHT SPARKLE! Lol
You should make more this could be a very interesting adventure for our dear sun goddess.
I'm not making much more, this has nothing more than what I dug up here, taking a total of about one hour to write.
Why do the ambassadors address Celestia without her title?
would they not call her PRINCESS Celestia?
Other than that. Great little piece.
Awesome.
Although I'd really like to see a sequel!
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Thats one point in why this is written. Every story here on Fimfiction has something about disrespectful people addressing celestia without her title. Very few don't.
I reviewed your story tonight you can find the review here