6427016 To dust off an old Relic: Patience is a Virtue
Im not sure when the next chapter is coming out, my schedule is pretty packed as is. Next chance that comes around I assure you that the next chapter will more than likely be coming out before 2016
I am so intrigued to read more on how this will turn out; if he could barely take on scootaloo, will he have the stamina to take on all three. I guess we'll have to find out next time on Dragon Ball Z.
To everyone who is keeping track of this story, it may be awhile before I update again, what with my school schedule slowing me down. combine that with my work schedule and it gives me very little time to think.
Sorry for draggin this out longer than it needs to be.
6429345 looks at the calaender and says "Well darn it's 2016 already mate when we getting a new chapter" seriously lol I've seen the story and it's prequel for a while now finally read it to see its been forever since it's been updated. either way really liked what's here so far.
Alex saw that she was waiting for something from him, so he decided to speak up. “I really didn’t force her into anything. When I found her I could tell that she was lost and scared so I took her here to try and keep her safe, honest.”
Why did he say that? He can't understand them, so why would he assume that THAT is what they were arguing about?
Scootaloo looked at her friend start to cry, and all the anger inside of her faded away; replaced by regret. Without hesitation she ran up and embraced the crying filly, trying her best to calm her down.
You know, I couldn't help but imagine how Scootaloo rubbed her cum-stained bukkaked face into Sweetie's! Interestingly enough she didn't even react. I mean, shouldn't there be a reaction to the cum on her face? Just asking you for a bit of saucy humor here, considering it sadly wasn't mentioned.
You got me quite curious with beastiality, since I was wondering if he would buy a dog (he wanted one as I read in one of the chapters), but then I realized that this tag might not come true. I mean, did you really mean beastiality or do you count HumanxFoal already as beastiality?
“Look, you know I didn’t mean any of that, right? I just didn’t want you to be mad at Alex. He’s the reason I’m safe right now, and not wandering around outside in the cold.” (——
~so ... When does twilight show up to bring the fillys back ( and possibly Alex ) ?
Why dont you makr the chapters longer?
6325543 cause im switching the characters that are focused on continuously
Oh alright, thanks.
Not to be rude or anything but... WHENS THE NEXT CHAPTER
6427016 To dust off an old Relic: Patience is a Virtue
Im not sure when the next chapter is coming out, my schedule is pretty packed as is. Next chance that comes around I assure you that the next chapter will more than likely be coming out before 2016
I am so intrigued to read more on how this will turn out; if he could barely take on scootaloo, will he have the stamina to take on all three. I guess we'll have to find out next time on Dragon Ball Z.
6453163 What exactly suggests she was in heat?
6453631 My bad I confused part of the story with a recent reading called "Adolescence" thank you.
6453981 oh LOL
>>KomodoBrony
It's was just a joke bro
No pressure on getting it out A.S.A.P.
Besides gives us ALL something to look forward to
P.s. nice Story picture... So fuzzy
To everyone who is keeping track of this story, it may be awhile before I update again, what with my school schedule slowing me down. combine that with my work schedule and it gives me very little time to think.
Sorry for draggin this out longer than it needs to be.
6429345 looks at the calaender and says "Well darn it's 2016 already mate when we getting a new chapter" seriously lol I've seen the story and it's prequel for a while now finally read it to see its been forever since it's been updated. either way really liked what's here so far.
I commented this on another chapter, but once again:
a.) Don't label what perspective it's in. It's completely unneeded.
b.) This is NOT 2nd Person! This is 3rd Person!
Alex saw that she was waiting for something from him, so he decided to speak up. “I really didn’t force her into anything. When I found her I could tell that she was lost and scared so I took her here to try and keep her safe, honest.”
Why did he say that? He can't understand them, so why would he assume that THAT is what they were arguing about?
I love that picture. . . Makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside.
(ntm: FUCKING ADORABLE)
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oh yeah thanks for reminding me; I need to put the artist's name in the description.
7619518 XD
You know, I couldn't help but imagine how Scootaloo rubbed her cum-stained bukkaked face into Sweetie's! Interestingly enough she didn't even react. I mean, shouldn't there be a reaction to the cum on her face? Just asking you for a bit of saucy humor here, considering it sadly wasn't mentioned.
You got me quite curious with beastiality, since I was wondering if he would buy a dog (he wanted one as I read in one of the chapters), but then I realized that this tag might not come true. I mean, did you really mean beastiality or do you count HumanxFoal already as beastiality?
Looking forward to the next chapter.
well, Scootaloo did have a surprise in store after all... Just maybe not this exact one...
Oh I known a reason she one or more end up pregnant.