So her tracking spell has a range limit? Just asking since it wasn't really explained and confused me as to why they were searching like that in the first place. Maybe you could/should explain that with the tracking spell in the chapter?
8224171 Funny story, that bit was recommended to me by my editor MysticGuitar, he thought that it would be a clever joke, and it seems to be grabbing attention
So much better than the original...cudos
I'm really not sure what you're alluding to with "shure."
So her tracking spell has a range limit? Just asking since it wasn't really explained and confused me as to why they were searching like that in the first place. Maybe you could/should explain that with the tracking spell in the chapter?
7278605 She was wrecking their score.
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That makes no sense. "protect the score?"
But she misheard it as something completely different?
No, that can't be it. Besides, there aren't scores in karaoke.
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It wasn't karaoke - it was a Dance Dance Revolution-style arcade machine. She jumped into their game and was ruining their score.
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Funny story, that bit was recommended to me by my editor MysticGuitar, he thought that it would be a clever joke, and it seems to be grabbing attention
weird reactions from the humans TBH...
This chapter had me cracking up.